A possible version:

Online friends

Recently, people have had a heated discussion about whether students should make friends online. Different people hold different views.

Some of them agree with this view. The reasons are as follows: First, we can make more friends with others online. Second, we can express our ideas freely. Besides, making friends online helps to learn English.

However, others object to this view. The reason why they disagree is that they think online dating is a waste of time and has a bad influence on their study. What's more, students are likely to be cheated online.

Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, making friends online is good for us, because it is very convenient and can broaden our horizons.

Good luck with everything,

Yours,

Li Hua

Test analysis: This is an argumentative essay. The first paragraph agrees with the views of people who make friends online, the second paragraph opposes the views of students making friends online, and the third paragraph expresses the author's own views. In the first paragraph, when stating the reasons for approval, the authors use first and second, they can express their feelings and make the article hierarchical and smooth. The second paragraph is the opinions of the opponents and their reasons. The author did not repeat the method in the second paragraph, but used transition in addition. The third paragraph is the author's own opinion. In my opinion/from my point of view, it is used to express my views, which is clear and has its own convincing reasons. A good composition should have complete points, clear expression, accurate use of phrases and sentence patterns, attention to avoid spelling and grammatical errors, and skillful use of good phrases. For example, as follows, wasting time to get acquainted, as for friendship, broadening our horizons and enriching our knowledge, we use the key phrases we have learned and the good sentence patterns in this article are also highlights. For example, chatting online is also helpful to our language learning. /They say that making friends online is a waste of time and should be spent more meaningfully/Only in this way can making friends online be valuable to us. Skillful and correct use of these sentence patterns can reflect the level of candidates and add points to their own articles.

Comments: the writing method of this kind of composition should pay attention to careful examination of the topic, and you can write three paragraphs: in favor; Objection; Your opinion. Pay attention to the use of interlanguage. Do it: the main points should be complete, the expression should be clear and definite, the phrases and sentence patterns should be accurate, attention should be paid to avoiding spelling and grammar mistakes, and good phrases should be used skillfully.