Help make a few sentences (about rhetoric)

(1) Substituting features for noumenon

"Brother Yi is a good fist stick, and these two strokes must be enough for him." The hunchback in the corner of the wall cheered up. (Lu Xun's "Medicine") "hunchback" is a human characteristic, replacing the hunchback five young masters.

(2) Substituting proper names for class names

Zhuge Liang is used to substitute smart people, and Lei Feng is used to substitute people who help others.

(3) Abstraction by Concrete Generation

Under the leadership of China's * * * Production Party, the people of China defeated the imperialist rule in China with millet and rifles.

In the example, millet is used to replace military supplies, and rifle is used to replace weapons and equipment, which concretizes and visualizes abstract concepts.

(4) Borrow the part for the whole

Don't take the needle and thread from the masses (borrow everything from the common people with a needle and thread)

Bread will exist (borrow food with bread)

(5) Borrow the result. Reasons

I will never regret it when my belt widens (borrow miss with my belt)

china's Emperor, craving beauty that might shake an empire (borrow beauty with my country) < p Old felt hat friends hardly believe their ears. " (Ye Shengtao overcharged three or five fights) "Old felt hat" is a hat worn by rice farmers to replace the rice farmers themselves.

(7) Borrowing tools to replace the original name

"I, the host, had dismounted, my guest had boarded his boat, and we raised our cups and wished to drink-but, alas, there was no music." (Bai Juyi's Pipa) "Tube" refers to wind instruments, and "string" refers to stringed instruments. Here, the author replaces "music" with musical instruments.

being replaced by an official position

"but who of them all was crying the most?? This Jiujiang official. My blue sleeve was wet. " (Bai Juyi's Pipa Trip) Replace Bai Juyi with Sima.

⑼ Borrow the premises to replace people

"Dressed men and women, get off the premises." (Yuan Hongdao's Tiger Hill) "House" is a place to replace the poor.

⑽ Borrow signs instead of noumenon

"Sir, can't you give cash, Yuan Shikai?" (Ye Shengtao overcharged three or five fights) Yuan Shikai's head printed on the old silver dollar was used as a symbol to replace the silver dollar.

⑾ Take the abstract as the concrete

The general is persevering and sharp, and takes the lead. (abstract "Jian" metonymic armor, "Rui" metonymic weapon)

1 "

The red-headed ghost defected to Chao Gai and went to Liangshan.

glasses didn't come to class again today.

Our times need thousands of Lei Feng in Qian Qian.

let's get to the threshing floor and split up today.

political power comes from the barrel of a gun.

a mountain laid on horseback.

Chanting with low eyebrows and no writing

Specializing in writing and ink, holding the belly for a strong man (holding the belly is the result of laughter)

Yuba solar energy enables you to bathe (desire) at will

If you know it, you will understand it; if you don't understand it, you won't understand it. Don't put an elephant in your nose (photograph).

The night is long and the road is long. I might as well forget it and not say it.

I wish you good luck ~ ~ ~

1. Eight rhetorical methods

Metaphor:

History is a growing mountain, and we can never see its top, so we can only look down at the road of our predecessors and the scenery of the past. (Fan Yuling's "The Story of White Gate Willow")

Just think about it, heaven and earth are factories, deep valleys are workshops, and the mountains are surrounded by arches. Where in the world does a textile factory have such a scale? (Wu Boxiao's "Remember a Spinning Wheel")

Among the glossy green leaves, there are thousands of big flowers with double petals, so red, and each flower is like a flaming flame. (Yang Shuo's Ode to Camellia)

This is a kind of purple flower like a Jason Chung, and it is densely clustered like a chrysanthemum full of stars. (Qin Mu's Flowers of the Grassland)

We should ban all empty talk. But the main and first task is to throw the foot-binding of those long and smelly lazy women into the trash can quickly. (Mao Zedong < Opposing stereotyped Party writing >)

personification:

Spring breeze boldly combs the willows, while night rain hides the flowers from others.

Short and tall weeping willows, stroking fast-maturing crops with pale green leaves; Dense reeds carefully guard the wildflowers that secretly open under their feet. (The above two cases are from Guo Xiaochuan's Autumn in Tuanbowa)

Truth always sneaks into the heart of a brave man and shows him the magic of wisdom.

The willow tree is listening to the song of spring by the river. When the breeze blows, it shakes its branches like pigtails, as if to say, "Spring is so beautiful!"

pots of flowers and plants wake up from the silence of winter, shake off all the dead branches and leaves and put on new clothes again.

parallelism:

Love is a piece of sunshine that shines in winter, making the poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is a spring that appears in the desert, making people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which makes the lonely and helpless people get spiritual comfort.

Still life is the beauty of solidification, while moving scenery is the beauty of flow; The straight line is the beauty of fluency, and the curve is the beauty of tactfulness; A noisy city is a bustling beauty, and a quiet village is an elegant beauty. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to find beauty and a heart to feel beauty.

time is life, time is speed, and time is power.

The lake is so clear that you can see the fish playing in the water. How obedient the lake is, if the wind doesn't blow, he won't make trouble; How lovely the lake is. When the wind comes, he pouts playfully and blows out ripples.

The fallen leaves hover in the air, composing a grateful movement, which is the gratitude of the tree to the earth that nourishes it; Baiyun is floating in the blue sky, painting touching pictures, which is Baiyun's gratitude to the blue sky that nurtured it. Because of gratitude, there will be this colorful society, and because of gratitude, there will be sincere friendship. Because gratitude makes us understand the true meaning of life.

rhetorical question:

The oranges in Huainan are big and sweet. But this kind of orange tree can only bear a small and bitter accumulation when it comes to Huaibei, isn't it because of the different water and soil?

aren't those little black dots parked on the wire just cute little swallows?

If it weren't for people's hard work, wouldn't this place be a barren slope full of thorns?

how can you reap without plowing? How can you have knowledge without studying?

Isn't this little girl's innocent and beautiful mind just like a budding flower bud?

Repeatedly:

The heavy noise made by hundreds of waist drums collided with the cliff with wild jujube trees in the four fields, and the cliff suddenly turned into a cowhide drum, only heard rumbling, rumbling, rumbling.

The heavy noise made by hundreds of waist drums collided with the hearts of all the jumbled audience, and the hearts of the audience suddenly turned into cowhide drums, which were also rumbling, rumbling and rumbling.

In my back garden, you can see two trees outside the wall, one is jujube, and the other is jujube.

As you probably know, in China, the emperor is from China, and the people around him are also from China.

Snow has fallen, like catkins, like reeds, like dandelion seeds flying in the wind, and the snow has fallen. (Guo Feng < Winter in Songfangxi-for children >)

Contrast:

Deer are seen when the tree is deep, but bells are not heard at noon in the stream.

Castle Peak is fortunate to bury loyal bones, while white iron casts innocent courtiers.

Some people are alive, but they are dead; Some people are dead, but he is still alive.

Time is the wealth of the diligent and the treasure house of the creator; Time is the burden of the lazy and the grave of the waster.

Some people died on the battlefield, others died under torture, but our monitor died in his post-in front of the cooker.

Duality:

The axe breaks down the old world, and the sickle opens up a new one.

ideal, the banner of life; A practical and successful way.

the sound of wind, rain, and reading is audible; Family affairs, state affairs and what's going on in the world care about everything.

when the sword is sharpened, the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold.

wildfire never quite consumes them, they are tall once more in the spring wind.

I'm ten years old and have written thousands of articles about Yu Yong.

Exaggeration:

Pull up the mountain with great strength and make the world angry.

the sand-sea deepens with fathomless ice, the gloom is bleak and Wan Li is condensed.

when the pen falls, it scares the wind and rain, and the poem makes you cry.

next door, thousands of people are drunk.

farmers all say that when they see such bright green seedlings, they can smell the smell of white bread.

Description:

I plucked up my courage, groped with both hands, stepped into the building and climbed the stairs carefully. When I turned to the second floor, a soft light dipped into my sight and drove away the fear in my heart.

The earthen stove in the house is the children's favorite place. Grandpa doesn't cook here. When we play with Tibetan cats, we all scramble to get into it. It's the safest place, but when we climb out, our faces are covered in black, which is inevitable to be scolded by adults and sometimes beaten, but after a while, we forget the pain and get into it again.

Suddenly, when the door on the left side of the third floor opened, a teenage girl came out, wearing short hair and hairpin, with a lovely appearance. She was holding a small medicine bottle and a small candle that I felt very kind to. She went to replace the little wax head that was about to burn out and lit a new small candle.

Everyone put their handkerchiefs on the table, and the teacher paced around and watched everyone's works.

The whole lonely mountain seems to belong to them only. On the path under the shade of trees, they walk aimlessly. She thinks it will be good if they keep walking like this.

Description:

There is silence all around, and occasionally ducks quack, but they can't see it at all.

The sun shows half a round face, slowly rises from the floating clouds, and finally completely jumps out of the white fog. In a flash, the crimson fireball suddenly gives off dazzling light, which coats the clouds and fog with soft orange.

The "one arrow" in the courtyard is also popular. The whole grass has only one leaf, the base of which is extended downwards and looks like a shield. In addition, an ear is pulled out at the base, which is as straight as a spear and pale yellow, so it is also called "contradictory grass".

I looked around, and the small houses that have sprung up everywhere, with white walls and blue tiles, are full of modern flavor.

There is a small medicine bottle with a small burning candle on it at the corner of the stair handrail. Although the light is very weak, it looks so bright in this dark corridor.

It's green and rainy, and the outline of the distant mountains is clear, so she counts the clouds passing by the top of the mountain. The wind is cool, flapping her hair. It's getting dark, it's getting dark, there are patrol boats on the lake, and the people on board loudly urge the cruise ship to hurry up and hurry up. The muffled thunder rolled and rolled in the clouds.

Lyric:

I love Jiangnan, my hometown and old wooden houses.

I can't help but get excited when I look at her back coming downstairs. How the little girl's heart is like the candlelight in this corridor!

after a long rain, the earth smiles like a girl, so charming and affectionate, youthful and beautiful.

Please throw yourself into the blue sky after the rain, blend into the land of youth after the rain, gallop and roam freely, sing and wave freely, with a solid gait and high spirits. On this clean and clear canvas, carefully conceive and pour the colored pens of hope!

ah, grass, it is you who make the land of China full of green, and it is you who add luster to the motherland.

Comment:

The creator often endows the noble soul with the humble body, just as we always hide the most precious things in the most inconspicuous place in our home in our daily life.

History is a long volume that is serialized continuously. People can look through the written part, but they can't predict the author's intention in the next step. People can choose the way the story develops, but they can't get rid of the manipulation of fate and time.

If you are lucky enough to meet a wise master, then a gentleman can hold his head high, but in fact there are more bad kings. Therefore, from Qu Yuan to Yue Fei to Shi Kefa in this book, gentlemen in history will always be defeated by villains.

Courage is my beacon, which illuminates my voyage forward. It tells me that learning is the same. I need to be brave, I am not afraid when I encounter problems, but I need to be brave, I need the courage to overcome difficulties, and I need the confidence to succeed.

Courage is the paving stone for success, and it is the beacon for success. Success is always mixed with many setbacks, and the golden key to overcome setbacks is courage.

metonymy refers to borrowing a thing B (borrowing body) related to the thing A (ontology) to replace the thing A, that is, replacing the name of the ontology with the name of the borrowing body, which is also called renaming, substituting and replacing. The substitute is called "ontology", and the substitute is called "borrowing body". The "ontology" does not appear and is replaced by "borrowing body".

The difference between metonymy and metonymy:

There is a real relationship between metonymy ontology and metonymy. Generally speaking, this relationship is quite close; The noumenon and the vehicle of metonymy are essentially different things, but people connect them through association according to their similarities. Metonymy and metonymy are similar. Metonymy means that there is a generation in metaphor, and metonymy is a generation rather than a self-evident; Metonymy focuses on "similarity" and metonymy focuses on "relevance"; Metonymy can be changed into simile, but metonymy cannot.

features: renaming, borrowing the names of other things closely related to this thing to replace this thing. Focus on relevance (as distinguished from metaphor).

Function:

1. Express thoughts and feelings.

2. Highlight features and strengthen key points.

3. Make the writing concise and the meaning implicit.

4. Change complicated words.

Proper use of metonymy can highlight the essential characteristics of things, enhance the image of language, and make the writing concise and concise, and the language rich in variety and sense of humor.

Basic types