Composition title: Thoughts on the Sound of Music

Keywords: Thoughts on Music 700 words for the first year of junior high school

Number of words: 700 words essay

This article is suitable for: Junior high school students in the first grade of junior high school

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This essay is a 700-word composition about junior high school students in the first grade of junior high school. The title is: "Afterthoughts on the Sound of Music" , everyone is welcome to contribute. Music and singing are a kind of catharsis of emotions. People sing when they are happy and they also sing when they are in pain. "The Sound of Music" is a musical, and Maria keeps singing. It is her yearning for freedom, yes, freedom, although she did not realize it at first. Freedom is one of the themes of this film, I think. The monastery is a place for self-cultivation, which is somewhat similar to Taoist temples and temples in China, but it is essentially a restraint on human nature and has many rules. Maria obviously does not belong to that kind of place. She loves freedom, likes to run on the vast grass, and likes to sing like a bird. Her behavior was not understood by everyone in the monastery, so she felt confused and felt that she had done something wrong and should repent to God. Fortunately, the dean was a reasonable and respectable person. We saw that she also Singing, very beautiful. Without this enlightened abbess, Maria would probably have lived a boring and monotonous life in the convent like other nuns, and then slowly forgotten any singing as the years went by. The Dean probably saw a reflection of his own youth in Maria, and hoped that she would not make the same mistakes again. In the traditional sense, a happy person must have a happy family, especially for women, so the innocent, passionate and beautiful Maria later became the captain's wife. In order to show the love between Maria and the captain, the film arranged the role of the countess. Of course, the countess is also beautiful, considerate, and very wealthy. She seems to be the best candidate for the captain's wife, but the captain ultimately chooses Maria. Comments from famous teachers: The author introduces the musical "The Sound of Music" to readers in the article. In the article, the author introduces the background and plot of the story in detail, showing the excitement of this musical. Moreover, the author also focused on introducing several main characters, such as the heroine Maria, the abbot, etc., and shaped the characters, leaving a deep impression on the readers. The shortcoming of the article is that the author's feelings are not deep enough. For such a touching love story, what thoughts and comments does the author have about Maria? "Like to sing like a bird" and "Mary will probably live a dull and monotonous life in the monastery like other nuns." The "xiang" in these two sentences is changed to "like".

(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang Yunlian) 2010-3-6 16:50:00