The so-called eye, in fact, is to accurately find out the "eye of poetry" or key words in the poem, and make comments and appreciation.

You can see the leopard in the pipe. A poem grasps the "eye of the poem" or key words, combines the whole poem to read through, and then connects with the writing background, so as to know people and discuss the world, and then can comment and appreciate concisely, so that the interpretation of the whole poem is basically implemented. This combination of reading and writing is short, short and concise, and the interpretation of the whole poem is solved from point to surface. Let's look at an example:

The steps are dotted with green grass in spring, and birds are chirping happily under the leaves. -Du Fu's "Shu Xiang"

This is a well-known sentence in Du Fu's Shu Xiang. Move without moving, blue and yellow, look and listen. Behind the sharp contrast, the words "ego" and "emptiness" are used most skillfully. Green grass is ruthless, and spring is full every year; The oriole is careless and cries euphemistically every day. Who can know how comfortable you are? What about the names of thousands of generations? What will happen even if I am reborn again? When you appreciate it, you will know others and discuss the world. Connecting with the background of Du Fu's writing this poem, the profound meaning of this poem is self-evident.

Draw as usual, imitate innovation.

Text teaching is inseparable from reading. "After reading a book a hundred times, we can understand its meaning." The farther away from our ancient poems, the more we need to read them, from the layout of words to the characteristics of language. After being familiar with reading, guide students to follow suit and learn from innovation. They can write in the sentences that they feel most deeply, or they can make innovations in the structure of the whole article. Qiong precious jade's On Water is borrowed from The Book of Songs:

The grass is green and foggy, and there is a beautiful woman by the water. I am willing to swim against the current and snuggle up beside her, but there are dangerous beaches ahead and the road is long; I really want to find her direction downstream, but I seem to vaguely feel that she is in the middle of the water.

With the help of classics, there is no affectation, flowing, and the artistic conception is far away. It is worthy of being a model of imitation and innovation among famous artists.

My students read Liu Yuxi's "Humble Room Inscription" and imitated and wrote "Making Friends Inscription" and "Writing Inscription". Read Su Shi's mink head when is the bright moon, and imitate the writing of mink head's Mid-Autumn Night and mink head test. After reading Bai Juyi's Memories of Jiangnan, I imitated and wrote Memories of Saibei and Memories of the Country ... In this way, I turned my feelings into a composition, which not only satisfied my desire for expression, but also enhanced my sense of accomplishment. On the other hand, it also deepens the deeper understanding and sentiment of the text and promotes the improvement of reading level, thus achieving the win-win goal of teaching.

Faithful to the original poem, the scene reappears

Scene reproduction is to recreate the text by using imagination and thinking ability. Loyal to the text, but higher than the text. Writing is the source of running water, and the interpretation should be diversified, but it should be faithful to the original intention, not extreme, not distorted, not false and not blasphemous. Only on the basis of such multiple interpretations can the scene reappearance be true, vivid and vital. Look at two successful examples:

"... the moonfall is always a thousand years of wind and frost, and the sound of the waves is still not seen at the beginning of the night. Today, you and I, how to repeat yesterday's story. Can this old ticket board your passenger ship? "

-The pop song "The Sound of the Waves Still"

The popularity of the popular song "The Sound of the Waves Still" is inseparable from the charm of its lyrics. Adapted from a night berth near Fengqiao, the author carried out reform and innovation on the basis of the original intention. The works are natural and fresh, as refreshing as the spring breeze.