1. Pupils must read the composition selection before writing, otherwise they will become dependent and it will be difficult to get rid of their habits.

Before writing, if the child can't think independently, parents can slowly induce the child to think about the direction of writing with the child. The key is to let children participate in thinking, and parents can give guidance and open their minds.

After writing, children can refer to the composition book to learn how excellent compositions organize language, improve their language organization ability and accumulate beautiful words or sentences.

But in fact, many children are sloppy because they can be used as documents. Parents should supervise. After writing, parents should read it to see if the child is perfunctory or seriously thinking. They can continue to discuss the article and how to write better.

This is a personal experience. I once coached my cousin to write a composition in this way, and he made rapid progress.

The composition book is far less useful than the parent-child dialogue.

Children should read the model essay first when writing a composition. The following are some effective methods tried in practice for your reference. If they can be used together, they will get good results: 1. From your description, I can confirm that your child is a child who is good at expressing himself and has a very active mind. Such children can't write a composition, but they don't get started.

So first of all, we must have confidence, and with our help, let our children's day come early. Since the child has strong expressive ability, let him "speak" the composition first.

Tell one thing, tell a story, or express your opinion ... guide the child to speak first! Don't even tell him it's a composition! You can take shorthand or record the child's words, and then help him sort them out and type them. He will be surprised himself-this is the "composition"! So I'm fine, too! Building children's self-confidence is the first step. With self-confidence, they will be interested and the next step will be much easier! 2, write "own" composition "own"-why do you emphasize it so much? This is related to our present composition teaching. At present, it is often to read the model essay first, and then let the children write according to it. Children can't say it, but they will feel this false feeling, which will make children hate composition.

In addition, the model essay is more perfect in language and story conception. Children feel the gap and think that they have no hope of catching up with others-we adults don't do hopeless things, and it is too difficult for children to ask them! Watching too many model essays may hurt children's self-confidence, or train them to write "eight-part essay" and lose their ability to think and summarize themselves. They always write according to other people's things, but they can't write any good articles. In recent years, great progress has been made in the reform of marking papers in college entrance examination, and our composition teaching can no longer follow the old path.

Therefore, let the children write their own compositions, and record and express what they see, think and hear. This is the composition! 3. To write "interesting" things, you don't have to ask your child how the composition is structured, linguistically and ideologically. Instead, write down what he finds interesting or some ideas that you think are fun. Children will get enough information about interesting things so that they won't feel "unable to write" when writing.

If you do this, the children themselves will be surprised-I can write quite well! I can write so much! 4. Get into the habit of "keeping a diary" and start keeping a diary. Write as much as you can, not afraid of running accounts. Then, according to the child's diary, find something that the child is interested in and let him tell you, and do it according to the method of 1 ... First, develop the habit of handwriting. In order to finish faster, children should think about what they should remember every day. Let children realize that writing is to write about their own lives, experiences and thoughts.

5. Guiding children to "observe" and "observe" is a very important link to improve their writing ability, because "observation" is children's own observation, so that they can feel deeply and write content. In the early stage of cultivating children's observation ability, help children remember it once or twice. What should we remember? Remember what he said in his mouth, such as writing an explanatory article-underwater world. What fish did you see when you went to underwater world? What does the introduction card say? What does this fish look like? What interesting story happened at the scene? What's this fish thinking? Which one is willing to be angry, to be alone, or to play with other fish? Wait ... remember, don't force children to observe, simple tips, even discussions and chats, unconsciously let children pay attention! Let the child have a cold face. "You observe and go back to write a composition"! Shit, this kid's not interested! Composition is a record and reflection on points of interest. If you are not interested, what about the composition? 6. "Publish" children's works. Publish children's compositions on the blog. Bloggers will give some encouraging words to children's compositions and then read them to them one by one.

Children have the psychological needs of being concerned and valued, and have the psychological needs of self-display. Then, in order to get more praise and attention, he will improve his observation and writing ability, and he will figure out what to write and how to write it, so that everyone will like it. Ask grandpa to read excellent composition, and when the visiting guests come, show the composition to the children. These are all good ways to motivate children ... 7. Reading begins with humor and brain teasers. By this time, children have learned to observe and began to ponder how to tell stories that others would prefer. At this time, give your child a little humor, jokes and brain teasers to read. These words are short, but they are possessed.

Through these contents, children not only cultivate reading habits, but also improve their ability to conceive and tell stories, and their composition level will also be improved by leaps and bounds. Cultivating children to write a composition is really an enjoyable process.

You will see the children step by step and rejoice in them. Let's not take this job as a big problem.

We frown and teach our children to write. Is it possible for children to write touching and vivid compositions? To sum up, clearly list the relevant psychological elements for you to remind yourself: first, start from the child's interest and psychology; Second, quietly solve the child's writing obstacles; Third, help children in various ways; Fourth, let children experience and enjoy the fun of writing; Fifth, guide children with confidence and happiness. With these points, there is definitely no problem! In this way, I have helped many children improve their writing ability, from the first grade of primary school to the third grade students admitted to the university.

They have made great progress beyond my imagination. We can even think that children can write compositions! In fact, what children see, learn, feel and think are all new things, and they are very willing to communicate and share with you! Your child is in the fifth grade and has his own thinking and vision.

3. Is it really good for primary school students to read the composition selection? Do primary school students need to refer to selected essays in writing? Will there be a gap in writing between children who are separated from the composition selection and those who refer to the composition selection? See if primary school students can't write a good composition without reading the composition selection? Let's see what is going on.

A parent's confusion

As a mother who graduated from liberal arts, I have been reluctant to give her too much imprisonment in her composition. I always tell her: read more, see more and experience more, and you will surely write a good article. And she seems to have shown her talent in this respect. I have always been deeply proud of her imaginative composition and unconstrained style. Recently, however, the teacher reflected that her daughter's composition was too sloppy, unfocused and logically confusing.

Later, friends who graduated from liberal arts told me one after another that their children, who had never been proud, were reported by teachers as "poor composition, low conception and monotonous words" at a certain grade. Then turn on the phone and recommend to me the excellent works displayed by the teacher-lofty ideas, accurate words and correct ideas. If you don't know in advance what grade he is in, you will definitely think that the author of the article has graduated from college.

4. Read a story and write a composition. Write "Friends of Pupils" From the first day I entered primary school, I will graduate from primary school. In these more than two thousand days, a book accompanied me for six years, which gave me selfless help and made me grow from an ignorant child to a knowledgeable teenager. He is our pupil's tutor-pupil's friend. Every time "Friends of Primary School Students" is published, I will hold it affectionately in my hand and read it eagerly, so I don't want to miss a composition or even a word. In colorful spring, pupils' friends are like a wonderful flower, blooming in the early morning sunshine. Pupil friends have countless petals! There is an attractive story feast; There is a masterpiece of taste that I don't want to miss a word; There are intriguing mini comic books and interesting English; And my favorite big podium with big hands holding small hands and big reporters ... it really dazzles me. Friends of Primary School Students always opens the door for me and lets me enter a world full of fun. Always plug in a pair of wings for me and let me explore the magnificent wonders of space; He also gave me a great pen to write the colorful colors in my life. My favorite is the "composition challenge", where I not only enjoyed the good articles written by others, but also heard the comments of famous writers and journalists. Even better, writers and journalists can guide my study and teach me how to write beautiful compositions by hand. I can follow their successful footsteps, let go of my ideals and become a small writer. You taught me how to write, how to be a man, how to be grateful ... You took me to the ocean of knowledge, took me to the other side of my ideal, and climbed the peak of knowledge behind my back ... You helped me so much that thousands of words can't describe your help to me. I can only say "thank you!" "Friends of Primary School Students" is a boat on my growing road, leading me to the other side of success.

5. Pupils write their own compositions (introduce their own compositions) I am a very ordinary girl, but it is because I am so ordinary that I feel that I am not ordinary.

Let me introduce myself first. Name: (. )

Very easy to remember. One parent's surname, age 12. Hobbies: Speaking of hobbies, I can count too much, reading books and listening to music.

I like them all.

Advantages: countless. As for the shortcomings, I won't say it. I am a face-saving person.

Let me talk about my own feelings about myself first: not as smart, cute, stupid and clumsy as other girls. Soon after I came to my new school, there were a lot of annoying things that made me dizzy. The most troublesome thing is to take care of yourself.

The literal interpretation of the word "self-care" is: take care of your own life. I'm just annoyed by it. I have been spoiled since I was a child. Washing clothes is my number one problem.

I finally know how to wash it, but the speed is really slow. Some clothes have been washed for me for half an hour. .

Half an hour.

Sweat). It was 10 minutes before class. I was in a hurry to get ready to close the team, "squeezed" out of the water and ran with the washbasin in my arms.

Busy with clothes hanging on a hanger, a fork (that is, something that forks a hanger).

I still don't know its name. It's raining overhead, so squeeze some water out first.

"Hua!" Oh, my God, soapy water! The clothes are not clean! Well, forget it, hang up first (I often comfort myself like this). You can't do anything well if you are in a hurry.

It's time for class, and I'm in a rash. The only solution is to throw it into the box first. Two hours later, when I looked at it for the second time, the clothes were dirty and the box was wet. Hum, wait and concentrate on washing! Well, I was born to be such an absent-minded person.

Well, what do you think of me after listening to my introduction? Isn't it a little cute? My dear teacher Song's comment: You are a lovely girl! The whole article is full of vigor, vitality, fluent language and relaxed humor, which conforms to the characteristics of girls of this age. ) Now I feel: To be honest, this is an unforgettable composition experience. Remember one day, probably when I was a freshman? She told me that after reading my article, she thought I was the best student in the class. The implication is that I don't expect others to have good articles.

I'm not sure, is the general level of my classmates not good at that time, or is my writing too brilliant? I still can't be too proud, hee hee. Maybe I'm new here and everyone hasn't finished typing yet. Anyway, that's when she began to like a student like me. This is a very happy time for me. I also like her very much, so much so that I am jealous of any student she says she likes, hehe.

Now, I miss her very much, but I dare not call her or anything. I always feel that I am not good at it now, which is too bad. I am worried that she will be disappointed in me. Oh, I really do. I really like her.

Think about it, a 12-year-old child was praised by the whole class for his first practice in the new school, and his composition was shown to everyone on the spot. What an honor it is, it's simply not glorious, hehe. I was encouraged for the first time in my junior high school career, and I can't forget the great happiness.

Teachers don't praise the compositions in primary schools very much, because they are all the same. That primary school teacher likes to teach us to imitate writing, which means copying together. It is rare for me to be praised. In short, I didn't know how much I wanted to be praised and praised until I was affirmed for the first time. I know. I'm glad those dazzling lights, and I like the feeling of being watched by everyone. In other words, it is the first time that I have been so thoroughly affirmed. I finally know that I can, at least here, play a role, hehe.

Don't doubt that at that time, I was not as complete as I thought, but it was almost the same. It seems that I am very precocious. I said I mind, hehe, her affirmation of me strengthened my idea of changing myself and getting rid of the state of primary school. It turned out that I did it. Of course, this is another story.

I can like Mr. Song all my life. I like the kind of face with bright eyes, a pointed nose, two thick eyebrows and a glib mouth. I'm Zhang Qin, a lively girl. I am 13 years old. Singing, reading and playing badminton are my favorites. My life is rich and colorful. Usually. When I have nothing to do, I like to travel in the sea of books to meet my spiritual needs, because books are the food of human spirit. I like playing badminton in sports because it can make me feel happy. I am cheerful and lively. I like making friends, so I have many good friends in my life. They all like to play with me and exercise with them, because it can strengthen our physique. Let the friendship deepen. My personality is rich and changeable. When I am angry, if someone tells a joke next to me, my anger will disappear completely. If I encounter unhappy things, I will cry and vent all my inner unhappiness. After crying, I will be much happier. Unlike some people, they pretend to be happy when they are unhappy, but their hearts are not a taste. This is me. I like skating, not to mention being lively.

I am most proud of my bravery. I started skating when I was five years old.

At that time, my father bought me the first pair of roller skates. Although it only has 45 yuan, it is so beautiful that I can't put it down. I quickly put it on and tried to slip away.

It's a pity that a dog fell down and ate shit, and two front teeth hurt. But I still keep practicing. Under the guidance of my father, I slowly held the square stool while pushing and sliding, and then I stood up and continued to practice.

You can put your last hand on the square stool and slip away. After hard work, I finally learned to skate.

At this time, my heart is very happy. I play happily in my cement yard and the cement road in the village every day, and the speed is getting faster and faster. I can not only move forward, but also retreat; You can not only lean up with one foot, but also lean sideways.

6. Pupils' travel notes are essays, not the travel notes written by pupils to visit Taiji Island.

Taiji Island is located in the northwest of Liujiaxia, Yongjing County, where the scenery is pleasant and beautiful.

I am very happy to have the opportunity to visit there and enjoy the beautiful scenery there this time.

The car galloped on the winding mountain road, with green hills on both sides of the road, and the top of the mountain was covered with milky fog, giving people a feeling of "mountains in the sky". Suddenly, when the mountain road turned, my eyes suddenly became clear: the choppy Yellow River, criss-crossing fields and rolling wheat fields all flooded into my eyes. But the most attractive thing is the continuous peaks, which seem to be huge barriers. The top of the mountain is white, and the bottom of the mountainside is all red, as if it had been burned. I'm a little surprised because I've never seen such a mountain. Lushan Mountain is too revered and Huangshan Mountain is too dangerous. All of them have been artificially carved and finally endowed with artificial beauty. However, the mountains here are the wonders of nature, which gives them unique beauty. From a distance, there is a temple on the top of the mountain, which is said to have been built by a Nepalese monk. Buddha Sakyamuni gave him a dream and said a poem: "The red soil is white, and the river flows west. Agate trees are everywhere, and we will stay here. " Red earth and white mountain refer to this mountain, and agate refers to jujube. It's true. Jujube trees are everywhere here, and there are countless huge dates on each tree. In addition, all the water in the Yellow River flows eastward, while the Yellow River here flows westward. I couldn't understand it, so I went to ask my Lord, there is a reservoir here, and the river has changed its course. "We live here" means that the Buddha asked the monks to build a temple here for chanting and lecturing.

The car went on, much slower than before. Willows are swaying by the roadside, and dense reeds are swaying gently in the breeze. After a long time, the car finally stopped by the lotus pond. The lotus pond is covered with lotus leaves, leaving only a gap. I couldn't help saying a poem by Yang Wanli: "The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely blue, and the next day, the lotus flowers are different colors." Lotus leaves flutter gently in the gentle touch of the breeze, and some lotus flowers are in bud and some are in full bloom. 35SK35 Composition Network Pink lotus and lotus are intertwined, lotus branches are staggered, and graceful posture is swaying in the wind. Flocks of fish swim to the shore for a while and play under the lotus leaves for a while. At this time, a little gray duck was swimming in the upper reaches of the water, suddenly diving into the water to fish, and ripples appeared on the calm water. A crane was standing in the water, too. It stopped to watch, as if fascinated by the beautiful scenery. Another crane came and stood in the water, combing its feathers with its long, pointed mouth. Several egrets flew through the air, making several chirps from time to time. It's really "a line of egrets going up to the sky". A kingfisher passed before our eyes and stopped on a branch not far from us. Its dark green feathers, pointed mouth and mung bean-like eyes are very cute. This is the first time I have seen a kingfisher, so I am more excited.

There are red wind lotus, lively fish, lovely waterfowl and wild ducks here, and it is unforgettable to feel the breath of nature.

Then we went to Bird Island, where there are countless kinds of birds. We went boating along the coast by boat. My uncle whistled and the bird flew. Once or twice, my uncle continued to whistle, and the birds kept flying, red, flowered, black, dazzling and overwhelming. It is because birds nest here that the flowers and trees here are lush and beautiful!

At noon, we eat, rest and entertain in a farmhouse restaurant in Zaoyuan, which is a return to nature!

In short, everything here is full of eclectic beauty. People who come here will throw away the vulgarity in the market and return to the truth from here. The 60-year-old man devoted himself to fishing by the river. The girls in the city took several children to catch butterflies and pick wild flowers. Young people are climbing mountains and swimming in the Yellow River. ...

How time flies! Unconsciously, it was dusk. Facing the afterglow of the sunset, we reluctantly left here, and this beautiful scenery will remain in my heart forever.

I don't know when I can come to this beautiful Taiji Island again.