Appreciation of a good paragraph:

I stood in front of the camels and watched them eating grass and chewing: such ugly faces, such long teeth, such quiet attitude, they chewed When he was walking, his upper and lower teeth were grinding back and forth alternately, steam was coming out of his big nostrils, and white foam was covering his beard. I was stunned and my teeth started to move.

Appreciation:

This short paragraph describes the camel's expression and movements of chewing fodder in a very specific and detailed way. I seemed to really see a camel hunched over, eating grass, grinding its teeth and making a "squeaking" sound. After grinding, some white bubbles will come out and hang on the camel's mouth, which is a lot of fun. I realized it from "I was so stunned that my own teeth started to move." Lin Haiyin was very interested in camels and loved them very much. He was deeply attracted by them. I also saw Xiao Lin Haiyin with two braids looking at the camel, his eyes straight and his teeth moving rhythmically. Grinding. Let’s look at the sentence “Steam is coming out of the big nostrils”, which fully illustrates the author’s love for camels. If she didn’t like camels, would she observe them so carefully? This is the brilliance of Lin Haiyin - he does not use a word "love" in the whole paragraph, but expresses his love through his own movements and the movements of the camel.

I have seen the madman in Hui'an Pavilion several times. Every time she stood at the door, Song Ma or Ma would quickly squeeze my hand and say softly: "Madman!" We would rub each other's hands. When I walked past the wall and looked back, they would pull my arm hard to stop me. In fact, that lunatic is just a big girl with a big braid of pitch pine, just like the girl from the Zhang family and the Li family! She always stood leaning against the door wall, watching the people passing by.

Appreciation:

This paragraph made me realize the author’s kindness. Her mother and old nanny Song Ma were very afraid of and disgusted with the lunatic in Hui'an Pavilion, and they looked down upon the lunatic. And what about the author? From the short sentence "Actually, the madman is just a big girl with big braids of pitch pine hair", I read that the author did not regard her as a madman, but thought that the madman was a big sister with big braids and very thoughtful thoughts. of innocence. The second half of the sentence "like the eldest girl of the Zhang family and the Li family" shows the beauty of the author's childhood thoughts. She does not pity the madman, but treats the madman as a normal person? I wonder if the author still has such an innocent person now Where is your heart?

So I sang the Li song for five years, and now it is the turn of my classmates to sing us farewell: "Outside the long pavilion, beside the ancient road, the grass is green and the sky is green? I asked you when you are going to come here, and don't wander around when you come! At the end of the sky, in the corner of the earth, there are only a few close friends. Life is rarely about reunions, but there are many separations?" I cried, and all of us graduates cried. How much we like to grow taller and become adults, but how afraid we are! When we go back to elementary school, no matter how tall or big we grow, teacher! You will always treat us as children!

Appreciation:

This paragraph describes Lin Haiyin’s teacher-student relationship with his teacher, and also describes the author’s ambivalence about both longing for and fearing the future. From "I cried, we graduates all cried", we can feel the author and classmates' nostalgia for the school and their concern for the teachers. From the sentence "You must treat us as children forever", I can feel the author's inner love and gratitude for the teacher. She hopes that the teacher will always educate her, and she also hopes that she will always be the teacher's student. . This passage does not have fancy words or long speeches, but it allows us to feel the most affectionate and touching farewell described in simple language

Dad and Mom are in the yard, Mom is holding her little sister, Dad When cutting flowers and plants, he said that if there were too many oleander leaves, the flowers would bloom less and some leaves should be removed. He tied the branches with strings again, so that the few oleander trees were not so scattered. He then tied a thin rope to the morning glory on the wall and nailed it to a high point on the wall. The morning sun shone on the wall, and the morning glory bloomed in red, purple, yellow and blue, but It is not morning now, and several petunias have withered.

Appreciation:

From this passage, I realized "Dad's" "love for flowers". He cares for flowers so well and knows so much about gardening. Moreover, "Dad" loves flowers so much, so he must have a very good temper and a very good temperament.

Then, a picture of the sunset unfolded: "Mom" hugged "Sister" and looked at the flowers. Where is "Dad"? He was trimming flowers in the yard with scissors, string and nails. From time to time, the sound of "Dad" making while trimming flowers could be heard. Um! It is really like a family painting drawn with life as the paper and taste as the pen. At the same time, this is also a transitional paragraph. At the end of the paragraph, it is written "The morning glory has withered." We read a sense of sadness and desolation, which leads to the following article.

Good sentence:

⒈ I don’t know if I have ever passed by you. You are as gentle as a thin cloud on the horizon. Even if I can meet you but cannot ask for it, you have taken me away. spiritual attention.

⒉ Love sometimes does not require the promise of eternal love, but it definitely needs meticulous care and greetings; love sometimes does not need the tragedy of Butterfly Lovers, but it definitely needs the tacit understanding of the heart. and congeniality; love, sometimes does not need the follower of the male and female, but she definitely needs the support and understanding of each other.

⒊ Even though youth is a delicate flower, I understand that a branch blooming alone is never spring. Spring should be a world of colorful flowers. Even though youth is a majestic tree on the earth, I understand that a single tree is never tall and tall. Rows and rows of trees are the green Great Wall that blocks the wind and sand. Even though youth is like a solitary sail in the sea, I understand that it is difficult for a solitary sail to sail a long distance, and that thousands of sails competing against each other are the grandeur of the sea.

⒋ The mist curls, the harp sounds, the autumn wind contains infinite poetry, the falling chrysanthemums float into colorful waterfalls, one after another, curtain after curtain, flowing with thoughts and dreams that can never be reached. The hydrangeas are like burning red candles, blooming and clustering, blooming with expectation, blooming with Xia Ni, blooming with blood-stained music, and charming faces in the mist. When the sun shines, beauty is in your heart.

⒌ When you are in the spring scenery with warm breeze blowing, birds singing and flowers fragrant, green mountains and green waters, and vast tracts of fertile fields, you will definitely be intoxicated; when you face the golden autumn season that is as golden as silver and full of fruitful fruits, You will definitely be delighted. Have you ever thought that the lush spring scenery is the heroic appearance after being baptized by the severe cold, and the beautiful scenery of the golden autumn is the crystallization of the smelting heat.

⒍ Use the waves of knowledge to push the sails of thinking, use the sparks of wisdom to ignite the sparks of thought, use romantic passion to create a beautiful life, and use the power of science to give strong wings to soar!

⒎ Only by making one's inferiority complex feel confident, can one's crooked body be straightened; only by making one's weak body strong, can one's shackles move forward; Only by broadening one's narrow mind, can one's short-sighted mind Only by making your foolish mind smarter can you abandon your foolish illusions!

⒏ Pioneers find their own way, conservatives stick to the old ways, explorers climb to the top bravely, and persistent people move forward bravely.

⒐ Concentration makes you achieve your career, childlike innocence makes you forever young, confidence makes you never stop, kindness makes you win praise, ambition makes you reach the top successfully, perseverance makes you indomitable, and love makes you full of friends. , being generous makes you happy and relaxed, and being enthusiastic makes you famous throughout your life.

⒑ The road is long and we need to "search up and down"; there are many temptations and we need to take every step; things are cumbersome and we need to learn to take a break from the busy; we need to appreciate the beautiful scenery.

⒒ The crossroads of life is a multiple-choice question. Only by choosing carefully can you ensure the right direction. If you make a confused choice, you will easily go astray. If you give up, you will lose your way.

⒓ Confidence needs to be pushed to the end, husband and wife need to work together, actions need to be thought twice before making, friends need to be made in all directions, life needs to be colorful, neighbors need to be smart and exquisite, and things need to be done carefully When the Eight Immortals come to cross the sea, they must speak in one word, so that their life can be very satisfying.

⒔ The road of life is a spiral path. Only by walking with your head high and turning flexibly can you rise to the ideal peak. The mediocre do not lack effort, but lack goals; the dreamers do not lack action, but act too late; the poor do not lack hard work, but lack expertise; the lazy do not lack steps, but have too shallow steps.

⒕ The name of success is struggle, the name of innovation is exploration, the name of bravery is climbing, the name of diligence is cultivation, the name of humility is listening, and the name of happiness is contentment.

⒖ You must be personable, stand tall, do things with discipline, work with passion, think with depth, treat others with warmth, have moderate hobbies, and move at a fast pace.