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65438+February 2 IELTS composition Zhenti: Should the old building be demolished?
Whether the old buildings should be demolished or not is an absolute old question. In the teaching and lectures of IELTS writing, Mr. Tang has repeatedly taken this topic as an example to talk about the basic ideas of IELTS writing.

So should the old buildings in the city be demolished? Perhaps some students will think about this topic unilaterally and think that old buildings should not be demolished because they have historical and cultural value and should be preserved.

That's a good idea, but how to write it next? These students may be confused, because it is really difficult to find other reasons to keep the old buildings. In fact, if we open our minds, we will find that for some people, the old buildings in the city should be demolished, because these old buildings really have no practical value except historical and cultural value. They occupy the limited space in the city, and they can neither live nor provide any convenience for our life. At the same time, if they are not well maintained, they may bring danger to residents.

So as far as this topic is concerned, we can start to discuss why the old buildings should be demolished, and then discuss why the old buildings should be kept (and answer the importance of the old buildings to us). Finally, we come to the conclusion that the preservation of old buildings may not bring us practical benefits in life, but its historical and cultural value can not be ignored.

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Every city has ancient buildings. The question now is: how to deal with these old buildings? Some people think they should be demolished and replaced with new ones, while others think they should be preserved and protected.

Every city has ancient buildings. The question now is: how to deal with these old buildings? Some people think they should be demolished and replaced by new buildings, while others think they should be preserved and protected.

analyse

(1) this paragraph is an introduction: the introduction of this model essay is relatively direct, starting with a question and answer.

(2) Pull-down push (this article also uses remove and destroy to express similar meaning)

(3) substitution (followed by by by and with is ok)

(4) reservation (pay attention to distinguish between reservation and preservation)

02

There are many reasons why old buildings in cities should be demolished. First of all, old buildings are no longer suitable for people to live in, so they should be destroyed to make way for new buildings, so that people, especially young people in cities, have more living space. Secondly, old buildings will bring inconvenience to urban residents. Because there is no direct route through the old building, people sometimes have to walk around the old building, which wastes a lot of time. Finally, old buildings may cause safety problems. For example, in my city, more than1000 people are killed or injured every year, just because some ancient buildings collapsed.

There are many reasons why old buildings in cities should be demolished. First of all, old buildings are no longer suitable for people to live in, so they should be destroyed to make way for new buildings, so that people in cities (especially young people) can have more living space. Secondly, old buildings will bring inconvenience to urban residents. Because there is no straight road through the old buildings, people sometimes have to walk a long way to the surrounding work places, which wastes them a lot of time. Finally, old buildings may cause safety problems. For example, in my city, more than 100 people are killed or injured every year because some old buildings collapse.

analyse

(1) This paragraph discusses three reasons why the old building should be demolished: housing space; The problem of inconvenient travel; Security issues. There is a sentence behind every argument.

Many hosts

(3) Remove

Make way. Make way. ......

(5) Inconvenience means inconvenience

(6) Urban residents

(7) Route route

(8) Take a detour

(9) trigger

(10) collapse (n.)

03

However, ancient buildings-at least some of them-are of great significance in history and culture, so they should be protected from being destroyed for any reason. They should be well preserved and protected because they carry some important information about the city or the whole country. For example, the Summer Palace is a perfect memory of the life of the Qing royal family in China, so it has great cultural significance. Such an old building, if well preserved, can become a tourist attraction, attracting thousands of tourists from all over the world.

However, ancient buildings-at least some of them-are important in history and culture, so they should be protected from destruction for whatever reason. They should be properly preserved and preserved, because they carry some important information of a city or country. For example, the Summer Palace can remind us well how the Qing royal family lived in feudal China, so it has important cultural significance. If these ancient buildings are well preserved, they can become tourist attractions, attracting thousands of tourists from all over the world.

analyse

(1) This paragraph demonstrates that the old building has historical and cultural significance, so it cannot be demolished.

(2) Very important

(3) For any reason

(4) The deserved value

(5) Reminding words or things

(6) the imperial emperor's

(7) feudal

(8) Attraction

04

We all need memories of the past. Many ancient buildings do have historical and cultural value. They tell us who we are. We need to protect these buildings and preserve them as much as possible so that they can tell the story of this city or this country to the next generation. Of course, those old buildings with little value should be demolished, especially when they bring security problems to people.

We all need memories of the past. Many ancient buildings do have historical and cultural value, telling us the past history. We need to take good care of these buildings and preserve them as long as possible so that they can tell the story of this city or country to future generations. Of course, those old buildings with little value should be demolished, especially when these buildings bring security problems to people.

analyse

(1) This paragraph is the conclusion, which answers the question of how much ancient buildings should be protected. Lao Ya thinks this conclusion paragraph is wonderful and plain, but it expresses quite interesting thinking. Roast duck can be memorized and imitated.

(2) Memory

The future generation, the future generation.

(4) posture reasons