The appraisal opinion of educational papers is 1. The topic selection has a sense of the times and reality, the full-text structure is reasonable, the viewpoint expression is basically accurate, and the thinking foundation is relatively clear. The full-text content is basically compiled according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and there are many related materials consulted, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to its own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
3. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
5. The author discusses the role orientation of teachers in student-centered oral English teaching. The topic selection has strong practical significance, the argument is correct, the argument is conclusive, the discussion is clear, and the paper meets the requirements of the specification. Throughout the design and writing of the thesis, the author's attitude towards academics is extremely rigorous and serious.
6. This student paper discusses the importance of English teachers' role by analyzing the essence and characteristics of English teaching. By comparing the traditional teaching mode with the modern teaching mode in China, this paper probes into the roles and qualities that teachers should have under the new teaching mode. The article has clear arguments, distinct levels and rigorous structure.
7. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw your own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
8. This paper discusses the potential obstacles in cross-cultural communication and puts forward a series of suggestions to improve the communication effect. The author can master the basic theory and think about cross-cultural communication. The full text has reasonable structure, clear organization and fluent language expression. But generally speaking, the research is not deep enough, the analysis is abstract, and the demonstration and examples are not sufficient.
9. Wang Rui's thesis "Electronic Password Lock Based on FPGA Technology" has completed the research (design) task specified in the task book. Using EDA technology, the digital password lock is designed by top-down design method. The overall structure, main functions, design flow, module division and VHDL source program of each module of the digital password lock are described, and the simulation results of digital password lock design are given. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, the expected requirements are met, and the requirements for the defense of bachelor's degree thesis are met.
10. Li Sijing's paper "Frequency Modulation Circuit and Its Design" has successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. In this paper, a small wireless FM stereo system based on BA 1404 and CXA 1238 is designed by using pilot FM stereo transmitting and receiving technology and high performance dedicated transmitting and receiving integrated circuit. In addition to reading all the reference materials and documents designated by the instructor, students can also read more self-selected materials, better understand the tasks of the project, and put forward the implementation plan of the opening report. The successful translation of foreign language materials and in-depth analysis of research problems reflect that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, and the writing of the thesis is standardized, which meets the requirements of dissertation defense.
1 1. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the xxx writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
12. This article has a novel idea. Taking xxx as a clue, this paper comprehensively analyzes the problems and reasons of XXX in combination with local standards. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
13. The topic is contemporary and realistic, the full text structure is reasonable, the viewpoint expression is basically accurate, and the thinking foundation is clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty, and it can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
15. Wang Li's paper "Design of Radio Remote Control System" successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. This paper designs a wireless remote control system, including the design of transmitting circuit and receiving circuit, and realizes the remote control function. In addition to reading all the reference materials and documents designated by the tutor, students can also read some self-selected materials, and put forward a more reasonable implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation on time as required, with good translation quality. The correct analysis of the research questions shows that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, and the writing of the thesis is standardized, which meets the requirements of dissertation defense. Allow students to participate in thesis defense.
16. Zhao Xia's thesis "Website Design for Electronic Information Science and Technology Specialty" completed the website design for electronic information science and technology specialty, and completed the overall scheme design, structural design and programming of message board module and news management function module. This design was completed by two students. Zhao Xia is responsible for the design of news management function module, and its development mainly includes the establishment and maintenance of background database and the development of front-end application programs. In addition to reading all the reference materials and documents designated by the tutor, students can also read some self-selected materials, and put forward a more reasonable implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation on time as required, with good translation quality. The writing standard of the thesis meets the requirements of the thesis defense.
17. Cai Lingyun's paper "Design of Digital FM Transmitter" successfully completed the research tasks specified in the task book. This paper mainly uses digital signal processing (DSP) and direct digital frequency synthesis (DDS) technology to realize the design of digital FM transmitter. This design is completed by two students, who are mainly responsible for the design of digital FM modulation module of digital FM transmitter. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, the expected requirements are met, and the requirements for the defense of bachelor's degree thesis are met.
18. study xxx as the topic, fully embodying the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
19. Research on xxx. It can provide reference for solving xxx- problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
20. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administration major, and it can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
2 1. The topic of this paper conforms to the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The whole paper is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
22. Zhang Jiafu's thesis "High Frequency Power Amplifier and Its Design" basically completed the research tasks specified in the task book. This paper introduces the development and application of high frequency power amplifier, and designs a basic and reasonable high frequency power amplifier circuit. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, and the expected requirements are basically met, which meets the requirements of the defense of bachelor's degree thesis.
23. This paper has a novel topic and a unique perspective, which embodies a solid theoretical foundation of human resource management. In particular, the article can demonstrate and analyze the topic in combination with relevant cases, which has certain practical value. Through the review of the paper, we can see that the author spent a lot of time in collecting data and cases, and also put forward some profound views, but there are still shortcomings in the depth of theory and the citation of some arguments. Generally speaking, this is a qualified paper.
24. Zou's paper "LED Dot Matrix Display Based on Single Chip Microcomputer STC 89 C 54" has successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. The system takes STC89C54 single chip as the main control chip, and uses temperature measurement, real-time clock chip and data storage technology and software to realize the functions of temperature measurement, time and data power failure without loss, and finally completes the specified tasks well. Students can deeply analyze the research problems, which shows that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, strong practical ability, standardized paper writing and meets the requirements of thesis defense.
25. Yu Yuqing's thesis "Website construction of high-frequency electronic circuit excellent course" basically completed the design of high-frequency electronic circuit excellent course website. This paper introduces the design idea and production process of the website, and designs the basic prototype of the website. Read the reference materials and documents designated by the instructor, have an implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation as required. The design is basically reasonable, and personal opinions on website construction are put forward. The author has basically mastered the basic theory of website construction. The writing standard of the thesis meets the requirements of the thesis defense.
26. Li Bin's paper "Analysis of Three 3G Standards WCDMA, CDMA2000 and TD-CDMA" successfully completed the research tasks specified in the task book. This paper makes a comprehensive analysis and research on the technical characteristics and development of 3G and its three major licenses. Extract the essence from a large number of documents about 3G, and then make a systematic summary, and the analysis is basically reasonable. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, the expected requirements are met, and the requirements for the defense of bachelor's degree thesis are met.
Selected evaluation of educational papers 1. This article is novel in conception. Taking-as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the existing problems and reasons of-. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
2. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
3. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. What is the full text? The analysis and demonstration of this theme has reference significance for improving China's administrative management. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable, and the format is more standardized. The reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but there are insufficient innovations and arguments, especially the last part of the chapter is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. What is the basis of this article? Focus on the theme? .. topics, topics are basically in line with the professional category of administrative management, which fully embodies the professional characteristics. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are accurate, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, but the innovation is not enough, some viewpoints are not fully demonstrated, the format is not very standardized, and there are not many ideas that really belong to you. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
5. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
6. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
7. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature materials consulted and referenced are closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
8. The theme of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are basically clear, and the views are basically accurate. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management specialty with Deng Xiaoping's administrative reform thought. The format is basically standardized, and the topic selection meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty. However, there are too few documents available for reference, some argumentation contents are not closely combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
9. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the hot issues in society. Therefore, the research on this subject is conducive to the further development of our country. The full text starts with the problem of-,and then analyzes the reasons. On this basis, the related problems are analyzed. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
10. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The full text is entitled-. Focus on exploring-the full-text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
12. The full text is entitled-. The problems and reasons of key discussion and analysis-the full text is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. You can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze-,but
13. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. Taking-as an example, this paper focuses on-. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, and can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
15. The point of this article is. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
Comments on Excellent Educational Papers-Comments 1
This paper mainly studies the security of station computer interlocking software in the field of railway signal. The topic of this paper has certain frontier, clear theoretical significance and strong practical value. The investigation is comprehensive, the workload is full, the analysis is thorough, the design is reasonable and the information is informative. The paper has reasonable structure, standardized writing, clear organization, prominent focus and fluent writing, and comprehensively applies the knowledge learned to solve problems.
Paper review 2
Monascus pigment is one of the traditional edible pigments in China, and there are many characteristics to be studied and developed. In this paper, excellent strains with high pigment yield and low citrinin yield were obtained by shake flask liquid fermentation screening and ultraviolet mutation. The solid-liquid fermentation conditions of safe monascus pigment were optimized by response surface experiment, and the scale-up experiment was carried out. The paper has novel ideas, forward-looking and good application prospects.
The topic of this graduation thesis takes into account the academic frontier and diversity of the subject, and provides a pioneering idea for the production of safe monascus pigment. The experimental workload of the paper is large, the analysis and detection methods are complete, and the analysis of scientific research results is correct. The format of the paper is standardized, the logic is strict, the data chart is clear and reliable, the conclusion level is clear, the specific experimental scheme design idea is clear, the workload is heavy, and the system is strong, reaching the level of excellent master's degree thesis in Hubei Province. It shows that the author has a solid theoretical foundation and the ability to engage in scientific research independently.
Paper comment 4
Taking safe monascus pigment as the research object, the response surface method was used to further optimize the culture conditions of monascus pigment in liquid fermentation, and the effect of vitamin H on monascus pigment in liquid fermentation was investigated by single factor experiment, and the optimal addition amount of vitamin H was obtained, which provided experimental basis for the development and utilization of monascus pigment.
On the basis of shaking flask culture conditions, a small experiment was carried out in 10 L fermentor, and the technological conditions of three-stage ventilation control were obtained. Under these conditions, the color value was 199.6 U/ml, and the citrinin was1.08 mg/L. Compared with before optimization, the pigment changed little, while citrinin decreased by 54.7%. The result is ideal.
The topic of this paper is novel and has a good application prospect. The experimental test results are reasonable, the data chart is clear and reliable, and the experimental workload is large. The center of the paper is prominent, the writing format is standardized, the arguments are sufficient, the structure is rigorous, the level is clear, and the expression ability is strong. Rich materials, reliable data, scientific and effective processing and finishing methods. It shows that the student has solid basic knowledge and systematic professional knowledge, and has deep scientific research ability. The thesis has reached the level of excellent master's degree thesis in Hubei Province.
Paper review five
This paper mainly studies the safety of railway interlocking software, and the research results have strong social value. The argument is clear and powerful, the argument is sufficient and the conclusion is reliable. The paper has distinct levels, correct format, strong logic and fluent writing. It shows that the author has mastered the basic theory and professional skills of this subject, and has good technology and research ability.
Paper comment 6
In this paper, the research status of safe monascus pigment at home and abroad is introduced in detail, and the literature review is comprehensive, which shows that the author is familiar with the relevant theoretical knowledge and skills in this research field, and the materials are fully prepared and expounded.
The rapid detection method of citrinin in monascus rice was studied, and a rapid, safe and effective detection method was obtained. Filter paper bacteriostatic circle method. To optimize the extraction method of citrinin from monascus rice. The topic of this graduation thesis takes into account the academic frontier and diversity of the subject, which provides a pioneering idea for the subsequent detection of citrinin. The process of this paper is simple, and the accuracy and sensitivity of citrinin detection are high, which provides the possibility for the accurate detection of a large number of samples in industrial production.
The paper is fluent, the format of the article conforms to academic norms, the structure is reasonable, the key points are prominent, the conclusion level of the paper is clear, the experimental results are reasonable, the abstract is concise, the logic is strict, the data and charts are clear and reliable, the research content is systematic, and the workload is heavy, which shows that the student has a solid professional theoretical foundation and strong scientific research ability, reaching the level of excellent master's degree thesis in Hubei Province.
Attachment: writing guidance for master's and bachelor's thesis.
(A) the theme of writing
A master's degree thesis can only have one topic (it can't be pieced together), and it should be specific to the grass-roots level of the problem (that is, the problem can't be subdivided into lower-level sub-problems), and it can't be the field to which the problem belongs, let alone the subject where the problem lies. In other words, the research topic can't be too big. Because of the wide range of issues involved, it is difficult to study the master's degree thesis thoroughly. Usually, the master's degree thesis should focus on a specific problem in a certain subject field and draw valuable research conclusions.
The master's degree thesis is an academic work, so the expression should be rigorous, concise and focused. Professional knowledge should be abbreviated or not written, so as to be clear in thinking, reliable in data, concise in words, thorough in explanation, rigorous in reasoning and correct in argument, and avoid using non-academic language with literary nature or emotional color. If there are new terms, terms or concepts that are not common in the paper, they need to be explained immediately.
(2) How to write the title
The title of the paper should briefly reflect the main contents of the paper, and should not be general. Because others want to search your paper through the keywords in the title of your paper, it is very important to use accurate language. The title of the paper should be an accurate and specific description of the research object, which generally reflects the research conclusion to some extent. Therefore, the title of our paper should not only tell readers what problems this paper has studied, but also tell readers the conclusions drawn from this research. For example:? Between fact and fiction: the journalistic views of Moore, Carpenter and Wolff? Than? A Study on the Journalism Views of Three American Writers? More professional and accurate.
(C) the writing of the abstract
The abstract of the paper is a high summary of the research content of the paper. Others will retrieve the master's degree thesis according to the abstract, so the abstract should include: a description of the problem and research purpose, a brief introduction to the methods and research process, and a brief summary of the research conclusion. It should be independent and self-evident, and it should be a complete paper.
By reading the abstract of the paper, readers should be able to have an overall understanding of the research methods and conclusions of the paper, so the writing of the abstract should be accurate and concise. The abstract of a paper should not be written as an outline of the full text, especially? Chapter 65438 +0? ; Chapter two? ; This or similar statement.
(D) Introduction writing
The introduction of a dissertation consists of the following parts: 1, asking questions; 2. The background and significance of the topic; 3. Literature review; 4. Research methods; 5. The structure of the paper.
1. Question presentation: Explain the problem studied? What is this? .
2. Background and significance of the topic: explain why this topic is chosen for research, that is, explain the contribution of this research to the development of this discipline and its theoretical and practical significance to the national economy and people's livelihood.
3. Literature review: A detailed and comprehensive review of the literature within the scope of this study. Say? Must have both. Comments? The shortcomings of existing research results are pointed out, and the improvement ideas are discussed.
4. Research methods: Explain the scientific research methods used in the paper.
Paper structure arrangement: Introduce the writing structure arrangement of this paper.
5.？ Chapter two, chapter three, The previous chapter of conclusion? Writing method is the research content of the author, and other people's research results can't be mixed randomly. What has been said in the literature review part of the introduction does not need to be repeated here.
There should be an organic connection between chapters, in line with the logical order.
(5) Concluding words.