Contributed by Tang Ming [Fuzhou No.1 Middle School]
Theme explanation
The long-rumored news that Legend Holdings acquired Confucius Family Wine was exposed in a ceremony of offering sacrifices to Confucius. Legend Holdings acquired Kongfujia wine industry with a total investment of 400 million yuan ... After nightfall, the winemakers still sweated profusely in the winery, from distilling bran, cooking, discharging, blending, filling wine, putting wine, to steaming grain, cooking, entering the pool and sealing the pool. "Hot oil, cold wine", they start to work every night, repeating this process that has been circulating for more than two thousand years. They don't know much about winery mergers and acquisitions. In the eyes of these masters, it is naturally a good thing as long as it is good for the development of their own extended families. Although it was changed into a "new bottle", it still contained the "old wine" brewed by itself.
In order to benefit and develop, it is necessary to "bottle old wine in new bottles".
Chasing for a lifetime is just an ordinary detective story if it is not a phone call through time and space; If it didn't travel through time and space, Back to the Future would be a mediocre love story. Everyone has drunk the old wine, and how to use the new bottle is also a question for the university. Chen Yinque, a famous master of Chinese studies, said: "There are three ways to innovate history, one is historical innovation, the other is method innovation, and the third is angle innovation."
The same is true of writing articles. The content and form of a work are interdependent. Content such as "wine" and form such as "bottle". On the premise that content plays a leading and decisive role in form, form in turn has an important reaction to content. The concrete manifestations are as follows: when the form is suitable for the content to be expressed, the content will be fully expressed and the artistic power of the work will be enhanced; On the contrary, when the form is not suitable for the content to be expressed, it will damage the content and artistic strength of the work. In specific works, form should also include the following elements: such as structure, genre, different "artistic language" and so on.
Structurally, the structure of the article is the organization and arrangement of the content of the article. Architecture pays attention to the perfection of structure, so does composition. Integrity is the general requirement for the article structure, while rigor is a higher requirement for the article structure. Innovation needs to be based on honesty and preciseness, by going up one flight of stairs.
A good article is inseparable from good materials and good structure. The materials written in the article should not be scattered, but should have clever layout and clear combination form. Only by organizing the materials skillfully can we express our ideas better. Just as Goethe, a German writer, said, a structural article "connects small circles very appropriately like a jeweler's gold chain" can truly form a vivid and dynamic organic whole, and an article with novel structure can attract more people's attention. A novel composition in the examination room will bring a carefree enjoyment to the marking teacher and win high marks.
In recent years, there have been many good articles with old topics, new works and new viewpoints in the composition of college entrance examination. Here are a few.
One-word series structure
Word concatenation is to select several keywords around the theme as the center of each paragraph, thus connecting the whole article in series. Example:
What is life?
Life is such a word: short. I spent my childhood happily, my youth blankly, my youth hastily, my middle age calmly and practically, and my old age slowly and leisurely. The happiness of childhood, the absurdity of teenagers' actions, the course of youth's struggle, the confusion of middle age and the helplessness of old people's leisure are all in blowing in the wind in an instant, and they are gone forever.
Life is such a word: beauty. I love life, and I accept what life brings me frankly, and use my life to enrich my life. It will be buried in my past footprints, and when I get old, I will set aside beautiful Mars from the ashes of memories. Even if I have turned into a star in the horizon, I will use it to light up my life, relive those smoky past events and walk into life again.
Life is such a word: wonderful. The same environment will never be the same. Under the heavy academic pressure, some people forget to eat and sleep, and try their best to catch up with the progress, while others learn to play and take care of themselves. The situation is not good, some people are miserable and complain repeatedly, while others are happy and carefree; Under the same rich conditions, some people are afraid of being nervous every day, while others are content.
Life is such a word: helplessness. You can't get what you want, and you don't want it. You want too much, but life is so short. Hard work, things are just unsuccessful and easy, luck keeps coming to him, flatterers are often reused, and honest people are often in trouble.
What is life? The answer is colorful.
This is an excellent composition for college entrance examination. The author chooses a brand-new angle, chooses what he wants to say (what is life), and interprets the topic of "the answer is colorful" from multiple angles. The article is novel in conception, rich in words and flexible in sentence patterns. It seems that for some old topics that are no longer fresh, we should be good at connecting with social background, keeping up with the pace of the times, conducting multidimensional analysis, finding "new bottles" for wine, starting with "new" and writing new ideas.
Double-lens display structure
The lens structure is a parallel object structure. This article is composed of a series of related independent pictures connected side by side. There are two basic combinations:
One is horizontal arrangement and combination, that is, the pictures in different spaces at the same time are combined together. This structural form is conducive to expressing the theme from different angles and highlighting its universality.
The other is vertical arrangement and combination, that is, combining the past, present and future fragments of the same thing. This structural form is conducive to showing the situation of the same thing in different periods and highlighting its development.
In actual writing, there are other different splicing methods. Although these relatively independent pictures belong to different time and space, people and things in heaven and earth, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign can enter the text, but there is a theme clue running through them. This kind of article has a strong sense of life and picture, which is conducive to free and flexible thinking.
Three-time staggered structure
Space-time staggered structure is a kind of structural form in which historical materials and realistic materials are juxtaposed. This kind of structure has a great span in time and space, and the materials are free and broad, which is very interesting. Articles with this structure can break through the time limit, use imagination, fantasy, exaggeration, personification and other methods to make up characters and stories, and write "fantasy" and "dream", so that characters or events can be in a pattern of multi-temporal changes and form a contrast, which is convenient for expressing the spiritual world and heavy themes of characters. For example, the Monkey King's Dialogue with Earthlings, I Negotiate with Zhuge Liang, etc., boldly graft science fiction and myth, or deduce new plots from classic original works. Of course, all these must conform to the principle of "artistic truth" and take the expression of a certain theme as the premise. Otherwise, the written content will become illusory, and it is prone to random selection of materials, imprecise logical connection between materials and unclear theme. Therefore, when selecting materials, we should pay more attention to the differences or similarities of events in different time and space, the possibility and rationality of characters shuttling between them, and so on.
Four-pillar focusing structure
It is very important to find the focus of life and emotion when designing an article. Through the choice of life focus, we strive to concentrate on the description object, life scene, time span and portrait. For example, when organizing the material and arranging the structure, it is best to carefully set up a prop, because it will become the core of the plot. Because props are a common object for different people, they become a display agent for different psychological States. As long as there is such a display agent, the psychological gap of various characters will change from recessive to dominant. For example, the candlestick in Chekhov's novel art; "Human Blood Steamed Bread" in Lu Xun's novel Medicine: "A Necklace" in Mo Bosang's novel Necklace: Soviet writer ehrenburg wrote seven short stories with "pipe" as props, all of which adopted "props-centered structure", which strengthened the psychological gap in all aspects and left a deep impression on people.
Five causal comparison structures
The relationship between each group of characters, emotions, memories and feelings is mutually causal, and the changing process of this relationship is the plot. When planning the layout of the article, you can consider the deviation between the cause and the result in the direction. Romeo and Juliet, for example, is full of polarization between motivation and effect. The climax of Li Xingdao's gray column in China Yuan Zaju is Bao Gong's judgment. The focus of the contradiction is who is the legal heir (the mother of the child). Bao Gong skillfully drew a gray fence on the ground and asked two women to drag the child to both sides. Whoever can drag him out of the fence is the mother. Neither side will compromise. As a result, the biological mother couldn't bear the child's suffering and let go. On this basis, Bao Gong came to the conclusion that it was the real mother who let go, and the cause and effect were polarized and received unexpected results.
In Yi Li Textual Research and Zhang Ci, Shi Dongxiang attributed Yi Li and textual research to the content of the article and Zhang Ci to the form of the article. He said: "Form serves the content" and "paying attention to rhetoric means demanding the perfect form suitable for the content".
He also pointed out in the article: "If the authenticity of an article is wrong and the quoted materials are false, then even if it is beautiful in form (rhetoric), it will never be considered a good article. However, good content needs good form, and bad wording will inevitably damage the content. It is wrong to think that the form doesn't need to be particular, and it doesn't matter whether the form is good or not. " This clearly illustrates the dialectical relationship between content and form.
We need "good wine", and we need "new bottles" to hold wine!
wallet
Text/Lin Ying [Fuzhou No.1 Middle School]
In summer, the sun scorches the earth. Clouds seem to be burned into steam, and even the dust under people's feet makes the high temperature of tens of degrees Celsius boil and fly around uneasily. Pedestrians who are in a hurry are also bored and keep muttering: "What weather is this!" " No one noticed a worn-out wallet under their feet. It is sewn with needle and thread and embroidered with a small flower. Although it has been tortured to death, you can still vaguely see its exquisiteness.
At this time, a young couple first saw it.
"Honey, come and look at this thing. It's a wallet! " With a charming scream, a "pink" girl appeared-pink camisole, pink miniskirt, pink socks and pink sneakers. She stared at her purse with surprised eyes and her mouth opened into a "0" shape. The handsome guy standing next to her held her in one hand and a digital camera in the other. He glanced at the wallet on the ground, raised his eyebrows and curled his mouth: "Hoo! It's just a wallet. What's so funny about it? Poor, ugly and old-fashioned. Don't look, honey. I'll buy you the latest wallet later. Go! " After that, he hugged the girl harder and left.
The sun doesn't seem so dazzling. Occasionally, there are a few clouds floating in the sky. A young mother was walking on the road with her daughter from kindergarten. The little girl is jumping in front, and her mother is struggling to follow behind in high heels-"Little ancestor, don't run so fast, be careful!"
"Mom-mom-come here." The little girl's surprised voice came from a distance. "Mom, here is a wallet, so cute!" ! There is a flower on it, and I ... "
"Put it down! Put it down! " Just then, my mother caught up and took over the little girl's words. "Put it down! How do you, you and I usually teach you not to pick things up casually? How dirty! You know, there are a lot of bacteria on it! What a, b, c, c, big, small, three yang. Maybe SARS and bird flu. How terrible, don't throw it! "
"Pa", the wallet fell to the ground. The little girl looked at her angry mother and was at a loss. Tears kept flowing down her eyes-"Wow". ...
"baby is good, baby doesn't cry ... mom will buy you ice cream." After that, the young mother glared at the wallet on the ground and hurried away with the baby.
There seemed to be more clouds, and the sun crept into them unconsciously. An old man and an old woman staggered in. "Look, old woman, wallet!" "
"What a nice wallet! Which child is so careless? "
"Look, old woman, does this wallet look like the one you embroidered for me when we first met?"
"ouch! Quite like it! " Grandma said, reaching for it.
"Wait!"
"Old man, what's the matter with you? Too shocking! "
"My daughter didn't say, recently there are a lot of bad people cheating in the city, the means is multifarious. Maybe this is a bait to catch us, don't take the bait! "
"But ..."
"Don't but, we just went to town, or be careful. It is right to listen to your daughter. Go! "
"Oh, what a beautiful wallet! It's a pity. " Grandma looked at her purse, pitied everywhere, sighed and followed her grandfather.
It seems to be getting dark. "For a long time," the sky played a prelude to rain.
A "red scarf" who had just finished his duty came quickly. "wallet! Who lost his wallet? I have to pick it up for grandma Wang. " The "red scarf" picked up the wallet and flew to the community at the intersection. ...
In the community, the "red scarf" gave her wallet to Grandma Wang, showing a satisfied and proud smile. Watching him run away happily, another community worker shook his head: "children nowadays are really boring, picking up wallets like others." Who will find this stupid wallet? Dirty and torn! Oh, there is only 2 yuan in it! " "Sou"-a beautiful parabola, the wallet is lying firmly in the trash can.
Outside the community, "Wow ... Wow ..." Day, it rained heavily.
Special comments
In this paper, the structural method of "different psychology in the same situation opens the gap" is adopted, and different people show different psychology (or draw different people with the same prop) to an embroidered wallet left on the side of the road and stitched with needle and thread. Handsome men's disdain for wallets, young mothers' prevention of their daughters' picking up wallets, old women's feelings for wallets, and old men's warning to their wives highlight their emotional differences in the same choice of "picking up or not picking up", but their emotional essence is unified and they all choose to give up. Only the appearance of the "red scarf", so pure, so duty-bound that things should be returned to their original owners and handed over to the community, in stark contrast to the above. The practice of community workers is disappointing, and even the sky can't tolerate it. They all cried and it rained heavily.
If this antique "embroidered wallet" is regarded as a symbol and a symbol of "traditional culture and morality", does "giving up" mean giving up traditional culture? Does it mean the loss of moral standards? Does it mean the collision and contrast between traditional value and modern value? Or the loss of traditional values in the face of modern values? Or is it because the environment has changed and the values have changed? All this is thought-provoking. The "red scarf" is the hope of the future, and his courage makes people feel the existence of hope. However, it is a pity when the "embroidered wallet" lies in the trash can.
(Tang Ming)