Prompt the advantages and disadvantages of the composition in time to attract the author's attention;

2. Line Batch Type

In view of the wording of the article, make sentences, show the attitude of critics with one word, and attract the attention of the author;

3, the total batch type

Comments written for the whole article. When writing this kind of comments, we should try to split them into two parts, affirm the advantages, point out the disadvantages and explain the revision methods. Comment on the writing method, language skills and ideological content of the article. On the basis of comprehensive evaluation of the article, focus on the target, highlight one or two key points, avoid the heavy, and avoid the pain.

4. Answer reporters' questions

Answering reporters' questions is a form of reporting in which the leaders or responsible persons of relevant parties directly answer reporters' questions. If this form is applied to composition evaluation, it will make composition evaluation more targeted and instructive.

What needs special attention here is: asking questions for the author and asking questions that the author wants to ask are of practical value and pertinence; In addition, the evaluator of the question must give an appropriate answer, that is, the answer should be enlightening.

Step 5 test questions

This form adopts the form of examination questions, which can not only guide students to think, but also encourage students to evaluate the composition, thus organically combining teacher evaluation, classmate evaluation and author evaluation. This form of comment can be subdivided into fill-in-the-blank type, selective type, reading analysis type and so on.

This way can change the teacher's evaluation into the student's evaluation, and help students find out the advantages and disadvantages of their compositions. It is best to make a breakthrough in one or two points when using this correction method, and generally don't cover everything.

2. Write the composition of the open class "A teacher is coming to attend the class!" The "tweeter" is broadcasting again. "Tomorrow is coming, no less than ten people, with cameras!" The students talked about it in succession: "Oh, here comes the homework again!" " "Great." I think: we should review well today. The teacher assigned homework that was "higher than the sky", and everyone complained.

As soon as I got home, I ran into the bedroom and began to review. When I finished, I fell on the bed with a bang. All my dreams are open classes. It seems that we are eager for class!

Looking forward to the stars, looking forward to the moon, looking forward to the open class. "Ding", the bell for class came late. With the teacher's "class dismissed", a class began. The teacher smiled and introduced Mr. Okura to us, with sweaty palms. After reading the text, the teacher began to ask questions, and the students rushed to raise their hands: Yao Lei's answer was humorous and made the whole class burst into laughter; A classmate's answer didn't get to the point, and Li Wei added it again; Zhang's answer level has always been very high, and we listened with relish. . In a word, everyone's hands have sprung up like mushrooms after rain. Gradually, I'm not afraid at all. A few cowards can use their heads. With the sound of "class dismissed", the open class is over, but we are still unfinished.

Open class, open class, you make me love and be cruel. Being in love is my opportunity to exercise.

3. Write an open class on the topic of "Open Class" "Good news, good news, Teacher Lin led our class to win the first place in the' First English Teacher Basic Skills Competition'!" Ye Jiahui happily and hurriedly reported the good news to us! Before attending the open class, I was so excited that I thought about how I would behave in the open class and how to show my talents. I also thought: that scene should be very lively! There should be a large audience! In short, my heart is full of expectation, longing and joy! As long as I think of going to an open class, my face is filled with joy! "Students, with English books, exercise books and a pen, line up to open classes in the multimedia room."

Teacher Lin solemnly announced that the atmosphere in the class was like hot water in a pot-it began to boil, and the students immediately began to prepare and then lined up in front of the door! I stood in the queue, remembering what I had just prepared (I wanted to do it myself), and demonstrating silently in my mind over and over again. The students next to me look relaxed and not nervous at all, but I am extremely nervous, accompanied by my nervous, pounding heart. I went down and felt calm.

The class began, and I sat up straight. The whole person was nailed to the seat like a nail. I listened attentively and felt that the whole person was immersed in the atmosphere. However, whenever the teacher asks a question, I know it and want to answer it. However, I thought that if I didn't answer well, I would be embarrassed and my face would turn into a ripe red apple, so I drew my hand back.

But then I thought, just a few people raised their hands. If I don't raise my hand, Miss Lin can't order anyone, and her first place will be threatened. Alas, raise your hand! So I lifted it again, and the teacher nodded at me. I stood up, but I didn't feel nervous. The answer in my mind suddenly disappeared, and I thought about it before I stammered out the answer ... A class soon ended in the pounding heartbeat of my classmates, and the big stone in our hearts fell down. Relieved, we began to expect that this year's champion would be Miss Lin.

This is "God's will is with man", which Ye Jiahui said to me and Wang Shanshan earlier. Alas, Miss Lin won the championship with our eager heartbeat! Today is really scary.

How to write an original model essay about an open class is too much trouble.

Let me tell you how to write it.

I think the composition of an open class should be similar to that of an ordinary class. You can be nervous in the presence of the teacher (if I write, I will write that I was drawn by the teacher to answer questions, or I will raise my hand confidently to answer questions and describe my psychological activities in detail), but this class is very successful and interesting. Finally, write down what you learned in this class and your greatest feeling about this text.

At the beginning, you can write: "In my school life, I have taken countless classes. They are like a big ship, carrying me in the ocean of knowledge: some have taught me new knowledge and broadened my horizons; Some taught me to write a composition, which made me think deeply; Others let me know a lot of knowledge that I can't learn in textbooks, which opened my eyes ... In short, these classes have brought me unlimited fun. But to say that my favorite is the open class of the third grade, which still makes me remember it. "

Or you can just write down your feelings about this course. For example, after learning the lesson "Yuanmingyuan was destroyed", you can write directly: "In the process of learning this lesson, I deeply felt the intelligence of the working people in our country, and also deeply realized the truth that backwardness will be beaten. Through the study of this class, I understand more that only when the country is rich and strong, our motherland and our nation will stand proudly among the nations of the world. "

Alternatively, dialogue can be used to lead to the beginning of this open class. For example:

"Hey, did you hear that? Our class will have an open class this afternoon! " I don't know which well-informed person ran into the classroom and shouted. Hearing the news, the classroom exploded and the students talked about it. With a nervous mood, the open class began.

In the middle, you can also write about your psychological activities or the teacher's demeanor, such as:

With the ringing of class bell, the sound of "toot, toot, toot" is getting closer and closer to us. The teacher walked into the door with light steps, walked gracefully to the podium, put down the book in his hand and glanced at the class with a smile. "class!"

Finally, you can write down your feelings about this class.

For example, in the section "Yuanmingyuan was destroyed", "This class has given my mind a baptism. Through the study of this class, I deeply understand that only when the country is rich and strong will we not be bullied again. Only by studying hard and building China into a prosperous and democratic country can we stand forever among the nations of the world, and the painful historical tragedy of the burning of Yuanmingyuan will not repeat itself. "

Another example: "As time went by, the bell rang, and we successfully cooperated with the teacher to complete a wonderful class and enjoyed learning."

"The footsteps in the corridor are gone, and the students are still in their seats. After a long silence, I told my deskmate that I like this class, yes, it is my favorite Chinese class, because it is a class for the soul. "

That's it.

Most of the materials in it are intercepted from various articles on the Internet. Maybe the sentence is not elegant enough. You can modify them. You still have to write the overall combination yourself.

I hope to write a good article ~

5. Composition: An Unforgettable Open Class I have attended many open classes, and those open classes moisten me like a drop of spring rain. What impressed me the most was the open class.

Looking forward to it! Finally, I hope Rinrin's class begins. The students are sitting in their seats waiting for the teacher to arrive. After class, Teacher Liu asked Fang and Wang Xindi to give each group a small bag of oranges. The students don't know what medicine is sold in the teacher's gourd The teacher ordered us to pass the oranges as quickly as possible. It is a great honor for our group to be rated as a "passing" star group. "It's fun to have something to eat in class." The students are whispering to each other.

Then, Teacher Liu asked us to observe oranges for five minutes and write three or five sentences. The orange fragment written by Wang Hanyu makes me want to eat oranges. The Fragments of Oranges written by Wang Yueting made me feel that wonderful feeling when I was eating oranges.

Teacher Liu asked us, "What can be observed by observation?" "Use your eyes." A classmate replied. The teacher asked, "Looking at oranges, what words do you think of?" Huang Cancan and Huang Chengcheng ... "Smell it with your nose. What do you smell? " "the fragrance of the earth" and "the smell of the farmer's uncle's sweat" ...

"Next, you touch the orange with your hand. How do you feel about oranges? " "Oranges are weather-beaten." Lei Wu spoke first. "Yes, oranges are weather-beaten, much like grandparents' wrinkled faces! Fruit farmers have a hard time cultivating fruit trees. We should keep in mind an old adage, "Who knows that every grain is hard". Fruit farmers plant fruit trees, just like parents' care for their children, which reminds me of Meng Jiao's ode to a wanderer ... "Teacher Liu's meaningful words touched not only our students, but also the teachers present.

Then Mr. Liu gently peeled off the oranges in his hand and said humorously, "Today, Sheng Wei is very active in answering questions. I reward him with an orange, and other students should not be jealous! " I will feed you slowly after class. "The students laughed my head off, and I accidentally fell into the arms of the teacher who was listening to the class next to me. The smell of oranges filled the whole classroom, which was refreshing.

Then Teacher Liu asked us to listen to oranges. "Listen to the orange? ! "It's unheard of. The students scratched their heads and thought hard Teacher Liu smiled mysteriously: "It's up to you to use your clever brains." Our monitor has a super rich imagination. "Listen" to a pessimistic orange saying, "Boo hoo … I will be eaten soon. My life is really bitter! " "Listen" to an optimistic orange: "Yeah! I can finally see the outside world! Look at those lovely birds and beautiful flowers ... I'm so happy! " The monitor's wonderful answer actually made the teacher take the lead in applauding. In the face of this thunderous applause, the joy in the monitor's heart can be imagined.

Ding Lingling ... The bell rang. Time flies. A wonderful open class ended unconsciously. When class is over, the students can't wait to peel oranges and eat them. How sweet!

What an unforgettable public class!

6. Open primary school composition class [Open primary school composition class] Open primary school composition class 1. General comment: Everyone has experienced an open class, and the author reflected the scene with his own actions (performances) and psychological description, which is authentic. The composition class in primary school is an open class, but the key points are not prominent (there are traces of running accounts), such as strengthening the description of various performances of lecturers, teachers and students in the open class. I was even more impressed. "Jingle bell ..." The bell rang. As the song "Reading Tang Poems" sounded, the teachers who attended the class came to our class one after another (one after another). With the words "Hello, teacher" after the monitor's "stand up" password, an open Chinese class began. (The opening is simple, and importing the full text directly from the scene will be easy to attract. The back of the classroom is full of teachers, all students like us. Today, we have lesson 29, "Two Ancient Poems". (.) At the beginning (before the lecture), Mr. Feng invited the students to read Begging for the Spirit. Although I have been holding up my little hand, I have not been invited (after a classmate got up and finished reading). (Then) Teacher Feng asked the meaning and difference between "small" and "small", and two words immediately appeared on the screen, and we understood at once. Later, Teacher Feng asked, "What will it feel like when the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl meet on the Magpie Bridge?" Sun Ruochen immediately replied: "Cowherd and Weaver Girl will feel very sorry, because they used to get along with each other day and night, and now they can only spend one night together." The teacher smiled and nodded frequently, and then the teacher asked, "What will their children say when they see their mother?" I held my little hand high and got the teacher's consent. I replied in the tone of their children: "Mom, you are too cruel. Go to heaven and enjoy yourself, leaving us alone to suffer! " The teacher shook his head like a drum. "No, not so good. Composition guides the open class of primary school composition. " At this time, when I heard a "wow", I felt that the teacher behind me might be very dissatisfied. I suddenly felt embarrassed and my face was burning. Thinking of continuing the class in the future, I had to say to myself, "Don't be embarrassed, don't be nervous. Think of them as onions. " This is an article about taking notes. Besides myself, the atmosphere formed by the actions and demeanor of the lecturers and teachers in class and the reflection of the whole class should be the focus of the narrative. It is suggested that the author should focus on the key points in future exercises, instead of covering everything step by step like this paragraph. The bell rang, and under the gaze of more than 20 pairs of bright and mature eyes, the open class was over. How time flies! I still don't think I've had enough! Why do you still feel that you haven't drunk enough? )? ) 2. thrilling open class today, we finally reached the "big day" of open class, and the classroom was full of tension. "Bell, bell, bell ..." When the class began, the students quickly returned to the classroom. At this time, a teacher, two teachers and three teachers came in from the classroom door ... more and more teachers came in, and the students' hearts became more and more nervous. The teacher first learned Sima Qian's famous saying from the article "Writing Historical Records with Passion" in the fifth grade: "People are inherently mortal, some are heavier than Mount Tai and some are lighter than a feather." Then the next link is to let the students combine their own understanding of the famous sayings they like and illustrate their favorite places with examples. In fact, the teacher asked us to write it yesterday, but it is obvious that the students' "morale" has been reduced today. Few students raised their hands. Then I remembered Defoe's famous saying: the fear of danger is ten thousand times more terrible than the danger itself. I raised my hand and gave a speech on the platform. Due to full preparation, my language on the stage is still fluent, but the mantra "er" often appears. On the stage, I accidentally found my first teacher. My legs have been shaking because of excessive tension. Alas, it's finally finished. Breathe a sigh of relief. "Rinrin Bell ..." With the melodious sound of class ending, we reluctantly bid farewell to this class. Well, I hope there are more such classes, because it exercises my courage. The quickest and surest way to overcome fear and build self-confidence is to do what you are afraid of until you gain successful experience.

7. Composition at the end of the open class

We will have an open class this Thursday. It is said that many teachers will come to attend classes that day.

On that day, there will be many teachers listening to our classes and watching our performances in the back, and I will be so nervous. I thought: If I got the wrong answer, wouldn't it be a shame?

I stutter too. That's my natural timidity. Forget it, then don't raise your hand, but if you don't raise your hand, the teacher won't give our group extra points, and it will also bring bad influence to the class. Of course, I raised my hand but didn't answer. But how is that possible? Forget it, forget it, we'll talk about it then.

In this way, in my heart, I am uneasy, and the fourth phase of the stars is coming. I found that other students in our class are different from me. They all walked happily to the amphitheatre on the first floor, full of energy and spring breeze. Really, that's what they are. I am not exaggerating at all. I guess they are not as timid and thoughtful as I am. That's all right, teacher. He has a keen eye. He will know my cowardice and won't ask me questions. When we all got to the amphitheater, we quickly found our seats and sat down.

Our Chinese teacher glanced at it a few times, and it was estimated that when he saw the absence of the class, he put his hand down, which meant that everyone should have a rest first. Let's lie prone on the table and have a rest at once. In fact, at that time, we can have a rest there. I think everyone is as nervous as me. The public class is coming soon. How to rest? Sure enough, before we had a rest for a few minutes, a creaking sound suddenly sounded. Everyone looked up from the table and cast their curious eyes at the door. It turned out that the teacher was listening to the class.

Everyone's laziness disappeared at once, and several stooges in the class knew the importance and seriousness of this open class, so they sat up straight at once, which had never come out in class.

The text we are going to learn in this class is "Building a Railway to Lhasa". Our old teacher told us this a long time ago and told us to preview carefully, read the text more than five times and write it down in the notebook.

Every student should ask at least ten questions in the book. It can be said that in this way, we basically "rake" every sentence in the book.

What we have to do now is to try our best to cooperate with the teacher and not to embarrass the whole class.

"Please look at the topic I wrote.

I want to ask a question.

It made me think. I looked at the blackboard and saw the vigorous words of the old teacher "building a railway to Lhasa" appear before our eyes. We usually say that our teacher writes beautifully, but today he writes more carefully, which makes him more beautiful. When I grow up, I want to write such words, and my thoughts float out of my head. "yee ling, you answer this question.

"I'm back to reality, no, I can't be unconstrained style. See yee ling talking to Kan Kan, clear thinking, the answer is also very complete, she is like me at ordinary times don't raise your hand, it seems that she is also prepared.

No, I also want to answer questions, but because I don't usually raise my hand for fear that the teacher can't hear me, I put it down.

"If Xin, you answer ..." Another loud and fluent answer, and the teacher nodded with satisfaction. It seems that the teacher is very happy and the students get along well. It seems that our preview is also very effective. The teacher spoke more attentively, and I took notes more carefully.

Dense fine print, that's my notes.

I don't know how long it took, but with the music, we ended this open class. When I turned to say thank you to them, I heard thunderous applause. We proved to the teacher that we can do our best as long as we work hard.

After this open class, the Chinese teacher was very satisfied with our performance and rewarded us with a snack at the grocery store. You know, in normal times, our boss Mr. Zhang is not allowed.

However, I am more happy that those teachers gave us such a good evaluation.