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I wrote a historical narrative paper. Who can take a look at it for me? I think I'm going to die. It's badly written! High score reward
"Come back, Dad!" He remembers his daughter pleading with him with her big soft eyes. He clearly remembers looking her in the eye and saying confidently, "I promise." He smiled and gave her a big hug, and then left. He is a member of 136 troops.

Hong long only felt pain. A burning, painful, unimaginable and unbearable pain, he remembered his promise. He doesn't want to die; He struggled, struggled to breathe, struggled to stand up, struggled to return to his family, and struggled not to break his promise. But it was useless at the time.

The smell of gunpowder filled the air. The smoke from the cannon made it difficult to see the enemy. Around him, his comrades-in-arms fell to the ground, with large red blood on his chest. The Grenade was thrown out. Soon after, those grenades shook on the ground beneath him, making him tremble even more. The Grenade blew a deep hole in the ground, and several people were shot into the air, and blood splashed out from them. He could feel the fire burning inside him. He threw several grenades at the Japanese and continued to fire at them with his musket.

When he reached the front line, he saw a man writhing on the ground near the bushes. His sympathy prevailed, and he walked quickly to the fallen soldier. "Comrade, are you all right?" He knelt beside him and realized that the soldier was not writhing, but writhing. He twisted in pain, unable to arouse the courage of imagination. Bong Leong's jaw fell off because he noticed blood seeping into his hands through the soldier's clothes. The soldier coughed, and a familiar metallic smell gathered on Feng Long's tongue. The blood of a dying comrade. The soldier reached for Feng Long's shirt.

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Hong long ran, and red rage flooded his eyes and beat his ears. He ran, screaming like a devil, clumsily dragging his musket. He felt the first bullet hit him on the shoulder, and he leaned over and almost fell down. But he kept running. The second bullet hit his opposite arm, and he dodged drunk. He kept running. Glen Ade came from behind and landed at his feet. He stared at it blankly for a while, and instantly fell into endless panic. The ground under his feet exploded and he was sent to the crimson grass. He was thrown on the crimson grass. )

Moments later, the enemy appeared. The man knelt beside him with an evil smile on his demonic face. He raised the gun barrel to Feng Long's head, and after a loud bang, this promise was broken forever.