End: Standing in history, listening to the low complaint of dignity, I finally understand: in the cold wind, it is the flag in the hands of soldiers that cannot fall; In the ice and snow, what can't be frozen is patriotism; In the billowing black smoke, what remains unchanged is the peace and dignity of the people of the world! Comments: At the beginning, the dignity is pointed out from the unique perspective of history pupils, and the three-row ratio is very imposing; The ending rose from individual soldier to country and then to the world, which sublimated the theme. 2. Beginning: God made us have eyes and feel the light; Have ears and listen to beautiful voices; Have a mouth, pour out the love in your heart; Feel the warmth and coldness of the world with your heart.
God also gave us thinking, but didn't tell us what love is! Conclusion: Although God didn't tell us what love is, he gave us a note to prove the power of love: write everything God gave us first, but didn't tell us what love is, so as to attract readers to continue reading; Finally, I wrote that God gave us the ability to interpret love. I pointed out that love is around us and we have love. Even if God doesn't give it to us, we will prove it with actions. 3. Beginning: Gu Long once said: When smiling, you can cope with all the expressions-indifference, enthusiasm, ridicule, hatred, concern, success, failure ... Indeed, smiling can solve all difficulties and is a force that inspires people to succeed.
Outcome: in a smile, summon up courage and face setbacks; In the smile, strengthen confidence and overcome difficulties; In a smile, extend a hand of friendship, help others, and in a smile, strive for progress and surpass yourself. Is it still difficult to succeed with a smile? Comments: Quote Gu Long at the beginning and write about the influence of smile.
At the end, I used parallelism to say that smiling in the face of difficulties will overcome all difficulties, and revised Shelley's famous saying and wrote, "Is it still difficult to smile successfully?" It highlights the theme and is interesting. 4. beginning: when the last affectionate red leaf is sent away in autumn, when the gorgeous silver dress fades in winter, I count the palm prints of time ... end: after going through 2008, I gained a joy and a maturity.
Comments: The beginning and the end are short, the palm print of time is artistic, and the beginning and the end are harmonious. 5. Beginning: If you don't sweep a house, how can you sweep the world? Those who don't stick to "details" are good at going their own way or enjoying themselves alone, so that the frank ladder is suspected of being built on other people's walls. If you are not careful, you will cover up the big "jade" because of small "flaws"; Great people become great people, not naturally, but because they pay attention to details.
End: A drop of water sees the sun, and a glimpse of the whole leopard. A section is equivalent to a test paper, which can measure a person's quality and realm.
Everything you say and do may be a radical part of fate. Comments: I can write from beginning to end, and I have a deep literary foundation. It is appropriate to sweep the house and sweep the world and write details to determine success or failure. Writing details at the end is the side of fate.
6. Start: Growth is the only way in a person's life, which can lead to maturity and success; Growth is a colorful dream, so beautiful and so real; Growth is like all kinds of dishes on the table, ups and downs; Growth is a tear in pain, and it is also the first taste of the sweetness of success. End: The road is at our feet, and our only choice is to go on, just as we grew up from a baby to ourselves now.
Let's take a step of growth! Comments: The beginning is a parallel prose, vivid and intriguing; The ending is very infectious, calling us to take the pace of growth and walk out of a vast world of our own. 7. The beginning: "I am in my mother's arms, my mother is on the boat, and the boat is in the moonlight sea."
There is a harsh smell in the light, which is the love my mother gave me. End: unfold the long scroll of history, stir up the dust of history, and interpret the lingering of maternal love. At that time, the wandering soul found its home ... Comments: I started from the topic and wrote about my maternal love. At the end, I wrote a long and touching maternal love with three verbs, which is the dependence and sustenance of the soul.
8. Beginning: After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. The end: In this world, a star falls, the starry sky can't be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring can't be deserted.
Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter! Comments: first look at the beautiful scenery with wind and rain, then look at the road with thorns, and then look at the scenery with mountains. Writing down setbacks is the secret of success; Don't give up easily as long as you can stand the test of difficulties. 9. beginning: love is the wind, "it is good for the poor to hear the wind."
Love is rain, "Love peony contains spring tears". Love is soil, you can dig it out by bending down. Which soil has no blood and sweat of ancestors and no green dream of future people? Love is a cloud. When you look up, you can see one. Which cloud has not seen the yearning of children and the memory of old people? End: Because of love, we are grateful, because of love, we are full of grief and indignation; Because of love, we are willing to be indifferent to quiet days; Because of our love, we dare to wear boots to meet them.
A life of humiliation, life is love; Deserve the righteousness above family, death is love; Clear and refreshing, live seriously, living is not love! Comments: Both the beginning and the end are parallel paragraphs, which are very rhythmic. The metaphor at the beginning is vivid and appropriate; Finally, it is a kind of love for life to set off a serious life with the love of life and death! 10. beginning: lavender wind chimes hung in front of my window, gently pulling out a sound as clear as nature.
It filled the whole room and brought my thoughts to a bright and wonderful place. The past is like clear water, flowing quietly there.
End: There is another breeze, and the wind chimes jingle. I nodded and meditated, and the sweetness was gone.
Comments: The beginning and the end are beautiful and artistic. Use the bell of wind chimes to draw my beautiful thoughts and fall into deep memories. The ending echoes the beginning, and once again use wind chimes to continue sweet memories.
I don't know if it will help you, but I tried my best. All the comments were written by myself, and the beginning and end were excerpted.
2. A good beginning, end and comment of the landlord's article brought us a deep shock.
The landlord's article is a declaration.
The landlord's article is a propaganda team.
The landlord's article is a seeder.
The landlord's article brings readers joy and angel prosperity.
People.
Generally speaking, they are calm.
I feel that I have been waiting for the landlord to write this post.
I thought.
Write the post of the landlord.
It should be a masterpiece.
I didn't find out until now.
Everything can change.
What remains unchanged is the wonderful originality of the landlord.
It's like I always thought I wrote well.
Suddenly saw the landlord's post.
Only to find that I lost.
Because when I read the landlord's post.
I forgot my troubles and all the unhappy things.
The whole person seems to be bathed in the warm spring breeze in Hangzhou in April.
I decided to just read posts in the future.
A good post that makes people look warmer and warmer.
The kind of good post that makes people forget their troubles and forget all their unhappiness.
In other words.
I will only read the landlord's post in the future.
Under the heaven and on the thick soil, there are such strange people! The irony in conversation, the invisible irony, the high level and the deep realm are beyond our reach, idols! ! ! Taskmaster's article, a copy to show admiration.
After reading this post line by line, I couldn't help myself for a long time and shocked my whole life! How can there be such a wonderful post? I've been diving in bbs for many years, thinking I'm sticking to people. Why laugh and comment? I can't move friendship! I didn't expect such a good discount today. I am very excited! Landlord, it is you who let my young mind once again deeply understand what is a profound purpose and elegant writing.
Thank you! After reading this post, I immediately began to reply, because I was afraid that the later reply would not let more people know your wisdom and make these rare and good posts on the Internet sink into the sea. I can't bear such a crime! More importantly, it is an honor for my life, my family and even the society I live in to leave my own screen name after such an important, incisive and vivid post. Please be noble, tolerant and forgive me for being a little selfish! This post is ingenious in conception, unique in perspective and novel in technique.
Every word is considered, every sentence is exquisite, and the plot is tortuous, but it has never left the central idea. Use fascinating and faint words to show the truth of life and fully reflect your profound cultural background and rich social experience. It's a classic of irony, a masterpiece of curse. This is the highest realm that our generation has been striving for! As far as art is concerned, this post is already a classic, but its significance is far greater than the classic itself. As the saying goes: "scolding is invisible, ridicule is invisible, and laughing and scolding is the real merit!" " The landlord is really the originator of a new generation of satire! Originally, I had despaired of this eight-hanging community, and felt that there could be no tomorrow in this community, and my heart was full of sadness.
But seeing your post today has given me hope for gossip. You rekindled the spark of hope in my heart, you made my heart beat again, and you saved my cold heart and ignorant soul! I decided not to reply to any post in the gossip, but I read your masterpiece today and told myself that such a classic post must be returned! This is a good job that angels have been waiting for for thousands of years! God opened his eyes and let me see such a wonderful post when I was disheartened about the community.
3. Evaluation of the beginning and end of the composition [20 cases of excellent ending of college entrance examination composition]
●0 1, Balzac said that "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak".
20 cases of excellent ending of perfect composition in college entrance examination
After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim;
Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers;
When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet.
In this world,
A falling star cannot dim the starry sky.
A flower withers, and the whole spring can't be wasted.
Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter. Face suffering
●02, standing on the coast of history, tracing the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on Zehe and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.
Only when we set out will we reach our ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.
●04. Although you are still a seedling. However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky.
●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing seeds at any time, blooming at any time, decorating this long journey with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians who wear branches and brush leaves do not feel pain and tears, but they do not feel sad."
●06. Pessimists are defeated by themselves first, and then by life; An optimist conquers himself first, then life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future; An optimistic person has gone through many hardships and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible; In the eyes of optimists, the impossible becomes possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From extraordinary people, it is easy for us to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows.
Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success.
●08. If you only see the black spots of the sun, your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish can really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings.
4. At the beginning of some good articles, write some opening comments, totaling 200 words: the friendship of modern people is very strong and fragile.
It is a treasure on the earth, and we need to cherish it. The irreducibility of friendship determines that it is an orphan.
We can have different friendships with different people, but not with the same person. Friendship is a tunnel that is dug deeper and deeper, and there is no turning back. An unforgettable friendship is as unforgettable as hatred.
The end: what remains in the history books is not the interests of haggling over every ounce, but mutual affection. Honest communication with friends can keep us sensitive to our true feelings, erase the dark clouds in our eyes and make our mood happy again. The beginning of unity: Every time I hear the song "Unity is Power", I always feel a lot, especially after the XX incident, the experience is more profound: a drop of water is insignificant, it will disappear when it seeps into the soil, but it will converge into a river forever.
Just like us, in the face of many difficulties, one person is always weak and powerless, but together, we can create countless miracles. Tolerance begins with: tolerance is the supreme virtue in human life.
Because tolerance contains people's mind, because tolerance can transcend everything, because tolerance needs a broad heart. Because tolerance is the most important part of human emotions, which can melt the frost in my heart.
The lack of tolerance will make personality degenerate from greatness to even ordinary. End: Life is often complicated and often dull.
It is precisely because tolerance is like water that complicated things become pure after filtering; It is because tolerance is like fire that insipid becomes more and more distinct through calcination; It is precisely because of this poetic tolerance that life is endowed with art and eternity. The beginning of understanding: understanding is like a cup of tea, which dilutes the misunderstanding between us; Understanding is like spring breeze, which blows away the hard ice that separates the world; Understanding is like a cold plum, which indicates that the warmth of the soul will come to spring; Forgiveness is a rainbow, which makes emotions that have never met shine.
The end: The deceased is like this, and the waves of history have washed away the feud of the dynasty. Today, there are neither overlords nor majestic kings; We pursue unity, enterprising, harmony and equality. We should also keep that quiet and empty, show people understanding with every sentence and expressionless way, and cooperate and communicate with people with understanding. Only by grasping understanding can society progress; Only by grasping understanding can human beings have wealth.
Understanding begins: understanding is the crystallization of friendship; Understanding is the flower of trust; Understanding is the aura of mutual concern between people. It can turn misunderstanding into a small flaw that embellishes beauty. In society, people's mutual understanding can make this common home more prosperous and stable.
Conclusion: I believe that misunderstanding can become a beautiful flower one day, because it is watered by understanding! Sharing begins: who will listen to the voice in your heart in a lonely life? Looking ahead, who will appreciate the beauty in your eyes? The mountain is green, the water is Ying Ying, and a song "Mountain Flowing Water" is played, shaking the mountain and stirring the waves. Therefore, Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi appreciate this mutual understanding.
It is enough to have a bosom friend in life! Conclusion: Sharing is a kind of fraternity. If you learn to share, you will learn to live. Sharing is a kind of ideological depth. While thinking deeply, you share the pain of your friends.
Sharing is a belief in life. When I understand sharing, I understand the meaning of existence. Happy sharing, painful commitment.
When you share with others, you shoulder a heavy responsibility. Make him happier, let all the pain slip away, and let the sunshine fill your heart.
The beginning of collective interest: what is the concept of collective? The collective is a team. The so-called unity means caring for, loving and returning to the collective. Here I will talk about,,,, and the ending: because of this, we must unite as one, because we are a collective. ,,,, and the return begins: (1) The grass is returning to spring; Flowers are colorful, that is, they are spent in return for sunshine; Snow is thousands of miles away, is that snow or the north wind? Life is a beautiful reward.
(2) The green leaves release themselves freely, set off the lotus and squeeze out the shade. Although no one appreciates them, they eventually wither and die, but they believe that the next summer will still be full of green. Snow, enduring deep loneliness, protects crops with its own body. Although it finally melts into water, it does not regret, because farmers will smile.
May, facing the snow, alone. Although it can't change the silence of the surrounding environment, it firmly believes that the first news of spring and all the colorful love are its best rewards. I heard a voice, an angel's voice, in the bustling crowd and the hurried footsteps. Good people always have good dreams, and paying always pays off.
The end: The world always hopes that the world will give itself much in return, but ignores how much it has paid for the world. The invisible scale between heaven and earth is fair to everyone, and only pay will be rewarded.
Just like a song: there is justice in the world, and there is always a reward for paying; Saying is not as good as doing, and doing what you want to do is to be the best ... Only by letting yourself pay and be the best can our life be better. Gratitude begins: the fallen leaves hover in the air, forming a grateful movement, which is the tree's gratitude to the earth that nourishes it; Baiyun floats in the blue sky, drawing pictures of people, which is Baiyun's gratitude to the blue sky that raised it.
Because of gratitude, there will be this colorful society, and because of gratitude, there will be sincere friendship. Because of gratitude, we know the true meaning of life: with a grateful heart, go to see the society, parents and relatives, and you will find how happy you are, let go of your mind and let the drizzle wash away the pollution in your heart.
Learn to be grateful, because it will make the world better and life more fulfilling. The beginning of collective warmth: Uncle Lei Feng once said: A drop of water that does not enter the sea will never dry up. Only by integrating itself into the collective cause can a person be most powerful.
At the end: "Young trees are hard to weather; A hundred miles of forest can withstand the howling wind. "Let's take the initiative to care about the collective, be enthusiastic about doing things for the collective, and sincerely serve the collective! The relationship between teachers and students begins: there is one profession that is the most beautiful, and that is teachers; There is a landscape that is the most meaningful, and that is the soul of the teacher; There is one emotion that is most touching, and that is the relationship between teachers and students.
We have the same.
5. The beginning, the end and the beginning of a good composition. The final comment was engraved in the spotlight-one of the ways to fire the first shot: straight to the point, honesty and trustworthiness are the fine traditions of our Chinese nation.
For thousands of years, people have emphasized and respected honesty. The wind of good faith is simple and mellow. The longer the history, the more the spirit of good faith fills China and the more the light of good faith shines on China.
Honesty has long been integrated into the blood of our national culture and has become an indispensable part of cultural genes. "Honest" youth is beautiful flowers in March, colorful sun rain in July and burning red leaves in October; It is the rising sun of the spray, the hundred ge of competition, and the eagle fighting the sky; It is playing the strings of joy, it is a bumpy and persistent stream flowing to the sea, it is a straight poplar tree, full of lush green and blue sky warm embrace. The second method is to quote famous sayings and literary talents to highlight that if the cause is mixed with emotional factors, it is doomed to fail; Managers in our company are determined to have similar faces.
-Ford's "2003 college entrance examination composition puts the heart right" is in the eye, and the rain is also the eye; When I am in my heart, it is also rain in my eyes. -Wang Guozhen Hamlet once shouted: "Man, see yourself clearly!" And I want to say, "man, see the world clearly."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " "Eye of Wisdom" Mark? Twain said, "One foot weaves violets, but it leaves fragrance on your feet." .
This is tolerance. "tolerance, starting from here" begins with the third method: arranging literary seeds and breaking through the imprisonment of rock strata; Facing the light; The cloud influence of eagle storm flew into the sky; The steed broke through the influence of the reins and ran for vilen; Haiyan rushed to a more violent storm.
What is "freedom", which comes quietly, leaving no trace, but arouses all kinds of light dances? ? What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing? ? What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season? ? What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth? ? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time." Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind."
? The tramp said, "This is just a dream." ? ("Happiness with Answers") Method 4 begins: the fable is fresh. A mother always thinks her son is a genius.
Even though he broke more than a dozen plates when he was a waiter, he lost his wallet when he got off the bus for the second time, and sealed all the letters sent by others when he was a postman. Finally, my son went to the army.
Three years later, the mother proudly attended her son's review ceremony. When people looked at the passing team and laughed, mother shouted excitedly, "Oh, dear Paul! They are all wrong, only you are right! " Emotion influences the cognition of things 1987, 75 Nobel Prize winners met in Paris.
Someone asked a Nobel Prize winner, "Which university and laboratory did you learn the most important thing?" Unexpectedly, the white-haired scholar replied, "It was in kindergarten." The scholar's answer was recognized by the participating scientists.
The fifth method at the beginning of "The Starting Point of Wisdom": It is better to quote poetry than to say that I don't think about whether I can succeed/since I have chosen a distant place, I only care about hardships. -Guo Wang "2002 college entrance examination composition mentality choice" flowers in the corner! When you admire yourself, the world becomes smaller.
-Bing Xin, you look at me for a while and the clouds for a while. When you look at me, you feel far away, and when you look at the clouds, you feel very close-"Far and Near" Gu Cheng Almighty Phoenix Head ● Youth is the nectar made of the blood drops of the will and the sweat of hard work-lasting Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness. Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.
Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.
● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.
● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart. How much laughter friendship has aroused and how many tears friendship has dried.
The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends.
(Friendship can be changed into other words) ● Yingying Moonlight, I have the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; Long life, I want to pick the most important thing in the world-perseverance. If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird.
Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear.
(The lines can be changed in other words) ● Perseverance is the condensation of a stone and a sand on the levee of a thousand miles. Only by accumulating little by little will there be grandeur without seeing the head before and the tail after; Yi.