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1. Why do children love to write "crossing" stories? The Ming Dynasty became a prince, and the Three Kingdoms became all-powerful heroes ... On the Internet, such crossing novels are very popular, and now many primary and secondary school students also play "crossing" in their compositions.

Writing literary drama "through" and "through novels" means that the protagonist of the novel has changed from his own time and space to another time and space for some reason, which is very common in online novel creation. Recently, Mr. Tang, the second-grade head teacher of a private school, arranged an essay entitled "Fate". Unexpectedly, three of the more than 40 students in the class "crossed": some became princes of the Ming Dynasty and successfully escaped several assassinations; Some went to the Three Kingdoms, defeated Cao Cao, Liu Bei and Sun Quan, and unified the Three Kingdoms. Others "cross" to other planets and become negotiators, mediating disputes between other planets and the earth.

Children's imagination amazes adults. Coincidentally, a senior student in a primary school in Hangzhou began to write a weekly diary of "crossing the body": "Tonight, my father didn't go hunting.

He stayed outside the snow cave, waiting for his prince to be born. All his subjects accompanied him.

Lying on the edge of the cave is my mother, who is only four years old-for a wolf, she is in her prime. At the moment, she is trying her best to endure abdominal convulsions. She tried not to make a sound. She didn't want her father outside the cave-the great king-to worry about her ... "It turned out to be the wolf prince in the fairy tale.

"'We have detected a new set of signals. Tonight, they will act and the fox's tail will be exposed! Min Qixian was shocked. Is this a plan? ..... "It turned out to be a novel about the war of liberation, quite like" Latency ". Ren Lei's composition "I am now in my fifties, and one day I happened to meet Kong Yiji who had been away for many years. He is lame and white-haired ... "The little author wrote goodbye to Kong Yiji through time and space.

"This' time travel' weekly diary is becoming more and more popular in the class. Since last year, I have been able to read several novels in the students' weekly diary every Monday, and they are all original.

Many students even began to write serial novels. Teachers say that students' "cross-body" compositions not only have fairy tales and military themes, but also campus stories such as dunks. "The words are smooth and the stories are wonderful, better than usual."

Can you realize your dream? Why do children nowadays love to write "crossing" articles? Some teachers think it is influenced by online novels. "Fast-food reading" such as comics and online novels is easy to understand and easier to use. Students feel that "crossing the text" is fresh and fun, and they like to imitate it. People in education believe that children love to write "crossing articles", which also shows that life is too monotonous and dull.

Most of them are "two points and one line", either going home or going to school. Attend training classes at weekends at most. Even for spring outing and sports meeting, the ability to find life materials is very weak because of writing every year. In contrast, the imaginary world is more colorful and more writable.

Some teachers believe that children have some unrealistic dreams in real life, which can be realized through "crossing", or "heroic dreams", or live a life they like. Netizens support the teacher's entanglement. Most parents and netizens expressed support for their children to write "crossing" compositions.

The parent netizen "Flying Angel" said: "My baby is also writing a novel, or in serial form." Parents "Ma Wei" said: "As long as children can write, they all support it.

Write as you like, and support your child's imagination. However, while people are happy that their children's long-lost imagination has been "activated", teachers feel quite contradictory.

Some teachers worry that children are used to writing novels. What should they do in future exam compositions? Immersed in the virtual world, will it lead to no dividing line with the real world, so as to do some absurd things? There are also teachers who say that writing "through the text" makes students fluent, but "through the text" is more like a novel than a traditional composition. Is it suitable? .

2. Through the composition "Crossing and conquering everything!" Recently, the word "crossing" has frequently appeared in people's sight. Time-crossing refers to the event that a character moves from his own time and space to another time and space for some reason, so time-crossing drama appears.

When it comes to time travel drama, we are actually no strangers. It appeared in the early days of our country. For example, in recent years, Hong Kong dramas "Searching for Qin" and "Myth" have all set off a "cross wind". During this period, as long as you turn on the TV and computer, relevant reports will come in droves, and for a while, strong winds swept through the streets and alleys of the country. Cross-wind theme seems to be a new TV drama theme, and cross-wind drama has become a fashion.

In today's increasingly competitive society, people's life is getting faster and faster, everyone is busy with work, study and life, and the psychological pressure that comes with it is getting bigger and bigger. So they hope to release the pressure in some way, and TV, as a tool for people's daily leisure, will naturally become a good decompression tool for people, and TV entertainment will emerge as the times require. Almost all of these themes have the same plot pattern: the protagonist living in the contemporary era suddenly falls into just visiting because of some misfortune, and returns to a certain dynasty in history to get in touch with real historical figures.

But I still don't approve of seeing through Yue Opera, novels and movies, because seeing through Yue Opera, novels and movies is not only a waste of time, but also an obsession with imagination, not without reality, which makes learning plummet. Moreover, the word crossing does not exist in reality, but an imaginary phenomenon. Regardless of whether there is reality. If there is, then history will change and become a world that can change history at any time. How messy will the world be? As said in the Spring Festival Evening "Golden Branch Stabs Qin": Doing so will confuse the next generation and mislead history.

3. Crossing the winter is a topic of composition.

"If winter comes, can spring be far behind?"

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With the coming of winter, people put on thick cotton-padded clothes to keep out the cold wind and frost. With the coming of winter, everything E799BE5BAA6E79FA5E98193E4B893E5B19E3133262353430 entered a "dead silence" period, leaving people with eyeful fatigue. ...

That winter, the Clivia I planted became sick as early as two months ago. When winter comes, it loses all its green color and becomes a pile of dead branches. I'm sorry that months of hard work went up in smoke. In order to reassure myself a little, I didn't throw it away immediately, nor did I take it out of the flowerpot immediately. I just left it as it is.

In this way, I spent the winter of that year in regret. Every time I touch the cold flowerpot, I feel sad and helpless in my heart. Now that I think about it, I can still feel the long winter.

After the spring of the following year, I made up my mind to get rid of the dead branches and make room for planting orchids in flowerpots. So, I dug up the soil with a small shovel and prepared to uproot it.

But at this moment, a miracle appeared. As soon as I put the shovel into the dry thick soil and scraped it twice, I heard a crisp crack, and then I saw the fragments of the ceramic flowerpot scattered all over the floor. However, when I look carefully, it is the root of Clivia, which seems to have died last winter, wrapped in layers of soil and as thick as a white beard. Instead of necrosis, it became more and more lush and branched again and again. Now, it is so lush that it fills the whole flowerpot, just like a dragon's paw sticking tightly to a porcelain flowerpot. No wonder it breaks at the touch.

Seeing this, I quickly trimmed the messy roots and replanted them in the pot. As a result, a month later, each flowerpot gave off a lovely Clivia bud.

I have to marvel at this scene. In the whole winter brewing, it can grow again and flourish. I was simply impressed by the miracle of this winter. This admiration is from the heart. From the eyes to the heart, I have to sincerely sigh its tenacious vitality.

Think about it, how stupid I was to give up the chance of a new life in such a hurry in winter. Thick cotton-padded clothes really cut off all the joy and hope brought by new life. But now I understand that the temporary "dead silence" is to let us appreciate life more truly and appreciate life.

In winter, plants can be reborn by longing for spring after the "dead silence" in winter. What about that guy? Winter can also look forward to spring, and you can get greater new life and hope. We should be awed by the magic of life, so we should show courage and action. Just like Clivia with withered stems and leaves, when spring shines on the earth, you will have the beauty like a Siberian butterfly, and then break the ice to find a brighter and brighter you.

As long as your heart is full of hope, you can cross the cold winter and enjoy the warmth of spring sunshine!

4. My first experience of crossing the future In order to save enough money to buy myself a tablet computer, I resolutely joined the "entertainment circle" in the summer vacation of 20 1 1, and joined the filming of the sequel "Happy Marshal" by Pig Bajie. According to the needs of the plot, I will travel through 1,300 years, return to the first year of Zhenguan of Emperor Taizong, and play a little monkey in front of the Monkey King the Monkey King.

Shooting will be done in location bases in many other provinces and cities. At the age of seven, I was away from my parents for the first time and left Shanghai to work hard for the first time. My nervousness and excitement are intertwined in my mind, leaving only one sentence in my mind: "It's not the raptors crossing the river ..."

When the crew settled in Zhejiang Wengang Hotel, it was already a branch on the moon, and the little actors in the same industry were very conscious. As soon as personal affairs are arranged, they gather in the appointed room to read the script, check the lines and practice the performance. Some of them are old players, and their singing became an instant hit! I was deeply moved by my own efforts.

In July, the weather is hot. In order to make the little monkey lifelike, I need to spend more than two hours every day sticking fluff on my face and body, jumping up and down on the shooting scene without air conditioning and sweating. Charlene Choi, the protagonist in the play, is a big star, but very close to the people. She often comforts our hard-working little actors with popsicles and takes photos with us.

When it comes to the most anticipated and happiest thing, it is nothing more than the time to eat every day. There was no table, and everyone put the box lunch on the flower bed, lined up in a row, which was spectacular. Although the lunch box is bigger than friends' faces, everyone always eats clean and fast, not as picky and exquisite as usual!

My daily life was disrupted for filming. I want to get up at five o'clock in the morning to make up, rest on the bus at noon and play until the stars are scarce at night. At this time, I realized that it is not easy to be an actor, and it takes hard sweat to do anything! The shooting progress is very slow every day, and everyone is dying of heat after a few months. Finally, several "little monkeys" suffered from heatstroke and were sent back to Shanghai. And I, thanks to the usual outdoor exercise, became the strongest and most persevering one, and persisted until the end.

When filming, my parents and grandma came to visit the class. I was always tough, but I couldn't help thinking about it again, and tears poured out like a burst of banks. Suddenly I feel that I have grown up, know the hardships, know the taste of missing my family, and understand the responsibilities that a little man should have!

Ah! My first solo trip, ah! My first acting career! The first journey of my life brought me a strong body and a serious attitude towards things, and gave me the opportunity to experience and grow in life!

I traveled through time and space to the 22nd century. It was warm spring at that time, but in the 22 nd century, it was ice and snow, which surprised me a little.

As soon as I entered there, my body seemed to be enchanted, and it shrank by 10 times and became a palm-sized villain. I'm a little scared to see myself become so small. Just when I was afraid that I couldn't go back, a robot as big as I am now came up to me and said, "People from the former world will come to us 10 times smaller, so don't be careful!" When he speaks, his tone is high and low, unlike what everyone thinks, his tone of voice is the same! Now I'm relieved.

I strode into the street, yeah! Everyone is not driving a car, but a fragrant "car". As I get smaller and smaller, I can only hold my head high and look at those strange cars. Just then, I saw a huge rectangular house in front of me. Out of curiosity, I went over and took a sip of milk with difficulty before climbing in. In this house, there are a group of scientists and three or four robots. Those scientists seem to have three eyes. I just climbed in and their eyes were fixed on me. Somehow, they quickly avoided me. Those robots saw me, too, but they didn't run away. One of them came straight to me. He said to me, "You must apply an ointment called deodorant, or you will smell sour." This smell is only available to humans in 2 1 century. "I said, it gave me a layer of transparent things, painted out, the scientists also came out. They told me that in the 22nd century, the world was occupied by a monster named Three Eyes. It was born afraid of warm wind, so it turned the whole world into ice. We are building a huge robot for world peace and preparing to fight him tomorrow. Soon, a huge robot was completed. Its whole body is mainly red, which makes people feel warm at first sight. There is a machine that can spray hot water on the right hand side and a red button on the left hand side. When the robot needs to be repaired, press it, and the robot can automatically repair it in five seconds. Everyone decided to call it "warmth". But just when everyone thought the robot was very good, a loud "dong" sound rang in my ear. The controller that originally controlled the robot sat on the console, but it was accidentally overloaded. It turns out that scientists forgot to calculate the weight of the controller! I don't know why, but everyone's eyes are on me I think I'm unlucky. I'm light and small! But I was still reluctant, but for the sake of human happiness, I accepted the task gladly under their repeated entreaties.

The next day, I sat on the console of the robot, as if the world were going to be destroyed in my own hands. I adjusted my mood and walked out of the lab. As soon as I went out, I saw the big and terrible three-eyed monster. My heart trembled and I dare not imagine the later scene, but I thought about it for everyone, no matter what! I punched him at the beginning of the fight. "ah!" It gave a miserable cry. I thought it was so fragile that I knocked it down with one punch, but after a while, it stood up and kicked me again, probably because it kicked me too hard. I don't know why the warm call system suddenly cried. My heart panicked and my heart was pounding. What should I do? I'm a little overwhelmed. At this moment, I suddenly remembered the automatic repair button on my warm left hand. I climbed out of the console carefully and walked to the red button step by step. When I arrived, I pressed the button and ran back to the console quickly. Unexpectedly, I slipped and fell. Fortunately, at the moment when I was about to fall to the ground, I grabbed a thread and I got up bit by bit. At this time, the robot's automatic repair program started, and it began to tremble all over. I clung to the rope for fear that I would fly out. At this time, the robot gave a big shake and shook me to the sky. Fortunately, my landing site is actually the console! I secretly enjoyed my good luck and started fighting again. The two sides stumbled and there were more and more people around me. The battle entered a white-hot state, and time seemed to stop. Our every move affects countless pairs of eyes and hearts. I hope in my heart, but I feel that hope is too slim; Afraid of failure, I feel that I will not fail. In this way, the struggle lasted for several hours. Finally, I raised the robot's right hand and sprayed hot water into the three eyes of the three-eyed monster. I don't know why I sprayed water into his eyes, but I believe it will definitely beat him. Indeed, as soon as I sprayed its eyes, it fell and turned into water.

At that moment, the world of ice suddenly turned into a warm spring.

6. composition about crossing.

LZ is writing or watching. . . There is nothing to see, but suggestions to write. . . (The premise is that the composition you wrote was requested by the teacher or participated in the competition. . . )

Crossing it can be divided into several types.

Time travel can be to go back to the past, to the future, to one's childhood, to help oneself or to save regrets and so on. (Actually, I can think of others) or in the future. . . It can be going to ancient times, meeting people and things, and so on.

② Space crossing can be in books, comics, movies, or you can imagine one yourself (that is, overhead) and then realize something that is not realized in the real world.

-Then, be positive. If you write about love, it's definitely over.

You can lose something in the place you cross, and then find ~ ~ Oh, it's better to be modern.

You can also see people you have admired for a long time, and find that their greatness lies not only in their appearance, but also in their efforts, and then you should strive to become such a person yourself.

-It is suggested to quote words like Conan's Dream, always beginning or summarizing.

Well, I'm good at writing novels, but I'm still not sure about my composition, but I have to write something different and get a better test. Our teacher said that if there were subtitles, I would get extra points. . But you must have a good subtitle. . . Otherwise, points will be deducted. . . I hope LZ can be satisfied and write a good-looking composition.

7. How do primary school students write science fiction stories that travel back to the past? 1. You can use flashback. Make the story more confusing. For example, write what you see before you write the second paragraph about the modern life you have just experienced. The contrast is so great that you suddenly realize that you have crossed it.

2. After entering the storyline just set, you can use the interpolation method. For example, write about your experiences in the Qing Dynasty, and some things that remind you of your modern life. The advantage of this writing is that it will make your story ups and downs and fascinating.

It is best to use gorgeous words and beautiful descriptions at the end to immerse our readers in a beautiful atmosphere, thus suggesting the theme and creating new opportunities.

The above is my humble opinion on writing for many years, hoping to help you.