1. A 500-word essay about the overall structure of the total score

If it is an examination-oriented essay (argumentative essay), it can be like this:

1 .The beginning must be eye-catching, preferably concise. You can use fixed sentence patterns (such as parallelism, personification), quote famous quotes, make analogies to others (such as some people think so...some people think so...but I think so...), and get straight to the point. , quote a short story...

2. The total score structure is divided into three types: juxtaposition, contrast, and progression. (Take strength as an example) A tie: There are 4 types: (1) Strong is** (2) Strong can** (3) We are strong because** (4) To be strong, we should** B Contrast: positive first and then negative. Let’s first talk about the benefits of being strong, then transition in the middle (however...), then talk about the disadvantages of not being strong, and finally summarize the C-level entry (this kind is more flattering, has both words to write, and seems to have deeper thoughts): What is being strong? ——Why you need to be strong——What you need to do to be strong——What does it mean to real life

3. At the end, you should be very literary, quoting famous sentences or sighing a few words will do. 2. Use Total score, overall structure and chronological order. Write a 500-word essay about a scene.

As the saying goes, "You don't see the mountains when you return from the Five Mountains, and you don't see the mountains when you return from Huangshan." During the summer vacation, my mother and I went to Famous Mountains with a group. Your Huangshan. Huangshan has four wonders: strange pines, strange rocks, sea of ??clouds and hot springs. The tour guide told us that it was too late to soak in the hot springs, and the sea of ??clouds depended on chance. What we mainly saw were the strange pines and strange rocks.

On the second day after arriving at Huangshan Scenic Area, we were officially going to climb Huangshan. We got up early, took our cameras, and went to the foot of Huangshan Mountain. Because there were so many people during the National Day holiday, we waited in line for more than 3 hours and finally got on the Yuping Cableway. From the cableway, I looked down and saw cliffs everywhere, with peaks standing straight up. Decorated by pine trees, it looked very spectacular. I quickly took out my camera and took pictures. After getting off the ropeway, we and the tour guide first climbed up to the welcoming pine. The welcoming pine grew out from beside a large rock, with a tough and upright posture. Although the growth environment was difficult, it was still beautiful, strange, and lush.

After replenishing our strength at the welcoming pine, we began our journey over the surrounding mountains. Along the way, you can see many strange-shaped stones, some of which resemble the raised trunk of a mighty elephant; some of which resemble the crown on the emperor's head; and some of which resemble the trunk of Pig Bajie. They either stand on the top of a peak, climb on a hillside, or are accompanied by pines, forming a series of natural mountain scroll paintings. Soon, we climbed to the first mountain, Lotus Peak. In the small shop of Lotus Peak, I saw the gold medal. My mother promised to reward me with a gold medal after I climbed to Guangming Peak.

Then, we came to the long-awaited Xiantian. From a distance, it looks like a slender gap has been cut between two mountains, allowing only one person to pass. I was a little nervous at first, but when I climbed up the stairs to the sky, I felt much more relaxed. It was not as dangerous as it seemed. When we reached the end of the sky, there was a big rock above our heads, as if it was hanging in the air and about to fall. Climbing up to the sky, you will come to Aoyu Peak. There is a huge rock on Aoyu Peak that looks like a big fish, so it got its name. Then we walked through Gongyang Mountain and headed towards Guangmingding.

On the way to climb Guangmingding, my feet were already very sore and my waist hurt. I was so tired that I was sweating profusely and panting. My mother was beside me and encouraged me, "Is it hard?" , think about the Red Army's 25,000; whether you are tired, think about the revolutionary veterans. "I finally climbed to Guangmingding, 1860 meters above sea level. I was so happy. My mother immediately bought me a glittering gold medal with an inscription on it. With my name and date, this gold medal not only has commemorative significance, but also our persistence and sweat. Standing on the top and looking down, you can really see "all the small mountains at a glance". There is also a large Chinese weather station on the top. After taking a short rest at the top, we started to go down the mountain. On the way, we also saw the flying stone from a distance, which was the stone in the opening of Dream of Red Mansions.

3. Write a 500-word composition about a scene using the total score, total structure and chronological order

Looking back at dusk, I stood on the balcony, the sun was shining warmly on my face. Outside the window, it was cold. The wind is still there.

Suddenly, I forgot about the cactus I placed outside the window.

Look at it, although it is in the cold wind, it is still strong. The green palm pages are slightly replaced by soil, and every needle is still so sharp.

This is a pot of cactus given to me by my father. He said that it will look particularly beautiful when it blooms. I don’t believe it. Isn’t it just a pot of cactus that will bloom? Dad smiled and said, "You must be able to open it."

In spring, it does not bloom. In summer, it still does not bloom. In autumn, it still does not bloom. In winter, it may bloom.

Although the flower has not bloomed, there are two small palm pages on his big palm. Although in the cold wind, I can vaguely feel his strength.

I opened the window and took it in, oops. I was pricked by him, which was very painful. He seemed to be harmless, but he was able to give me such a blow, which made me feel a lot.

Looking at him in the window, I felt much calmer. Maybe my father just wanted me to grow up slowly like a cactus, even if I only grow two small pages throughout the year. At the same time, that delicate The fine acupuncture is just like being a human being, you must be on guard against others.

Thank the elders for the cactus with ulterior motives. . Ha ha.

You watch and change. . I can't make it up anymore. . Hahaha. . 4. An essay describing the overall score and structure of the scene (about 500 words)

After the rain

The rain was falling, moistening the earth. Quietly, the rain stopped, and the earth appeared full of vitality.

A rainbow spanned the sky, like a colorful bridge. The clouds floated slowly and leisurely. The sun broke through the white barrier and jumped out. The warm sunshine shone on the earth.

Birds dust the water droplets from their feathers, fly in mid-air, or fly to the wires to sing, just like the notes in the staff. The songs are crisp and graceful, very beautiful and beautiful.

There are crystal clear pearls gathered on the grass blades, reflecting the sunlight and shining dazzlingly. When they fall, they make a "tick-tock-tick" sound, as if they are playing a rhythm. Happy music.

The beetle musician strutted out from the cave, preparing to hold a concert. He stood in the center of the stage and sang loudly, vibrating his wings with all his concentration. The beetles behind him accompanied him, and the butterflies danced gracefully. .

The little flowers and the grass were also intoxicated. The little flowers bloomed with smiles and danced excitedly, and the grass kept swaying.

After the rain, how full of life and energy!

Going to the beach for the first time

There are many firsts in a person's life that will be unforgettable and treasured in our hearts.

When I went to the beach for the first time, I was fascinated by the sea. "Wow - wow", the waves hit the rocks, splashing crystal water, and the waves rushed to the shore, caressing the soft beach, and then reluctantly returned. Strips of silver were drawn on the beach, studded with shells. . The sea breeze blew slowly, and I greedily admired the charming sea.

I couldn’t wait to sit on the inflatable boat, row towards the sea, and let it float on the sea. I jumped into the water with a "plop" and sat on the swimming ring to play in the water. When I was tired from swimming, I lay on the beach to enjoy the sunshine and the beautiful scenery.

After a while, I was full of energy again. I piled up sandcastles, picked up shells, and made ditches. I stepped out of a big heart with my feet, decorated with shells. Lying in the love, I became a scene on the beach. I also ran on the waves, shuttled between the water and the sand, and felt how beautiful the world was. I was intoxicated by the sea. I loved the majestic waves and broad mind of the sea, as well as the fascinating scenery.

This will become the crystal clear wave in my heart.

Music Journey The summer night sky is dotted with stars, and the musical fountain in the square of District*** is particularly charming. At 20 o'clock, the performance begins, the music sounds, and the water splashes change with the beautiful melody With: Sometimes it is like a blooming flower, spreading its petals around; sometimes it is like a crystal clear, lifelike water butterfly, flapping its wings and flying around the pool; sometimes it is like a crystal clear barrier, making people intoxicated in the hazy among. . A piece of music is coming to an end, accompanied by colorful lights, full of poetry and painting. The most spectacular sight - "Er Dragon Play 'Pillar'" is displayed in front of us. We see a water column straight into the sky, with curved ground on both sides. Two jets of water sprayed through it, like two dragons. Isn't this exactly "two dragons playing with 'pillars'"? The onlookers screamed in amazement, with surprised expressions on their faces. They were all taken aback and were intoxicated by the wonderful scene. After the wonderful scene, a disaster fell from the "sky" - "heavy rain" It was about to come, and it hit us overwhelmingly. People fled in all directions. I was trapped in the crowd and could not escape. I personally experienced the feeling of "heavy rain" and made my whole body wet. At that time, I also saw some interesting things. Scene: Some younger children found it very interesting and jumped into the pool to play; some people who got wet were "too busy" twisting their clothes and hair; some boys simply Take off your clothes, wring them out, and throw them up, not caring about anything else. . Everyone was immersed in a joyful atmosphere, and laughter echoed throughout the square. This beautiful midsummer night, this charming musical fountain!

The shy spring comes quietly like a shy girl. With a wave of her hand, the earth becomes full of spring and full of vitality. Look, the earth revives, the birds sing and dance, and the hibernating little animals After sleeping in, we welcome this wonderful world; the grass pokes its head out of the soil and looks forward to this new world; the willow tree combs its hair by the stream, and the warm wind blows through the "hair flying"; Fear of hardships and keep working hard. . The sky in spring is exceptionally blue, the birds are soaring happily, and the clouds are changing quietly; the stream is exceptionally clear, and no matter how difficult the road ahead is, he keeps moving forward; the air is exceptionally fresh, with the breath of the rain, which is intoxicating. In this vibrant picture, the spring rain is continuous, nourishing all things. After the rain, the flowers bloom, dazzling and colorful, with crystal dew, making the flowers more beautiful, ah! Beautiful spring! After the rain, the beetle musicians strutted out from their nests. They flapped their wings with concentration, stood on the grass blades and sang loudly. Their voices were mellow and loud, and the beautiful melody flowed out like a spiritual spring. It is pleasing to the eye and "ear". Spring is so subtle, so shy, so charming, she can make people daydream and irresistible.

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On the balcony of my house Above, there is a very inconspicuous pot of cactus. The body of the cactus is like a piece of emerald, and also like a cute little hedgehog. Its whole body is covered with thorns like steel needles. Don't underestimate these thorns. This is the weapon it uses to defend itself and fight back! I was stung by it, and my mother was also stung by it. It hurt so much. My mother wanted to throw it away many times, but I refused because I have a special feeling for it. I love that pot of cactus. Spring is here. , everything wakes up, and a small cactus is drilled out of the cactus "mother". The small cactus looks so weak and fragile, as if a gust of wind can blow it away. And its "mother" is afraid that her children will be harmed. The "bullying" of the cold wind in early spring always blocked the cold wind with his own body, but the little cactus always climbed up. Finally, with the encouragement of Grandpa Chunlei and the help of sister Chunyu, the little cactus overcame many difficulties. , grown up. In late spring and early summer, buds grow on the cactus. Strangely enough, the cactus blooms in a very "sequential" manner. There are always two flowers blooming at the same time, like a pair of twin sisters, and like a little girl with a thorn on her head. The cactus flowers are white and fragrant, like a beautiful fairy wearing a white dress, dancing gracefully on the emerald stage, while the dress exudes an intoxicating fragrance. Autumn, harvest In this season, the cactus has grown up and has many uses! You can cut it into slices and brew it into a refreshing and delicious tea to quench your thirst. It can also be eaten. It is rich in nutrients and can be used as a bonsai... I can't say enough about it, but the most surprising thing is that it can be brewed into a potion. To cure diseases. People love the magnificent peonies and peonies, the various autumn chrysanthemums, and the fragrant osmanthus... But I only love the humble cactus, not only because of its appearance, but also because of its quality. . 6. A 500-word essay on an object with a total score as its structure

The night in Guazhu Lake is peaceful. Under the cover of night, Guazhu Lake has a unique scenery.

There were several small boats rowing back and forth on the calm lake, and the emergency lights on the bows and sterns of the boats shone like bright pearls floating on the water. As night falls, strolling on the Jinsuo Bridge, the newly built walking path around the lake, you will feel a refreshing breeze mixed with the smell of lake water.

Although the lake surface is calm, the two sides of the lake are bustling with activity. There are huge crowds of people in West Coast Park.

Along the way, there were groups of people dancing fitness dances amidst the cheerful music. Everyone had different dance postures, which was dazzling. Recreation projects are definitely essential, including trampolines, gun shooting, self-driving boats, etc.

There were the most people shooting guns in West Bank Park. A young man picked up a gun, squinted his eyes, pointed it at the rake, and hit the center of the rake with a "bang", followed by "bang, bang," "Bang!" Three gunshots were fired, with perfect hits, which is enviable. Suddenly I heard bursts of melodious music coming from North Shore Park.

It turns out that the famous musical fountain in Keqiao started. At first, there were pillars of water with uneven heights, and then slowly and suddenly they sprayed to a height of more than ten meters. It was very spectacular like a dragon coming out of the sea.

After a while, it turned into a big green ball, and the lights flickered on and off. Accompanied by the passionate Russian famous song "Holy War", the ball suddenly bloomed, and winding water columns sprang out from the middle, as if fairies descended from the earth and sprinkled beautiful flowers to the world, colorful.

The best is yet to come! I saw the water column rising straight into the sky, turning into a water curtain, and a water curtain movie was released under the light. As the Guazhu Lake water curtain movie came to an end, people walked in twos and threes towards the tree-lined path of East Bank Park. The lush camphor trees on both sides exuded a pleasant fragrance, making the night at Guazhu Lake even more intoxicating.

7. The total score and structure of the essay describing the scenery is 500 words~~~~To describe the scenery

Looking at nature, there are charming colors everywhere: the first breeze blows, it is the spring when thousands of trees are green, this is A delicate season; the first ray of sunshine shines, it is the summer when the fish are leaping and the lotuses are blooming, this is a refreshing season; the first golden piece spreads, it is the autumn when the grain is harvested, this is a lonely season; the first piece of Snowflakes are falling, it is a cold and depressing winter, this is a warm season. Nature makes my world extraordinarily beautiful.

When the spring rain falls freely, it always touches my heartstrings and brings me into the world of smoke, mist, sand and dust. The drizzle, like drops of nectar, makes me feel the vitality of life. They allow me to get rid of the constraints of the world, let go of my mood, run wildly in the void, and chase in loneliness.

When the summer wind blows gently, green rushes towards me. The mountains are as green as blue and the water is as clear as a mirror. Wandering among them, you will feel the infinite charm of nature. In my free time, I like to sit on the windowsill, open the window, let the afterglow of the sunset shine on my face, and let the cool summer breeze blow selflessly. No matter how much resentment or melancholy there is in my heart, I can let it blow away, leaving only the blue sky in my heart and letting my thoughts fly. At this time, I can't help but shout in my heart: What a wonderful life!

When the autumn moon passes over the earth, I always like to lie on the bed, turn on the CD player and listen to a piece of cheerful music. Although the autumn rain continued outside the window, and although the wind was blowing and the clouds were low in the night sky, my heart was not tinged with any sadness at all.

When the winter snow falls slowly, the lights inside and outside the house are intertwined with the falling snowflakes, like a flying note, like a beautiful picture, making you think a lot. After a while, the children will cheer and build snowmen and have snowball fights. Thinking about the scene when I was a child, a kind of joy inexplicably welled up in my heart. If it's Christmas, this snowflake becomes the best gift that nature gives us. Looking at the snowflakes outside the window, with the fantasy of expectation, sweet dreams will accompany you until dawn.

Nature is like an extremely gorgeous rainbow, life is like a cup of rich and delicious coffee; nature is like a melodious and euphemistic music, and life is like a vast blue sea. No matter whether life is sour, sweet, bitter or salty, looking at the beautiful nature makes my life full of interest.

When I savor nature carefully, I find that everything is so colorful; when I appreciate life carefully, I find that the world is so beautiful.

Comments: Nature is fair to everyone. We also enjoy the bright sunshine and the fresh air; we also enjoy the green of the vegetation and the blue of the sky. However, enjoying it does not mean that you can express it, and you may not be able to gain something. This is the difference between people. The author of this article carefully observed and deeply comprehended, and used neat and beautiful sentences to depict the colorful scenes of the four seasons, especially the use of parallelism, which shows the young author's unusual writing foundation.

8. The beautiful bamboo 500-word essay adopts the structure of total points

My hometown is very beautiful. There is a bamboo forest in my hometown. When I was a child, I often went to play in the bamboo forest, and my grandfather always accompanied me. However, I I know that grandpa likes bamboo very much. That day, the sky was very blue, and the birds were flying freely in the sky. How happy I was. I, who had just entered the second grade, held my grandpa’s hand and jumped like a little bird beside my grandpa. Have fun. Grandpa took my little hand and came to the bamboo forest. The air in the bamboo forest made people feel relaxed and happy. A gust of wind blew and the bamboos swayed their bodies. The sound was very nice. Looking around, the patches of green made people feel happy. It felt good to watch. Grandpa kept looking at the bamboo, lost in thought. I waved my hand in front of Grandpa's eyes. Grandpa gently pushed my hand away and smiled. I also laughed. I knew that Grandpa and Bamboo has such deep feelings. One day, it started to rain heavily. Grandpa took me to the window and asked me to appreciate the bamboo with him. The rain was still falling, hitting the bamboo constantly and shaking it. Shaking. Looking at the clumsiness of the bamboo, I laughed, but seeing my grandfather's serious look, I held back. After a while, I felt bored, so I asked my grandfather: "Grandpa, why do you like bamboo so much? Grandpa was silent for a while and then said to me: "Don't look at the bamboo that is so pitiful after being beaten by the rain. In fact, it is very tenacious. You see, the reason why bamboo grows so green and tall is because it has gone through many difficulties. It does not Afraid of hardships, not afraid of severe cold, not giving in despite the blows of wind and rain, and still living so strongly... I don't understand it, but I have some feelings for bamboo. The rain stopped, and the bamboo is still so beautiful, but more beautiful than before Greener. Before leaving, grandpa picked a bamboo and gave it to me. The bamboo is still placed in my room and is well preserved by me. Now, when I take out the bamboo, I will always be in a trance. Looking at it, I finally understood what my grandfather said: We must face difficulties with strength and not face difficulties.