1. Properly use the methods of comparison and comparison to prove the center of the article through the disparity and difference between things.

2. seize the opportunity to use parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.

3. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the hero in the text from the side.

4. The selection of materials can select themes with typical significance in life, and the events are more representative.

5. The material selection is novel and unique, free from mediocrity, and it is refreshing to sweep away the pedantry.

6. Although the ordinary things are described, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is deep, which highlights the essence of the event.

7. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

8. The selection of materials from various angles fully embodies the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full of images.

9. The selection of materials is too popular and not certain. It is representative, with old themes and old ideas.

1. Although the events with certain narrative value in life have been selected, the underlying truth of the events has not been deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation. Composition evaluation of music 2

1. It is out of tune with the times, and the content is too old.

2. The theme is focused, the center is clear and the idea is clear.

3. The viewpoint is clear and the likes and dislikes stand clearly, which makes people clear at a glance.

4. the theme is directly highlighted in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.

5. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.

6. The center is not clear enough, and the concept is not clear enough.

7. The theme is obscure, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unclear.

8. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, and the words are not true.

9. The expression is not clear and persuasive.

1. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in the thought.

11. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

12. The plot has strong twists and turns, and accidents occur in ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.

13. The plot changes are not conventional, and there are occasional suspense and waves, which are unexpected. The development process of the event reflects the author's innovative ideas.

14. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.

15. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of originality.

16. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it is like keeping a running account.

17. The process is detailed, but the ending is short. The structure is unreasonable, giving people a sense of anticlimactic.

18. The concept is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.

19. The plot fluctuates greatly, and the transformation is too fast, which is not coherent enough.

2. Rhetorical metaphors are vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article. Composition evaluation of Music 3

1. The author of this article introduced the origin of the name to us with simple language. The article has a complete structure, distinct levels, fluent language and comprehensive narration. After reading it, people feel that the little author must be a child who loves reading and has a large amount of knowledge.

2. The exercises don't pay attention to the refinement of language, such as "Today is August 15th, which is traditional. Today, my mother got up early", and the second "Today" appears twice, which can be omitted. The article also pays no attention to the correct use of punctuation marks, such as using quotation marks in everything.

3. This article is beautiful in language, easy to understand, and quotes a lot of poems describing the Mid-Autumn Moon, expressing the author's yearning for his family. This article is both ideological and artistic, and it makes people think for a long time after reading it. It's a good exercise.

4. This is a lyric prose. The author likes Sister Tanabata's article, so as to feel her living conditions and thoughts. The article points out the topic several times and directly expresses the theme of "I like it". The language of the article is poetic, eloquent and infectious. Among them, "Wen Zhang" should be "article".

5. This is a narrative article. With the help of my father's mouth, the author introduced us the origin and the author's determination to be a patriotic person like Qu Yuan.

6. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narration of qi is orderly and not messy.

7. Be detailed and appropriate, with clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.

8. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and lifelike, the characters are distinctive and prominent, and the image is full and vivid.

9. set off the mood of the characters with the environment, and the scene blends, and the situation is in the scene, and the scene is with the scene.

1. The imagination is rich, the conception is strange and not divorced from the truth of life, and the association with life broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel lively and interesting.

11. The description of the scenery is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate and appropriate, and the scene is born with emotion, which is like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.

12. Imagination is wonderful, which not only comes from life, but also surpasses life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.

13. The description of the event process is detailed and concrete. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and ability to plan the layout of the article.

14. The appearance description is vivid, and the characters' faces are lifelike and properly fitted, just like a mirror reflecting the characters' personality, which is really called "life depends on each other".

15. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the character, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the character.

16. The expression is vivid and vivid, with few words, which outlines the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.

17. The content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

18. The narrative is brief and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

19. The details are not properly arranged, and the priorities are not clear enough.

2. The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is no point description.