2. Lyrics will kill you with artistic conception-on vincent fang's lyric works
. < Love before BC > > ,< < Answer straight > > Wait, this time, I only chose this recently popular song to analyze it, so as to grasp/summarize some personal characteristics in his works as a whole. This song is Chinese-style music, and novices may not know much about what Chinese-style music is. In fact, the simplest and vulgar statement is that the combination of China's five-tone music and RNB style in Europe and America is called Chinese style, so how do professionals explain it in theory? Good question, I still don't understand the popular expression of Chinese style music by professionals! _, the theory is even more incomprehensible. Hehe, however, this does not prevent us from creating lyrics. From my personal point of view, vincent fang's lyrics are very good in overall artistic conception, reaching a height that others can't reach. However, some of the words expressed in the local details of the lyrics are hard, and most of them simply can't stand scrutiny, so he can't be called a master of lyrics writing. Can only be called a successful pop song lyricist ......
The eaves are like cliffs, wind chimes are like the sea, and I'm waiting for Yan to return
The time is arranged to perform an accident, and you quietly walk away
The story can't be seen clearly in the dense fog outside the city
You can't hear that the wind doesn't exist, but I'm feeling
P/S: Ok, let's look at the words in this paragraph, starting with "The eaves are like" Do you understand what it means? Hehe, I don't. I only heard that time is like the sea, wind chimes are like the sea, and it's really the first time to see it, and eaves are like cliffs. It's ridiculous to dream about writing it. It's good to turn eaves into cliffs. It's outrageous to write it purely and pursue artistic conception, but sometimes the effect is too bad. I hope novices can learn its essence instead of what he wrote badly ...
Well, let's. The first sentence means that I'm waiting for you, the second sentence means why we parted, the third sentence means that the past has become a story, and the fourth sentence means that I'm still looking back on our past and looking at the writer's writing techniques as a whole. This is the artistic expression of a master. Taste it carefully. Do you think there is anything wrong? What? It's normal? Can you understand every line at once? ..... That shows that your thinking logic is more jumping, more open and more lively than normal people, and you don't practice writing such words much, which is simply a waste of time. _
I'll talk about my personal opinion, which is a relatively jumping way of thinking, that is, a way of highlighting artistic conception. The lyrics omit some sentences that are not very important in the context, causality, subject-predicate relationship and so on. Make the content expressed more, meaning and ideas more. Why is it relative? It is not difficult to understand. If the meaning before and after is absolutely independent, the ghost can understand what the lyrics are written all over. Hehe. The lyricist has summed up what he wants to express in these short sentences, expressing a lot of content, which is realistic, picturesque, figurative, emotional and rhyming. I try to write by myself, although I can express my meaning clearly, but the content information expressed in just a few lines can reach half that of vincent fang at most. For example, I write one line in this paragraph in my own way. Then compare with Bibi
vincent fang's story in vincent fang. I can't see the dialogue clearly in the dense fog outside the city.
Love poet's story is very helpless. It can't be separated outside the city.
Well, now everyone can see the difference, hehe, the same number of words, the same format and the same meaning. Although mine is more fluent, the literal meaning is understood by others at a glance, which is more in line with the appreciation and understanding ability of most people. However, the expressive force of artistic conception is much weaker. In just one line, the content expressed is a little less than that of vincent fang, and one line is almost the same. If you write ten lines, think about it. How much is it worse than that of vincent fang? _ This is the higher stage of lyrics writing-using a few lines and words to express what others have been wordy for a long time but have not been able to understand, write your artistic conception, so that people can realize what you want to express and show to others without looking closely, instead of letting others bother to guess. This is the connotation of words, and you need to stand at a higher level, carefully scrutinize and write it. Whether it can be understood by others, many people say that their works have a lot of connotations. Whether they are specific or not, you won't know until you read them. That's vulgar. You can understand them after thinking about it. It's a master of language, which makes people unable to understand and wonder. That's Oracle Bone Inscriptions's _
Who opened the ending on the windowsill after waking up
Then. These two sentences are very short. The purpose is to link the past with the future. "Who opened the ending on the windowsill when I woke up?" Open the ending. We often open ... and open the ending. Can you open it? Hehe, although the literal meaning is not very common, the whole meaning can still be understood by everyone through the sentences before and after, and this term does not need to be true. Just like the following sentence, "The future as thin as a cicada's wing", the lyricist obviously deliberately avoids some popular languages and chooses to use some sentences with similar meanings, but not spoken. Some sentences need special modification, and some sentences need vernacular, which depends on the original writing intention of the work. Since this work is fixed in Chinese style, it is of course better to use words close to classical aestheticism, and it is not a failure to use some commonly used modifiers. It can also add points to the work if it is used well. Hehe, generally speaking, this paragraph is so-so, and the artistic conception has arrived, and the general meaning can be understood, that is to say, I woke up from my dream and came back to reality. Good thoughts are shattered ......
I'll send you away thousands of miles away. You are silent in black and white.
Perhaps you shouldn't fall in love too far away in the silent age.
Are you still away from the end of the world?
It's hard to guess how to wait for the piano.
P/S: Well, here comes the best part. Although vincent fang's ci has many defects in sporadic parts, His ci also shows his uniqueness, showing his master demeanor and corresponding brilliance with music. "You are silent in black and white", at first glance, it doesn't make sense. After careful consideration, we know that the previous films were shot in black and white. Through this black and white, you will feel a group of movie pictures in the 192s and 193s. I think the scene of breaking up in that era is just that, and it is nothing more than you sending me. _, although "You are silent in black and white" is a sick sentence in any way, considering the limitation of words and rhyme in music, this sick sentence is acceptable because it really plays its unique role. Through this sentence, it has brought rich imagination to others and great creative inspiration to composers. The lyrics as a whole have been sublimated, and the artistic conception has been perfectly expressed ...
RAP:
Only one line of moss is needed when I hear tears coming into the forest to find pear blossoms.
My temples are gray when I hear tears coming into the forest to find pear blossoms.
Only one line of moss is needed when I hear tears coming into the forest to find pear blossoms.
I'll wait for you when it rains outside the mountain. < p/s: The meaning of the sentences before and after the whole paragraph is incoherent, and I don't understand it. It probably means that I have been looking for someone who can replace you, but the person I am looking for is not as good as you, and I find that you are irreplaceable. I still have to look for you later _
You are covered in glass and covered with dust, and your flawless love
You came from the rain to poeticize your sorrow, and I got wet. Now
You are still fishing on the surface of the lotus, but you don't come back
You said that the flowers have gone blank
P/S: This paragraph is obviously weaker than the four lines in the first paragraph, regardless of the writing mood and meaning. These words are rote, so I won't analyze and comment on them any more. This passage is obviously a deliberately added one to meet the needs of the song's marching arrangement. It tastes like chicken ribs. If you take it out independently, it is suggested that you can throw it away as garbage ...
Well, through the above analysis, I believe that you have probably mastered the characteristics of some lyrics of vincent fang, and I believe that as long as you practice more, you will certainly achieve something. If you still want to learn someone's writing skills, you might as well divide the words of the person you like into paragraphs like me. According to my subsection comment method, I believe that there will be greater gains from your own research. I will write here first, and then write some personal lyrics in the next article. How can you write your own words so that more composers can compete to compose _ .......