Classic Documentary Commentary Example

With the development of documentary, it is no longer just a record text, it has begun to develop into entertainment. Below is a sample essay about classic documentary commentary that I compiled. Welcome to refer to it. Classic documentary narration sample 1

Subtitles of the opening shot

Choice starts here?

Happiness also starts here?

Then I graduated from college in 2011 and came to Dalian to work in the refreshing South from July. At that time, it was just for the "football" complex in my heart and the gently rocking battleship in Su Xiaoming's "Night at the Military Port". Of course, I couldn't see the young sailors smiling sweetly in their sleep, but along the way I saw many long and empty uphill roads, small Western-style buildings of medium height and medium height under the shadow of the sycamore trees, and the ancient train that swayed from Lushun to Dalian. ?

Who can bear to refuse this beautiful city?

The spring magnolia in Labor Park, the sunrise in the morning at Rhythm of the Sea, the reflection of the barges in Donggang in the middle of the night, and the Beida Bridge The sea breeze in the afternoon is sweeter than honey, and the vast aura of Xinghai Square has not yet been enclosed. Long live Street, Bulao Street, Qiqi Street, Yide Street, Wusi Road, Gorky Road, Changchun Road? I don’t know from which moment I knew I couldn’t live without it.

What I cannot live without is this place that gave me a livelihood and a dream. I love this place so much, I am moved by her, feel at ease with her, and describe every story about her to my parents, brothers and sisters repeatedly and carefully. Time passed, and several years passed. As if in an instant, I suddenly became tired. Tiredness is not due to busyness, but perhaps because of the passage of time. Many things have become blurred, not just the old stadium in Xigang District, not just the pavilions in Longwang Pond, not just the gentle sea breeze on the Fisherman’s Wharf in Laohutan? It’s blurred. , as well as our inner peace, determination, and deep friendship for our personal ideals.

Have our dreams become bigger, or have our minds become smaller? Is it our social reality, or has our emotion faded? Is it that the desires in our eyes have become crowded, or is it the comments of others? We finally became entangled?

However, have you ever forgotten that every time we take the BRT in the early morning after the rain, we go from Renmin Road to Yan'an Road, from Xinghai Bay to Xiaoyao Bay, and from Zhongshan From the square to Xinghai Square, every scene through the car window is the footprints we have walked together.

We must not forget how much beauty these footprints bring to the city where we live. If you walk along the alley of Fangfang Mansion in the early morning, you can hear the truest heartbeat of your own, and you can also touch the warm sea breeze passing by the International Yacht Harbor in the morning light; if you attend a class on the campus of Shenyang Ligong University, and then Reawaken the good days of college to the tall poplar trees, and let the memories of the past be soaked with the fragrance of books; if you come to Longde Plaza in the afternoon and watch a Wong Kar-Wai movie, will you think of sitting in a nearby Starbucks? In a daze; if you come to Changbai Mountain International Resort on a sunny winter day and completely integrate yourself into the carnival of the ski resort, will you have a pleasure that transcends yourself?

Let us not forget, then One year, when we were tired of traveling, passing through the lights of thousands of houses in the city, we finally came to this home and began to give birth to new hope in Beijing. The joy and pride in our hearts healed how many days and nights were on our foreheads. The wrinkles carved on the city? Yes, if one day the satellite city is built, the Castle Hotel is completed, and the Tongzhou Beiyuan project is completed? If every corner of the city that is undergoing change is filled with our new footprints, what will happen to these cities? a development inspiration.

If we don’t sit there waiting, watching, and complaining, but stretch out our hands to build, love with our sincerity, and water with youth and sweat, we will hold on to and hope for a beautiful home. , will it make you even more unable to let go and leave?

Together with Yifang, we believe in the beauty of development, the preciousness of persistence, the vitality of creation, and use the affection of cultivating our homeland to pave the way for opportunities to rebuild our self-worth. In Dalian, in Shenyang, in Beijing, in Jiangxi, in Jilin, in Fujian, in Yunnan, in every city we have set foot in or have yet to set foot in? Fangfang invites you to go on the road together and write miracles into the future.

How much love you have for this home, you will receive much love. Your home will repay you the way you treat it well, and it will repay you the way you love it.

The subtitles of the ending shot (also need dubbing)

If you are the sun, it will definitely rise from the horizon

20xx, with Yifang

In love and responsibility, discover the true meaning of happiness together?

Rooted in one place, sharing a hundred years (slight emphasis) Classic documentary commentary sample 2

1. Introduction to the school

Dayi Township Central Primary School is 12 kilometers away from Hezhang County and located in Moshi Village, Dayi Township. It is lined with green trees, has a quiet environment and a pleasant climate. It is a treasure land for educating people. This semester, our school has 313 students, 6 teaching classes, and 21 teachers, including 11 with bachelor's degrees, accounting for 52.38 of the total teachers, and 10 with associate degrees, accounting for 47.62 of the total teachers. According to national regulations, All teachers’ academic qualifications meet the required standards. Since the launch of our school's 12th Five-Year Plan teacher continuing education project in 20xx, under the guidance of the County Education Bureau and in compliance with the spirit of the "Hezhang County 12th Five-Year Plan Implementation Opinions on the Continuing Education Project for Primary and Secondary School Teachers", we have carefully deployed and We have conscientiously implemented and creatively carried out teacher continuing education work, created a team of high-quality and high-level teachers, provided human resources guarantee for the comprehensive promotion of quality education, and achieved remarkable results.

2. Guarantee Mechanism

In 20xx, our school was based on the spirit of the Hezhang County Education Bureau document "Hejiaofa No. 20xx34" and the "Hezhang County Twelfth Five-Year Plan" ( "20xx - 20xx) Teacher Continuing Education Project Implementation Opinions", the leadership team carefully studied and studied carefully, and established the "Teacher Continuing Education Project" with the principal as the team leader, the vice president as the deputy team leader, and other administrative staff and teaching and research team leaders as members. The project leading group? The leading group has an office, with dedicated personnel in charge and responsible for office business work. The division of labor is clear, responsibilities are in place, plans are formulated, the work direction is grasped from a macro perspective, and continuing education special meetings are held regularly to study teacher continuing education work and provide timely Adjust the work ideas and form a united, hard-working and pragmatic teacher continuing education leadership group.

In terms of system construction, the leadership group carefully studied and implemented relevant documents from superiors, combined with the actual situation of the school, introduced an incentive mechanism, and linked teachers’ continuing education work with teachers’ annual assessment, merit evaluation, etc. Based on the principles of hierarchical management and hierarchical implementation, a series of teacher continuing education work management systems have been formulated and improved. In addition, our school’s annual investment in teachers’ continuing education funds increases year by year, which effectively guarantees the smooth development of teachers’ continuing education work.

3. The progress of continuing education work

Our school’s teachers’ continuing education work adheres to the idea of ??“strengthening abilities, improving quality, focusing on the classroom, and improving quality”, in order to “national training plan”. As a starting point, we should focus on improving teachers' moral quality, innovative spirit, and professional skills as the core, and focus on cultivating key teachers, strive to explore effective ways to build the teacher team under the new situation, and comprehensively implement quality education.

In the past five years, our school has focused on the work arrangements of the County Education Bureau and the Township Education and Management Center, with "Multimedia Courseware Production and Teaching Resource Application", "Legal Education and Subject Teaching", "Teachers' Classroom Teaching Ability "Cultivation and Training", "New Primary School Curriculum Standards", "Effective Classes? Problems and Countermeasures in Classes from the Perspective of Knowledge Construction", "How Teachers Improve Professional Ethics", "Effective Teaching? Issues in Primary School Chinese (Mathematics) Teaching and Strategies" as teaching materials, arrange experienced teachers from the school as tutors for each subject, organize regular training for all teachers in the school, and require them to write study plans, summaries, and study notes. At the same time, our school plans to select teachers from various subjects to participate in various trainings organized by provinces, cities, and counties based on the actual situation of teachers.

Through these trainings, teachers’ application of multimedia technology has been significantly improved, their legal concepts have been significantly enhanced, teachers’ ethics and style have been greatly changed, and their education and teaching concepts have also gradually changed. It allows students to actively discover and explore problems, so that students can learn to think and communicate during inquiry, and learn to cooperate during communication, and pay attention to students' personal experience and inquiry process. Classic documentary commentary example 4. Achievements

Hard work has yielded fruitful results. In the past five years, our school has won: . Teachers in the school have published 100 papers, and their teaching performance has always been among the best in the township. The achievements of continuing education have been fully demonstrated in our school.

5. Plans for future work

In the past five years, our school’s continuing education work has achieved some results through unremitting efforts under the guidance of relevant departments at higher levels. In the future, we will Continue to strengthen professional learning, increase training efforts, strengthen the study of educational laws and regulations, effectively change educational concepts, and strive to improve the overall quality of teachers in the school and promote the continuous progress of education in Dayi Township Central Primary School. Classic Documentary Commentary Sample 3

Part One: Opening (generally showing a slow pace)

(No commentary, with background music, broken footage, and division of labor among the program team) Presentation)

Shot composition: (all broken shots can use animated transitions, and can be presented in multiple frames, the order can be adjusted, and can be added)

Panorama? A hazy morning, choose A relatively open space in the temple (can be blurred and faded out). Close-up? The smoky incense burner should be photographed to give it a hazy feeling, and the focus should be on the smoke (fade in)

Close-up? The young monk ringing the bell ( Shot from the side, zooming in, zooming out, transition effect) Close-up? Kneeling pilgrims (pulling the camera, transition effect)

Panorama? Monks in a hurry to attend class (panning or following the camera)

Close-up? The old monk under the ginkgo tree (shutting the camera, transitioning to the ginkgo fruit or ginkgo leaf in his hand)

A set of empty shots that quickly show the temple (multiple frames are available) Presented) leads to the title of the film. The empty shot can be shown from the innermost part of the temple to the outermost part, like a kind of zoom shot, and finally it is pulled away from the four words "Xiangji Ancient Temple" at the door and stretched to the sky, thus the title "incense and fire" appears. (The pace of this group of shots must be slightly faster)

Part 2:

Commentary: Incense, which has been used as an incineration object since ancient times, is destined to be inseparable from fire. . Whether it is used as a spice to purify and calm the mind or as an offering, incense must be transformed in the process of use so that its essence can be highlighted. However, the incense used to worship Buddha happened to originate from people burning spice wood to purify the air. Incense has a special status and significance in Buddhist life. Because incense can remove all odors and impurities and make people feel comfortable physically and mentally, it is used as a sacred offering to Bodhisattvas and deities. At the same time, it is also used as a metaphor for the merits of chanting the Buddha's name. To practice impermanence, when burning incense, watch the incense smoke drifting away from the Dharma Realm, from form to formlessness, allowing people to realize the non-dual principle of form and emptiness. Pilgrims use the burning of incense to express their prayers and dialogue with the Buddha.

Shot: (This part can be changed)

1. Large close-up shot, introduced by the light of the incense or the burned incense. (Fade in) (Collect some ancient videos or pictures about spices, scenes of people burning incense, such as in palaces.)

　2. Collect video footage of burning incense in front of the Buddha (transition effect)

3. Panorama? Scene of pilgrims worshiping Buddha and offering incense (fade out)

Part 3:

Commentary:

On this day, It happens to be the first day of the eleventh month of the lunar calendar, which is the day of worshiping the Buddha as agreed by Buddhists every month. It's still dark, Bianshui in the south and Lishui in the west are still sleeping, and Li came to Xiangji Temple early to offer incense. He has no other hobbies on weekdays, so he likes to come here, especially on the first day of the new year. , fifteen, even more unbeatable. The dew wetted the ends of his hair, and his steps were hurried and firm.

The habit of offering incense and worshiping Buddha was originally influenced by his mother. When he was very young, Li would often go to Xiangji Temple with his mother to offer incense and pray. However, at that time, he was still young and ignorant, and he was very happy. They regard every trip to worship Buddha as an outdoor outing. Li placed the three incense sticks in sequence, lit them with candles, and held them gently with both hands, with his left hand on top and his right hand on the bottom. After many years, every time this moment comes, he still silently tells himself that he must never blow it out with his mouth. When incense burns, fire goes out. Fire is the source of incense, and incense becomes the continuation of fire. The rising smoke blurred my vision, but my heart was extremely clear.

Lens:

1. Panorama: A relatively open view of Xiangji Temple on a misty morning. (panning camera)

2. Long shot: hazy figures’ backs (following camera)

3. Close-up: dew on leaves, or slow motion of raindrops dripping. (Fade out)

4. Medium and close shot: (black and white shot) two children playing in front of the incense burner

5. Medium and close shot: Li went to offer incense, but only the hurried footsteps were photographed (Two camera positions are available)

6. Close-up: three incense sticks, discharge, light the incense, and extinguish it (a series of actions can be shot from the front with a close-up of the three incense sticks)

7. Close-up: rising smoke (two cameras are available for sideways shooting) inserting incense into the incense burner

8. Empty shot

Part 4:

Commentary:

In ancient times, a stick of incense was often used as a unit of measurement of time, and the burning of incense also indicated the passage of time. In Buddhism, the three sticks of incense also represent the past, present and future respectively. The incense in the furnace is burning bit by bit, changing quietly, and the ashes around it are accumulating more and more, just like time has been walking at its unhurried pace, making it difficult for people to notice, but at the same time, it is unknowingly be precipitated.

The change of time is always subtle and wonderful. It determines what will be ruthlessly erased and what will be preserved and polished over and over again. Wang and Xu were tourists from out of town, and they happened to catch up with the Buddha Day on the first day of the Lunar New Year. However, they did not come here because of its fame. Maybe it was just its simplicity that attracted them. I don’t know much about it, and I don’t know how to worship Buddha, but reverence and piety seem to be the attitude that must be held in any temple. Although time is changing people's inherent values ??bit by bit, and although they have a strong flavor of the times, this does not hinder their willingness to offer incense.

Lens:

1. Close-up: a close-up of the incense, showing the ash falling off during the burning process (a long lens can be used for this section)

2. Medium and close shot: birds on the branches Fly away

3. Panorama: Comparison of early morning and dusk scenes, interspersed with slow motion shots of water dripping from leaves

4. Panorama: The hurried footsteps of monks and the leisurely footsteps of tourists

5. Empty shot: Push the camera from the outside in to stay on the quaint building

6. Medium and close shot: The shot of two people taking pictures of the scenery with their mobile phones (oblique side)

7. Medium and close shot: Two people offer incense and worship Buddha

Part 5:

Commentary:

The burning of incense records the passage of time Time passes, and fire creates the inheritance brought by incense. Time has not transformed it beyond recognition. Xiangji Temple still retains part of its appearance inherited from the Tang Dynasty to this day, which is vaguely visible. Even though technology has changed life, the monks still adhere to the original Buddhist principles and Dharma, and hope to answer questions for everyone who goes there. Shandao Pagoda is a famous ancient temple in the Tang Dynasty. It was built in the second year of Shenlong (706 AD) by Li Xian, Emperor Zhongzong of the Tang Dynasty. It was built by disciples of the Pure Land Sect of Buddhism in memory of Shandao, the second generation founder. The pagoda is dilapidated and overgrown with weeds, but the monks chant sutras and worship Buddha here every day. The master sat and discussed the Tao, telling everyone the origin of the "precept scar". It was the incense that created the precept scar. Burning the body with the fire of incense served as a mark for the Han monks to receive the ordination. In fact, it also means to purify the body and eliminate karma. Just like burning the Buddha bones of eminent monks to obtain relics, it is also the purification of eternal life after bathing in fire.

It is at dusk, and the temple becomes even more solemn after being washed by the rain. This was the moment for the grandfather and grandson to offer incense to the Buddha. The old woman patiently taught her granddaughter how to offer incense to the Buddha, and kept telling her not to laugh. In ancient times, it was said that people who made incense were dyed with fragrance because of the incense. Buddhists said that people who worshiped Buddha burned incense to obtain the merits of the Tathagata.

Lens:

1. Empty lens: shooting simple buildings

2. Panorama: monks worshiping Buddha

3. Panorama: good way Tower, the camera falls from the top of the tower, advancing to the people worshiping the Buddha (the camera falls slowly)

4. Medium and close shot: the monk is telling the youth

5. Panorama: the master is Teaching

6. Empty shot

7. Panorama to medium and close shot: the old man narrating to the children

8. Close-up: the children laugh and the old man lights incense for the children

Part Six:

Commentary:

The incense in the furnace burned out, and the pilgrims dispersed one after another. As dusk fell, the monks began to hold evening classes, and the entire temple fell into silence. Only the faint sound of chanting and, soon, the deep sound of evening drums could be heard. One day is like a life, the purification of fire, the inheritance of incense, incense carries time, time records history, and what remains unchanged is the continuation of incense. Tomorrow, the incense in Xiangji Temple will be lit again.

Shot:

1. Close-up: the incense burns to the end, and the ashes in the furnace

2. Panorama: twilight, the crowd disperses

3. Long shot: Dusk Drum

4. Memories: Smiling faces of old people and children, monk’s narration (slow-motion close-up)

5. Temple panorama: pan to the sky