1. She stood at the front of the ten-meter-high platform, calm and elegant, with white clouds seeming to float above her head and birds flying past her.
Combining movement and stillness, using movement to contrast stillness. The dynamic of white clouds floating and birds passing by is in sharp contrast to Lu Wei's "calm and composed" static, which highlights her "calm, composed and elegant" characteristics, paving the way for the following victory.
2. Her slender and beautiful body seemed to be supported by the air.
The word "tuo" makes people feel that the diving girl Lu Wei is frozen in the air, which further demonstrates her slender and beautiful figure and light movements, paving the way for the wonderful performance below.
3. He gently stretched his arms and raised them upwards. Lu Wei flew into the air with a slight kick. For a moment, her slender and beautiful body seemed to be held up by the air. Against the blue sky and white clouds, it looked like the "flying sky" dancing in the sky in Dunhuang murals.
The author paints a beautiful picture of "flying" in a very layered manner, from "kicking lightly" to "dancing in the sky", from "as fast as a shooting star" to "inserting into the blue waves" ”, the diving girl’s graceful and free posture is as light as an arrow, making people have a panoramic view of her. Using action description and detailed description, Lu Wei's entire diving process is vividly displayed, which is perfect, wonderful and unforgettable.
4. A few strings of white bubbles embraced the fairy who descended from the sky, while the water splashing around her was calm and calm.
Anthropomorphic rhetoric is used to describe the fusion with the water when entering the water, highlighting the smallness of the water splash; the fairy echoes the description of the jump at the beginning and also responds to the title.
5. "Wonderful! Wonderful!" A foreign reporter standing next to us jumped up. At this time, the entire swimming pool was boiling, and the audience, who had just woken up from a dream, gave deafening applause. and cheers to express their passion for their favorite athletes.
The admiration of foreign reporters, the deafening applause and cheers of the audience, and the surprise of the Indian audience are all side descriptions, which highlight the perfection of Lu Wei's diving movements. At the same time, the entire close-up is pushed to a climax, and the theme of athletes working hard to win glory for the country is highlighted.
Extended information:
This is a superb close-up of a character. The full text is only more than 500 words, but it cleverly captures the moment when diving champion Lu Wei finally won the championship, vividly It perfectly demonstrated the perfect performance of the Chinese diving girls when they won the championship, which left a very deep impression on people and showed the hard-working spirit of Chinese athletes.
Text structure:
Part One (1-4): The reporter used close-up shots to focus on the moment when Lu Wei won the diving championship.
The second part (5-8): Describes from the side the appreciation of Lu Wei's wonderful diving actions by foreign reporters and audiences.