Semi-propositional composition: Life needs

Life needs (warmth, goals, friends, color, fun, growth, "devil", unity, dreams, brave face, English, Music, knowledge and ability, interest, ideal, Bole, you, "620", regret, resistance, listening, gratitude, partner, applause, integrity, unspeakable love, courage, appreciation, miscellaneous noodles, seriousness, courage, Stairs, encouragement, ice cream, Zhao Ziwei, a bowl of hot soup, brothers, narrate with heart, green, trust, persistence, thinking, good mood, happiness, noodles and steamed dumplings, good habits, smile, try, sunshine, Balance, a hug, memories, memory fragments, competition, tolerance, tenderness, funny, dedication, agreement, fairy tale, respect, making a fool of yourself, forgiveness, love, laughter, love, understanding life, classics, friends, ups and downs, dreams, face, Good back, passion, discovery of beauty, spiritual contact, novelty, sixth sense, Qiu Chuangfeng, harmony, tolerance, patience, fighting spirit, mutual help, reading, civilization, enthusiasm, brightness, opponents, hard work, struggle, fairness, relaxation, Failure, self-confidence, friendship, knowledge, innovation, bookishness, cartoon, regret, comics, stand up, protection, harmony, beautiful lies, tension, honesty, happy time, inferiority complex, computer, care, disguise, enemy, fall, injury , strong self, good person, brave, love, care, family, understanding, frustration, low-key and high-key, sincere heart, create miracles, face, humility, pride, sharing, sharing, communication, peace, method, kindness, science , motivation, power, minimum story, happiness, romance, Wu Ke, reminder, difficulty, communication, H2O, fashion, persistence, change, stay optimistic, idol, a good attitude, embellishment, childishness, whole heart, satisfaction , the person who loves you, search, determination, wisdom, you, me and him, touching, miracle, perseverance, dedication, exploration, a pen, inquiry, art, observation, tears, adventure, peace, opponent, great love, humor, silence , warmth, sunshine, a small bookmark...)

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Life needs partners

Qiu Chuangfeng, Grade 2 (6)

Life needs partners, partners who can bring us fun. Sometimes, an extra partner can give you an extra life.

I have many such partners.

Partner A, whose surname is Wang, is known as Brother Long. He is handsome, handsome and majestic. His bright eyes and thick sword-shaped eyebrows make him look extraordinary! Learning is his specialty, and his favorite sport is table tennis, but... he is a bit arrogant, but this does not affect his status as the boss at all.

Partner B: This person's surname is Ye. He has good facial features, a thin face, pink and phoenix eyes, and willowy eyebrows. He has always felt good about himself. This gentleman generally does not give personal belongings to others without any reason, and he never does anything that is not beneficial. Studying is at the top of the list, and what you do best is maximizing benefits.

Partner C: His surname is Huang. He has short flat hair, thick eyebrows, big eyes, fat head and big ears, thick nose and thick lips, and charming hair. Although he has a bit of a big tongue, he looks more honest and cute. Everyone said: This guy must be related to Winnie the Pooh! This person is extremely popular in the class, has few rivals in studies, and is very secretive. Five words can be best embodied in him: a person cannot be judged by his appearance.

Partner D: This person’s surname is Wu. His father is from Chaozhou and his mother is from Sichuan. You must have guessed his name. Yes, his name is Wu Chaochuan. What, this name is very creative! This person can be called my good friend. He is generous, has a wide range of friends, is careless, bold, and slow to respond. He is one of my poor "scapegoats". My good friend's appearance is really unflattering. He is either tall or short, with thick eyebrows and small eyes, a big nose, dark skin, shiny white teeth, and a weird wheezing after laughing. The sound can leave a deep impression on people once they meet. If you see a creature at the zoo that has very similar characteristics to those written above, congratulations, you have found a chimpanzee. Haha...

These are my partners. Without them, I would lose a lot of fun in life!

Brief review: The characterization is meticulous and the language is concise and interesting. It is a rare masterpiece that can skillfully apply the writing materials accumulated in extracurricular writing practice to classroom writing.

Life needs applause

Chen Jiawen, Class 6, Grade 2

“Oh, why are you still here? We are all looking for you everywhere, hurry up It's time for you to perform on stage! Go backstage and get ready, time is running out," my friend said anxiously.

"But I'm afraid, I feel panicked, and my feet keep shaking. I...I don't want to perform anymore, so I'd better quit." I murmured timidly and helplessly.

"Don't be afraid, try your best to show your style and talent, and let others admire you. Go ahead, I believe in you!" After my friend finished speaking, he pushed me onto the stage.

Facing hundreds of pairs of eyes, my original fear became even more panicked. It was my first time on stage, my first performance, my first time seeing so many audiences, and so many firsts that made me dumbfounded. I was speechless, my throat seemed to be stuck with a stone, and I couldn't speak. I was thinking: What should I do, what should I do? I finally took the opportunity to go on stage, but it was about to be taken away by my cowardice. I don't want it. , No, no...

Just when I didn’t know what to do, I saw my Savior Bodhisattva. Her words and actions calmed down my originally scared and panicked heart. . She is my good friend. Her words and actions gave me courage, allowed me to overcome the fear in my heart, and allowed me to show off on stage.

The performance was over, and the waves of overwhelming applause almost made me dizzy.

In fact, every performer needs encouragement and courage, but even more applause. Only applause can make the performers feel gratified. The greater the applause, the greater the passion for the performers' performance.

The first time I went on stage showed me a brand new me, and it also made me understand a lot. Life needs applause. Only applause can make us feel encouraged by others; only applause can make us more courageous. Everyone needs applause in life, let us grow together in waves of applause!

Brief comment: This exercise has a good perspective on selecting materials and a profound idea. But the description is not delicate enough, and the expression needs to be refined.

Life requires gratitude

Yin Tingting, Class 6, Grade 2

Life is like a play, but others cannot play you, and this play will last forever Can't do it again. Because of gratitude, this play will never end.

——Inscription

"Grateful heart, thank you for having me!" Do you know who helped you cover yourself with the quilt when you kicked it off in the middle of the night? Do you know who is supporting you silently behind your back when you are in trouble? Yes, that’s right! They are your relatives, friends and teachers.

There is one thing that touches me very much and makes me feel grateful.

On weekend morning, I hadn’t woken up yet, and I was about to go to the things in my bag, but I found that everything in my bag had been dug out. I was a little angry because that person took the contents of my bag without my permission. Later, my father said to me: "I took out all your books because I wanted to see your textbooks." Only then did I understand the truth of the matter. On Sunday, I stumbledly packed all the books into my bag. I didn't know that my father had put something in my bag. It wasn't until evening study hall that my roommate said she wanted to see what was in my bag, so I gave it to her. She flipped through the pages and found something I had never seen before. She showed it to me and I said, "What is this?" She looked at it again and said, "It says 'Academic success' '". "Ah! I see, it's a peace charm." I said, "I didn't put this thing in my bag!" She said, "Could it be your mother or your father who put it in my bag?" I suddenly thought of my father. He looked through my bag and it was him who put it in. I laughed from the bottom of my heart.

The fallen leaves hover in the sky, composing a piece of gratitude, which is the tree's gratitude to the earth that nourishes it; white clouds float in the blue sky, painting the touching pictures, that It is Baiyun's gratitude to the blue sky that nurtured it. Because of gratitude, there will be this colorful society, and because of gratitude, there will be sincere friendship. Because gratitude allows us to understand the true meaning of life.

I want to be grateful to my father for caring for me, my mother for raising me, my friends for their help, and my teachers for their education.

Life requires gratitude! Life is colorful because of gratitude!

Brief comments: The title, the lyrics quoted at the beginning, the lyrical points at the end, and the theme of gratitude are the highlights of this article! If the narrative in the third paragraph could be more detailed, this exercise would be more appealing.

Life needs you

Liu Jiamin, Class 6, Grade 2

“What’s wrong? You idiot, you have a fever after nothing has happened?”

"You are the best. Have you taken medicine? How are you now?"

"You are still burning, but you are much better. ."

Remember, every time I get sick, you will call to check on me. I have memorized similar conversations by heart, but I have recalled these extremely ordinary words more than once. By the way, I have known you for three years. You spent the spring, summer, autumn and winter with me for three years. Maybe, this is fate. From unfamiliarity to familiarity, from acquaintance to acquaintance, you have taught me a lot, and you are always there in my life. Your kindness will never be forgotten by me.

I remember that time, I had a fight with my parents. I called you to tell you my pain and my grievances, but you on the other end of the phone just listened quietly. When I talked about running away from home, you scolded me. You asked me what the point was of leaving, you asked me if I had ever thought about my parents’ feelings, and whether running away from home was very prestigious to me. You also said that if I step out of the house, you will ignore me forever. The first time you lost your temper at me; the first time you threatened me in such a fierce tone. Did you know? At that time, I seemed to hit rock bottom all of a sudden, and my heart felt completely cold.

Because you are so important to me. I cried. When you hear me cry, you remain silent. After I stopped crying, you said: "Are you done crying? Do you still want to leave? Use your brain to think about it. You will still go home after you leave. If you have the ability, don't come back after you run away from home. "

I remember that time you talked a lot, and then I hung up on you angrily. Looking at the night view outside the window, the wind kept blowing my cheeks. "The outside world is beautiful, and life should be more colorful." The words you said to me are swirling in my mind, and I think I was wrong.

Do you know? I often wonder, what would I do without you?

Maybe I will become very rebellious, maybe running away from home is my daily routine, maybe I will not have the heart to study... there are too many possibilities, your existence always makes my life full of meaning. I have endless topics to talk about with you. You like to call me "idiot" and "idiot". I really don’t understand you. Am I that stupid?

Even though you and I are not together now, we have the same dream. I don't like to share, I'm selfish and only want to keep you private. I know how good you are, and I don’t dare to expect too much. I just pray that I can have you in my life.

Because, I need you in my life.

Brief comments: The material selection is novel, the conception is exquisite, and the writing is as smooth as flowing water. Using the second person makes the expression more intimate and natural, and better highlights the center of the article.

Life needs to be serious

Li Weiwen, Class 3, Grade 2

Life needs to be serious. Only if you live seriously will life take you seriously.

In one nature class, the teacher asked us to bring our own grafted plants, and said that we would get extra points if we brought them. When everyone heard that there were points to be won, they all brought their own grafted plants.

The classroom is like a green ocean, and the teacher’s smile is rippling in the blue waves. She nodded happily, very satisfied with everyone's grafting results.

The class started, and the teacher picked up the work of a classmate and began to recount the grafting method. After he finished speaking, he looked at it again and found that there was an error in the grafting method of the classmate, so he pointed out the error to everyone. At this time, several students said: "It seems that my grafting method is also wrong." "My method seems to be wrong..."

The students all looked down at their results with suspicion, and there was a burst of excitement in the class. There was a commotion, and the teacher's curved eyebrows gradually condensed with disappointment. "If any students think their grafting method is right, please raise your hands." In the empty classroom, as long as one person raises his hand, he can see clearly, but the teacher squinted his eyes and stretched his head to search, as if he was looking for A lost treasure is as urgent.

A hand was raised from my side. It was my deskmate. The teacher was very happy. He strode up to her and picked up his grafting results. It was a small wooden stick less than 4 centimeters long. It was almost a branch, dark brown, with only a little green bud squeezed out from the branches. As soon as the students saw his results, they burst into laughter. How does this compare with the green sprouts we brought? But what the teacher did next surprised us - the teacher nodded with satisfaction and praised repeatedly: "This is the real result of grafting!"

In the end, in the vast sea of ??green, not a single fiber was left. The humble little stick earned the only experimental points.

Although this inconspicuous little wooden stick is small, it embodies so much hard work of my deskmates! He took this grafting seriously and grafted a small branch seriously, and life took him seriously and gave him experimental points. And some students just tied them together with transparent glue indiscriminately just for experimental points. They didn't take them seriously, and life didn't take them seriously either.

Each of us’ life is made up of little things, so take every little thing seriously! Life requires seriousness. Only if you live seriously will life take you seriously.

Brief review: The concept is new, the narrative is concrete and smooth, the beginning and end echo each other, and the topics are precise.

Life requires courage

Li Gaoyang, Class 3, Grade 2

If you meet me wandering at the intersection of life, don’t teach me how to do it , as long as you silently give me courage and let me see the flowering season of youth.

The wind instigates the fallen leaves to dance all over the sky, and I am the one who spins around among the fluttering leaves. My heart is like meeting the cold sea water, all the way to the bottom of my heart. No words can express my feelings, and the gentle guitar cannot convey the sadness in my heart.

At this time, all the difficulties came to me: failure in the exam, the cold eyes of my classmates, the teacher's blame... all the pain came to me desperately. I don't know who to talk to about the anguish in my heart. This time, I fell and fell very hard. I even didn't have the courage to face it again, and I was confused and didn't know what to do.

At the weekend, I returned home disappointed, and my mother seemed to have figured out what I was thinking. But she didn't blame me for anything.

Before going to bed at night, I suddenly found a small note on my desk. On the note was my mother's beautiful handwriting: "If you choose the sky, don't long for the wind and the sun; If you choose the earth, don't long for a smooth road; if you choose the ocean, don't long for smooth sailing..." In an instant, my eyes were moist, and all the haze dissipated. This sentence seemed to give me courage and seemed to suddenly open my heart. "Yes, I will face everything bravely.

‘In the wind and rain, what are these tears? Wipe away your tears and don’t ask why. ’ I couldn’t help but think of my favorite song. After the baptism of the rainy season, my broken dreams will definitely be picked up little by little. I will keep it in my heart and let it become a beautiful dream in my heart.

Since then, I have changed. I am no longer sentimental because I have courage.

Teachers and classmates were surprised by my changes. I am very happy myself, as if I have become a different person. I believe: As long as I study hard, life can become colorful.

Soon, my efforts paid off. But I know how much hard work and sweat is behind it. I will never forget the words my mother gave me again: Success is an insignificant point, even if it is obtained, it is not surprising; the process of struggle is an intriguing thread, and only experience is precious.

I understand the meaning of this sentence because I have the courage to face success and failure correctly.

Life requires courage. For me, especially.

Brief comment: The psychological description is delicate and the key points are echoed from beginning to end, which is the biggest feature of this article. In addition, it is worth learning from clever quotations to enrich the content of the article.

Life needs silent love

Luo Qingxiang, Class 3, Grade 2

Love is an indispensable part of everyone’s life. Everyone wants to be loved and cared for. However, there are many ways to express love, but I think the best love is the silent love that does not need to be spoken.

Since childhood, our family has rarely talked about love or dislike. Everyone always thinks that knowing love is enough. In fact, even if you express your love, it may not be enough. Why not show it in action?

Love can be an encouraging look from the teacher when you are immersed in your homework.

Love can be a joke that your friends bring to you when you are feeling down and depressed.

Love can be the gentle greeting from your sister when she gives you a piece of chocolate when you go home after two weeks of stress.

Love can make one's heart full of anger, and when there is no way to release it, mother sits quietly on the bedside and listens silently.

......

All of these are expressions of love. Maybe, you may not feel love many times. In fact, she has always been by your side, but you just didn't realize it.

When I was a child, studying in Hong Kong, my grades declined again and again. Every night I end up driving the "night bus". And it’s a “long-distance train” that runs until two or three in the morning. One night, I was "struggled" with web page creation for my computer homework. My mother suddenly tapped me on the shoulder and asked me to go to bed. Of course I don't want to, this is due tomorrow! "Hurry up, go to bed now!" Mom was really angry this time. I have always been afraid of my mother's anger, so I had no choice but to give up and make plans to go to school the next day and be criticized.

I ran over to the computer class the next day early, hoping to finish it before class. But when I opened that folder, I was stunned: all the hyperlinks were connected, pictures that could not be displayed were visible, and even the background music that I had not finished for a long time was singing. . At that moment, I really didn’t know what to say to express my gratitude. The dissatisfaction with my mother yesterday was wiped away. When I think of my mother waking me up sleepily in the morning, I should have thought of it earlier!

Love is so implicit. I finally understood: Great love is silent!

With love, everything is fine; without love, everything is problematic. This is truly a wise saying. Silent love and silent giving may be what our lives need more!

Brief comment: It is not difficult to see that the author of this article is very good at understanding life and digging out writing materials from small things in daily life. If there is love in the heart, there will be beautiful words in the pen! Maybe, this is the secret of writing.

Life requires mixed noodles

Zhao Ziwei, Class 2 (3), Grade 2

Everyone has eaten mixed noodles, right? The rich sauce drizzles over every chewy noodle, a mouth-watering traditional Chinese delicacy - my favorite.

The place where I enjoy delicious food is a small miscellaneous noodle shop. The dry mixed noodles there are the best among the mixed noodles! Of course, good things cannot be enjoyed by one person. It is my dearest mother who shares this delicious food with me every time.

To this day, I still clearly remember the first time I came here to eat noodles with my mother.

Mom is angry with dad again. The reason is very simple. Mom asked Dad to accompany her to the supermarket, while Dad lazily covered his head with a blanket and fell on the sofa. He even snored deliberately. "It happens every time!" Mom said angrily, slammed the door and left. As a substitute for dad, I naturally have to accompany my mother to the supermarket. My mother's complaints along the way made me impatient. Oh, why is my father always like this? What should I do?

When we pushed the shopping cart out, thank God, I saw this "Holy God" store.

"Mom! Let's eat some miscellaneous noodles. The noodles here are delicious!" I held my mother's arm and said. "You can tell by the look of this store that it's not clean! Eat what you want and leave." My mother's disdainful eyes made me feel discouraged.

"Alas!" Mom seemed to have discovered something, "Let's go eat. We'll have dinner here to save me from having to go back and cook for that lazy guy!" After saying that, she happily pushed the cart in. I really have nothing to do! I wanted to calm her down, but I didn't expect it to add fuel to the fire. I looked gloomy again.

When I enjoyed the unique deliciousness of this miscellaneous sauce noodles, the wonderful feeling I had when I ate noodles here for the first time with my classmates came to mind again. It was so delicious! The helplessness of being nagged by my mother just now disappeared immediately. Huh? Why hasn't my mother moved? When I looked up, my mother was staring blankly at the bowl of noodles in front of her. For a long time, I just heard my mother murmuring: "Actually, your dad can also make mixed noodles..." After she took a bite, she said to me with a look of surprise: "Yeah!" It’s really delicious! Much tastier than your dad’s! "Mom ate it with big mouthfuls. I chuckled, but quickly put back my joyful expression, secretly chuckling in my mind. I couldn't let go of this good opportunity and took advantage of the victory: "Huh? Mom, is this watch of yours...? Oh, your dad bought it for me last time. Haha, what about a birthday gift? It’s so funny! "My mother said with a happy face.

"Why don't you pack a bowl for your dad! Let him try the miscellaneous sauce noodles here. Compared with what he makes here, they pale in comparison! "Of course I nodded happily. Zajiang's first perfect impression of my mother and me was left in our hearts as the conflict between our parents was resolved.

After that, we became I became a regular customer there.

Every time, my mother and I would talk about everything, both happy and sad. When I did something that made her happy, she would allow me to eat two bowls, which is usually forbidden. For the sake of my health, so it was not enough for me at this time. When my brother and I had a fight, she said to me sincerely: "We eat here too many times, and people are watching. We all knew we were going to get dry noodles with mixed sauce. Why is it that every time you quarrel with your brother and you are asked to give in to him, you just don’t know? "Although her serious expression is incompatible with these interesting words, I also understand that as a sister, I should be humble.

It turns out that so many memories of my mother and me belong to Zajiang Noodles It turns out that we need mixed noodles so much in our lives. Mixed noodles filled the vacancies in our family and tightened the hearts of my father, mother, brother and me.