There is a fox in the forest. It wants to eat a man's chicken for a long time, but the man built a strong chicken shed for the chicken and it couldn't get in.
Finally, one day, the chicken shed broke a hole because it had not been repaired for a long time. Haha, here comes the opportunity, thought the fox. I didn't know the fox had just come in, but the man found it. He picked up a stick and hit the fox ... "Ow!" With a scream, the fox ran away with its tail between its legs.
"How can I eat chicken?" The fox returned to the forest to meditate. "ah! I see! " The fox thought of an idea: as long as I pretend to make friends with the chicken, I will trick it into the forest and eat it. Ha ha! I am a genius! The fox thought.
The next day, the fox climbed to the chicken shed, put on a smiling face and said to the chicken, "Mr. Chicken, shall we make friends?" The chicken thought that the fox had turned over a new leaf and agreed.
A few days later, the fox came again. I saw it say to the chicken with a big smile: "Dear Mr. Chicken, I caught some big and fat bugs. Would you please have a taste? " The chicken has regarded the fox as a friend and agreed without thinking.
So the fox took the chicken back to the cave where he lived. He took the chicken into the cave, but closed the door at once. The chicken looked around, but he didn't see the delicious food prepared by the fox for him. So it asked the fox strangely, "My dearest friend, where is the delicious food you prepared for me?" The fox smiled badly: "Ha ha ha, you have been cheated, you are my delicious meal!" " ! Hahaha! "As soon as the voice fell, the fox jumped on the chicken, and the chicken responded immediately, but it was too late. ...
In fact, there are many similar foxes in life. Don't be fooled by the chicken!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
In this article, the author spread the wings of imagination and told us a story in humorous language: a fox made friends with the chicken in order to catch it, and then tricked the chicken into a cave to eat it. The article is ingenious, clear, vivid and fascinating.
Lovely Chickens Last Children's Day, my father gave me two chicks as gifts, one is yellow and the other is white, so I named them "yellow" and "white".
I didn't like yellow at first, but I especially like white. Because Huang Huang especially likes bullying Bai Bai, he always refuses to eat his own food when feeding, insists on fighting with Bai Bai, and always pecks Bai Bai's head with a sharp mouth. At this time, Bai Bai had to reluctantly leave and stand in a corner. Whenever I see this scene in front of me, I always whisper something about Huang Huang.
One night, I was lying in bed thinking: I grew up in vain, and I must be a kind and beautiful "girl", a graceful "girl"! And that Huang Huang must be a naughty boy.
The next morning, I went to see the chicken and found that it died in vain. Its legs straightened, its soft hair stood on end, and even its big eyes were closed. But at this point, Huang Huang still got nothing. I was so angry that I really wanted to slap Huang Huang to death, but I thought: This is also a life! Besides, I have lost a chicken. If one more chicken dies, I won't have it.
From then on, I trained Huang Huang to practice "flying high" every day. With my help and his efforts, Huang Huang can fly and fly quite high. Every day when I come home from school, Huang Huang always greets me at the door. Wherever I go, it follows me. I think: it must know me and treat me as a good friend. Once, I took it to the park to play. Wherever I run, it follows. When I went up the steps, it followed closely all the way, as if afraid that bad people would take it away.
Two days later, we are going to travel because we are so excited. Before we left, I forgot to leave food for Huang Huang. When I came back, he was starving.
I am very sad, because my carelessness killed Huang Huang. I really hope Huang Huang can come back one day.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
As an article about "lovely chicken", this article can grasp the characteristics of chicken and describe it. "Its legs are straight, its soft hair stands upright, and even its big eyes are closed." It can be seen that the little author is a man of heart in life.
Lovely chicks. There are a group of chicks in my house. They have sharp mouths, round heads and beige fluff. They feel soft and look like fluffy balls. They walk unsteadily, which is very cute.
One day, I am going to feed them with a bowl of millet. On reaching the door of the henhouse, a chicken saw it and ran away. It raised its little head and gave me a look. It screamed a few times, and then ran back to the henhouse. I saw it flapping its wings while "twittering" as if telling something to its companions. After a while, flocks of chickens ran and chased, crowded together and came to my side. You see: some of them are upturned, some are tilted, and some are tilted. It's so cute to keep shouting "Ji Ji Ji". At this time, I deliberately played with them and didn't rush to feed them. So I ran around the house with a bowl. They followed me to the balcony when I went to the living room. I have no choice but to put down my bowl and feed them. Who knows, a chicken suddenly jumped into the bowl and pecked the millet without looking up. Another chicken saw it and pecked a mouthful of rice at once. Then, as soon as my mouth opened and closed, I was afraid that he would choke, so I poured it some water to drink. The other chick actually took a big bite of rice, perhaps because she ate too much. He couldn't swallow it, so he blinked and looked at it stupidly, laughing so hard that I couldn't even straighten up. Another chicken was busy grabbing food and stepped on his companion's foot, but he didn't know it. The trampled chicken gave a cry of pain and pecked at the trampled chicken angrily. Hey! What a clever chicken! It doesn't eat the rice in the bowl, but the spilled millet, which is especially delicious.
I looked at these lovely chickens and thought: chickens, chickens, do you know? The fuller you eat, the happier I am. Grow up quickly.
This is a group of lovely chickens in my family. Do you like them too? Come and see them when you are free. They are so interesting!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is a kind of prose, which introduces lovely chickens in a descriptive and explanatory way. At the beginning, it is pointed out that its shape is "round head, beige fluff, soft to the touch, like a fluffy ball, wobbling when walking", which arouses readers' interest in reading.
Grandpa's chicken returned to his hometown in Jiangxi during the Spring Festival. As soon as he got off the bus, he went straight to Luojiaao, where his grandparents lived. The thing that amuses me most in grandpa's house is the seven chickens that grandpa keeps: three old hens and four big cocks. The cocks are all dressed in gorgeous clothes, and they are all heroic. They are all like warriors in ancient Egypt. I dare not get too close anyway. Old hens are different!
One of them is the most special: it is the thinnest, shortest, smallest, but the most naughty. It jumps out of the fence and forages in the yard every day; But grandpa loves it most, because it lays a few eggs from time to time, and the earth eggs are very nutritious. Its coat is very light, almost beige. Ironically, its housekeeping skill is actually playing dead! Once, I ran after it, and I lay motionless on the ground. No matter how I use the stick, it still doesn't move. It scared me at that time. Just when I got up to leave to tell my mother, it ran away like a gust of wind! Before I came to my senses, fortunately, my grandfather grabbed it quickly!
The reason why these chickens are so cute has something to do with grandpa. Because grandpa takes good care of them and feeds them on time and in quantity every day, those chickens are obedient for a long time, as if they can understand people's language and expressions and know what we are doing this for. They are very clever. Knowing that I was looking for them, they played with me and played hide-and-seek all the way. They were not lazy at all.
I like these chickens raised by grandpa very much, because they give me infinity! When I am bored, I can chase them to play; When I am angry, I can also catch them and pat their bodies gently with my hands to make them do some funny actions and make me happy.
Grandpa's chickens are the most special and lovely chickens in the world. I like them so much!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is an article about grandpa raising chickens. From your description, the teacher seems to see some naughty chickens jumping out of the fence and foraging in the yard. There is a love for chickens between the lines of the article. Disadvantages: the sentence is incomplete, such as "I like these chickens raised by my grandfather very much because they give me infinite", which should be changed to "I like these chickens raised by my grandfather because they give me infinite happiness"
Chickens I used to hate chickens, because they didn't bark enough all day, and they varied in length and thickness. ...
There is a hen in my house. She never bullies the rooster, but always pecks at my kitten, which is just full moon. I can't figure out why it always bullies the kitten, respects the rooster and dares not make any mistakes. It must be a bully ...
When the big hen lays eggs, she is going crazy. It seems to let the whole universe know its tiny achievement: it barks endlessly at the yard, and I 100% am sure that even the deaf will be sent to a mental hospital by it in those days. Just like this, you are wondering whether that person can survive if you give him a Mike score and let it shout in people's ears.
However, in the past few days, I changed my view on hens, because I saw a hen that hatched chicks. ...
One day, just after I finished my homework when I came home from school, I heard several earth-shattering noises. Then there was no sound. I was curious. I heard several voices and followed them with many questions. I wonder how this sound came from the henhouse. So I stepped up and hurried there. When I got there, I saw my little dog being kept in the henhouse. It is biting a big hen! I quickly called the puppy back and thought; You deserve it, a puppy scared you like that!
The next day, after school, I went to the henhouse to see if the big hen was good. To tell the truth, it's also quite pitiful! The moment I stepped into the door, I was shocked by a touching picture: there was a little blood on the yellow feather of the injured hen. Followed by a flock of chickens. Oh ... I see. At this time, the hen opened her arms to protect her baby!
It has responsibility, love, courage and hard work, because it has a group of chickens, it is great, because it is mother hen, and its mother must be a hero.
I don't hate hens anymore, because I neglected a maternal love before!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
The structure is incomplete, the language is dull, the details are improper, and the center is not prominent.
There are many chickens in the lovely chicken aunt's house, including a lovely little white chicken, a strong little black chicken and a warm little chicken, but my favorite is the naughty and lovely little yellow chicken.
I remember that time our family went back to Aunt Zou Gang's house to play. As soon as I entered the yard, I saw a group of chickens basking in the sun in the yard. I like these chickens very much and want to catch them. At this time, I found that one of the chickens was a small yellow chicken, which was very petite and lovely.
The little yellow chicken is covered with soft yellowish fluff, and it runs like a little yellow ball rolling on the ground. It has a pair of small eyes, a sharp mouth, a round head and ears hidden in fluff. I thought it had no ears if I didn't look carefully! Little Yellow Chicken saw me reaching for it, patting a pair of lovely little wings, spreading her feet and running, leaving a string of bamboo footprints in the sand.
Chickens like bugs very much. They often look for bugs to eat in garbage dumps or corners.
Once, the hen caught a bug and called the chicken to eat it. When the chicken heard the hen's cry, it rushed to catch the worm to eat. Little yellow chickens crowded in, too, and the hen tore up the bugs for the chickens to eat. Little yellow chicken is the most naughty. Before the hen finished tearing it, she snatched more than half of it from her mouth and ran away with it. Some chickens saw it and ran after the little yellow chicken. A small white chicken ran fastest and caught the worm in the mouth of a small yellow chicken in one bite. The little yellow chicken refused to give up, and the two chickens competed for each other like tug-of-war. Finally, the little white chicken was defeated. The little yellow chicken won, for fear that others would come to grab the worm again and swallow it in one bite. Pinch it hard and it stretches its neck. After eating, the little yellow chicken wiped her mouth back and forth on the ground and cried with her head held high, as if to say, "What's the matter? Still I am the best! "
I looked at the little yellow chicken and couldn't help laughing: what a lovely little yellow chicken!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This article, grasping the characteristics of "cute chicken", "the whole body is covered with soft yellowish fluff and runs like a small yellowish fluffy ball rolling on the ground", expresses sincere feelings in an ideographic way and ends with a point.