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A mountaineering team member participated in climbing Mount Everest. At an altitude of 8,000 meters, he felt exhausted and stopped. Later, when he talked about this experience, everyone felt sorry for him. Why didn't he persist? Clench your teeth again and climb a little higher! "No. I don't know for sure. 8,000 meters above sea level is the highest point of my mountaineering career. I have no regrets at all." He said.

Requirements: (1) Based on your understanding of the material, choose your own angle, draw up your own topic, and write an article of no less than 600 words.

(2) You can describe your experiences, express your feelings, and express your opinions...but do not expand, continue, or rewrite the material. (3). There is no restriction on the style of writing except poetry and drama.

Perspective: 1. After seeing his own conditions clearly, the mountaineer has no regrets. In his heart, 8,000 meters is his perfect life. From this, we can establish this perspective: by seeing yourself clearly and grasping the height of your life, you can create a perfect life. From this perspective, you can write argumentative essays, narratives, or essays. It is the first choice for writing.

2. The mountaineer has no regrets. Although he has not reached the top, he has struggled and worked hard. He has climbed to the limit of his life. This is why he has fought hard and struggled. Even if he cannot be perfect, life will be perfect. No regrets either. This angle can be used to write argumentative essays, but it is most suitable for writing narratives and essays. It is also the first choice for writing. Narratives should focus on struggle - imperfection - no regrets

3. Due to physical discomfort, at an altitude of 8,000 meters, the mountaineers rationally gave up climbing to the summit. This is the purpose: one should know how to give up in life. (This angle is familiar, you can refer to previous compositions.)

4. The mountaineers did not blindly attack the peak regardless of their own situation. This tells us: Do things according to your ability

5. Although he has not reached the top, he does not feel regretful. It seems that he knows how to be satisfied, which is also a state of life. This is the purpose: learn to be satisfied and be content with what you have. The fourth and fifth items are more difficult to write. If there are no typical materials for argumentative essays or good materials for narrative essays, write them from another angle.

Wrong perspectives: 1. Success depends on persistence. 2. You should not leave regrets in life. The above two angles deviate from the material. You cannot use the material at will when writing your composition. You must pay attention to the main theme of the material.

Example 1: (Novel) Green Grass

The wind gently blew through Ping'er's hair between her eyebrows. The fresh breath of spring that diffused in the air, accompanied by the unique coolness of the morning, slowly soaked into her cheeks and then expanded to every pore in her body. She breathed a sigh of relief, feeling a little more relaxed. As her name suggests, Ping'er is an ordinary girl. He has mediocre looks and mediocre grades. The ordinary are often ignored in school. The classmates paid no attention to her, and the teacher rarely thought of her. She lives alone in her own world. However, she has a colorful dream in her heart. That was five years ago, when her father took her 13-year-old daughter to Beijing. When the car passed an antique gate, her father asked the driver to slow down and told him: "Kid, look, this is Peking University, my father's alma mater. "Ping'er's eyes widened: Dad's Peking University! Weiming Lake in my dream! Just wait for me, I will definitely come! Silently, Ping'er worked hard. For Peking University, for the dream in my heart. Junior high school, high school... She worked hard all the way, but it was a thorny journey. Especially in her senior year of high school, her grades made her feel that Peking University was getting further and further away from her. How many times did she finish the exercises with a flashlight after lights out in the dormitory, soaked with her sad tears. But the results still slowly declined. As soon as the results of yesterday's mock exam were announced, she held back tears, but her heart was tearing apart bit by bit. .........The wind picked up her short hair again, and she sighed softly, feeling a trace of sadness in her heart. The sky is as blue as water; the clouds gather and disperse. Once upon a time, she silently swore here, but now, what she has paid for is a sense of loss. She stopped, sat on the soft grass, buried her head in her arms, and stopped thinking about those annoying grades. Suddenly, a fragrance came quietly. It turned out to be the green grass under my feet. She leaned down and lay gently on the grass, folded her arms and buried her head in the grass. As far as the eye can see, there is a cluster of green life, with yellow-green grass buds stretching, eager, and softly upward. Looking up, a row of tall white poplars proudly rises upward, piercing the sky. Her heart trembled slightly.

The life of poplar is magnificent, but this beautiful world not only needs towering trees, but also green grass. Although the grasses have no tall bodies or blooming flowers, they sprout quietly, grow scorchingly, sing in the sunshine, and dance in the wind and rain. They use their own colors to fill the earth with vitality. Their lives are also gorgeous, beautiful, and regret-free! Since you can't make a big tree, let's make a small grass. After hard work and struggle in life, no matter what form you use to show your beauty, life is brilliant. Ping'er gently stroked the tender grass and smiled brightly. ......... In class and in the dormitory, Ping'er is still struggling. However, she is no longer confused because there is a piece of green grass in her heart. ... ... Beijing, under the scorching sun in June, a girl in a long skirt stood at the door of Peking University, silently bidding farewell to her 13-year-old dream: Goodbye, Peking University! Goodbye, Weiming Lake! Then he turned around gracefully and walked towards his own life. She is always smiling - because she has worked hard, she has no regrets.

Example 2: (Argumentative Essay) The Height of Life

When a mountaineer was reaching the top of Mount Everest, he gave up at an altitude of 8,000 meters due to exhaustion. . When others felt sorry for him, he said: "I know myself best. 8,000 meters is the highest point of my mountaineering career. I have no regrets." Climbing to the height of 8,000 meters is his perfect life! The reason why he has no regrets is because he saw his own conditions clearly and reached his own ultimate height. Mountain climbing is like this, and so is life: Only by seeing yourself clearly and grasping the height of your life can you create your perfect self. Uncovering the glorious picture of the development of human history, the successful experiences of so many great Confucian masters all reveal this eternal truth. Yang Zhenning, a famous physicist and Nobel Prize winner. In his early years, he focused on experimental physics, but he could not control the various instruments, and accidents often occurred in his experiments. Colleagues joked: "Wherever there is Yang Zhenning, there will be explosions!" Disappointed, he thought of an incident in his childhood. He showed his parents a chick that he carefully made in handicraft class, and they laughed. He said: "Yes, you are pinching a lotus root." He understood that he did not have excellent hands-on ability, so he re-examined himself and changed his main focus to theoretical physics. In the end, he succeeded. After seeing himself clearly, the young Yang Zhenning became a blockbuster. Wallach, who is also a Nobel Prize winner, originally chose literature. He wanted to use beautiful and passionate words to describe his glorious life. However, the teacher's comment made his dream come to nothing in an instant: You are very diligent, but too rigid, and you will not make great achievements in literature. He chose painting again. But the school's comments made him even more frustrated: In terms of painting, you are a talent that cannot be cultivated. After learning from the experience, he analyzed his own strengths and weaknesses. The chemistry teacher's words deeply inspired him: If you are down-to-earth and careful in your work, you should make a breakthrough in chemistry. So, he carefully chose chemistry. Suddenly, the torch of wisdom was ignited, and his chemistry results were far ahead. Eventually won the Nobel Prize in Chemistry. After seeing himself clearly, Wallach climbed to the top of his life. Our era is full of dreams as beautiful as flowers and opportunities as brilliant as the morning sun. Many people have lost their way and have done nothing in their lives because they have not seen themselves clearly and failed to grasp the height of their lives. Therefore, on the journey of life, only by seeing ourselves clearly and grasping ourselves can we sail the ship of life to the other side of success!

Example 3: (Argumentative Essay) Do within your ability

When a mountaineer climbed Mount Everest, he stopped due to exhaustion at an altitude of 8,000 meters. He did not do anything afterwards. Feeling regretful because he clearly knew that 8,000 meters above sea level was the highest point in his life. It can be seen from this that everything must be done within one's ability. As the saying goes: "It's important for people to know themselves." If during the climbing process, the athlete grits his teeth and strives upward regardless of physical fatigue, what awaits him may not be the joy of success, but a stronger altitude sickness, and he may He fell down due to exhaustion. He wisely quit, not only saving his life, but also reaching the highest peak of his life. Not only this mountaineer, but also many historical facts at home and abroad in ancient and modern times have proved that one must act within one's ability according to the actual situation, otherwise it will be self-destruction.

During the Spring and Autumn Period, when the princes were fighting for hegemony, Wu State gave up attacking the weak Lu State and instead targeted the then powerful Qi State, hoping to realize its dream of hegemony as soon as possible. As a result, its vitality was severely damaged and it was annexed by the rising Yue State. Perhaps Wu State was in After the destruction of Lu, the country's strength increased greatly, and if it attacked Qi again, history would be rewritten. However, because it did not act within its capabilities, it eventually led to the destruction of the country. The famous military strategist Zhuge Liang gave up joining forces with Wu to fight Wei when the Three Kingdoms were in power. Instead, he was eager for success and marched northward. He fought alone and was in dire straits. Due to the lack of political support and insufficient food and grass, and even more so because of Wei's The country's military strength was strong, but it suffered defeats time and time again. The country of Shu had a small land and few resources. How could it compete with the country of Wei, which had a vast territory and abundant resources? If Zhuge Liang could more thoroughly see the instability of the political situation and the disparity in strength with Cao Wei, he would not be in a hurry to complete the great cause of the late emperor; if he first enriches the country and strengthens the people, and eliminates internal troubles, there is no need to fear Cao Wei's millions of soldiers. And many people have achieved brilliance in life precisely because they understand themselves and do what they can. The famous scientist Einstein was once invited to serve as the honorary king of Israel. Faced with this sudden honor, Einstein declined politely, "My interest is only in science. I don't know much about politics. I'm afraid I can't take up this responsibility." How rational. words, he is very clear about his abilities. If he wears multiple hats, it will definitely affect his ability to make outstanding contributions in the technology world. Jiang Yuqin, a rural woman, quit her studies after graduating from college because her abilities were limited. Saint Martin, known as the "Father of the Fatherland," quietly retired because he did what he could. They were not inferior because of this. Instead, they used their rationality to paint their lives with a bright color and became a good story told by the world. Do what you can, and your life will be fulfilling and regret-free. Do what you can, and the road will be long as a result. Do your best and you will show your life to the fullest.

Example 4: (Narrative) Never regret hard work

I don’t regret it, and I don’t regret it either, because I tried my best. ——Inscription

It has been more than a year since I came to the United States, and I have gradually become familiar with the fiercely competitive atmosphere here. I have a rare free time today. I sit on a bench in the park and "enjoy" it. The sun casts mottled tree shadows through the branches and leaves of the trees. The breeze blows and the tree shadows sway, which also shakes out my regretless memory. ...It was the winter of the year before last. Because of my excellent swimming scores, I was recommended to a famous sports school in the United States for further study. Intense physical training started on the first day I came here. The coach is George, who is famous for his strictness. Before entering the water, he arranged for us to do overload exercises on the ground and even took us to the nearby special forces base to train for obstacle races. I soon realized that compared with other team members, my physical fitness was indeed insufficient. Great, after every training session, I panted and looked in the direction of my hometown, wondering whether my original dream was too far from reality. It was another round of devilish training. Two months had passed. Looking at the fierce face of the coach, I did not dare to relax at all. The occasional slackness in my thoughts must not be revealed. I knew that in a foreign country, I Fighting is not just for yourself. Slowly I began to adapt to this cruelty, and I was often the only one left in a huge swimming pool. I was not alone, because I felt that hard work was amazing and it enriched my life. I silently said this in my heart before going to bed every day. Ask yourself: Have you tried your best? This seems to work. The days passed quickly. I kept practicing holding my breath underwater, mastered various techniques, and put some swimming theories into practice. Although my results were not the best, they were gradually showing their edge. I continued to persist, and even George was impressed by my perseverance and dedication. The annual "Windmill Cup" 10,000-meter swimming competition was held in New York as scheduled. The coach unexpectedly recommended me to participate in the competition. I was flattered and actively prepared. My endless sweat was left on the training ground. The race started. There were eleven people in a row. With the sound of the gun, I jumped into the water and fought hard with my own skills and strength. By 5000 meters, there were five or six people behind me. My confidence doubled, and I tried my best again. By the 8,000 meters, I was exhausted. At this time, I was in fourth place. I couldn’t give up, I could only persevere. George’s figure on the sidelines also gave me motivation, and I started to rise up. , in the last 100 meters everyone started sprinting, we may be equally powerful, but in the end I became the third place with less than one second behind the second place, I just felt very tired. George came over and spread his hands and said: "Unfortunately, we are third." I suddenly felt very relieved, after all, I got the ranking. I smiled at George, and his expression brightened.

After reminiscing, I was thinking: What is the highest peak of life? Haven't I reached it yet? If you try your best, you will have no regrets. If you try your best, you will have no regrets.

Example 5 (Fairy Tale):

I am a "mouse" who wants to die

These days, I have been anxious about how I should die. , I was extremely unwell, but I didn’t go to the hospital because a fortune teller told me a few years ago that I was destined to die this year. If I survived this year, I would still have hundreds of days and nights.

After careful consideration, I still chose to go to the streets and be beaten to death.

Over the years, I have been ashamed of mankind and brought the food that people exchanged with their blood and sweat into my black hole and gentle countryside. I have more than a dozen villas, and each one has a "Xiao Mi". I'm afraid of the light, let alone walking on the street. "When rats take to the streets, everyone shouts to beat them up." Now I finally realize my mistake, and let my death serve as an accomplice to people! It also serves as a punishment for the "rat" in the future.

An hour or two passed, but no one yelled, no one even looked at me. I walked slowly, waiting for death to come.

I blocked a pretty girl. I wanted her to yell and let those "heroes save beauties" beat me to death. I put my arms around her waist and said, "I want to be indecent." You!”

The lady not only didn’t yell, she even gave me a wink and said, “Look at your appearance, you are either a rich man or a high official, I will follow you.”

The words that sounded sweet in the past sounded so harsh today. I left her and ran away with my head in my arms. I think this is what she expected!

I ran far away, and she kept asking "How much is the phone number"...

An old woman came to me from the opposite side. I think she is older and has rich social experience. , you will definitely recognize me as a "mouse".

But she passed me by calmly, and I grabbed her sleeve and said, "Don't you recognize that I am a mouse?"

Are you " What does "rat" have to do with me? There are so many scowling people on the streets now! Don't bother me, I have to go shopping. She flicked her sleeves and ran away as fast as she looked much younger.

Weird! Weird! Is my understanding wrong, or do they have other expectations?

Suddenly, my eyes lit up, yes! The police have guns, like peanuts, they just need to fly over.

I came to a policeman and said: "Comrade policeman, I am a 'rat', please shoot me to death with a gun!"

When the policeman saw me, He stood at attention with a "pop", "Hello, Director!"

"I am not the Director, I am a mouse."

"You are the Director, and you were with us two years ago Let’s eat together.”

“You, Mr. Wang, are also mice.”

“Why are you mice? If you are mice, then we will be the sons and grandsons of mice.” Please speak to Mr. Wang for me. My name is Shangguan. My phone number is 5188."

I walked slowly on the street, and I was extremely confused. What happened to this society. ? Why is my understanding so different from their expectations?

I looked up to the sky and sighed: "Who will kill me, a mouse that just wants to die."

Model Essay 6 (Prose):

The season when chrysanthemums are fragrant.

When the refreshing autumn wind blows the sky higher and higher, when the strange children look away at the last south-flying goose, when the green leaves on the branches change to orange, when a little sourness has touched the branches, then It’s the time when the chrysanthemums are fragrant again.

Ju Zhidan

"Clang, clang..." Did you hear the crisp sound of iron? The gentle breeze blows, the strong muscles exude the breath of life, and the raging fire cultivates noble sentiments. Jikang, the hero of this era and a talented man of the generation, lives the life of a blacksmith here. Like anyone else, you are also interested in He has high expectations, but do you dare to persuade him to become an official? Have you forgotten "The Book of Breaking Diplomacy with Shan Tao"? Those sonorous words have declared to everyone his disdain for the official career. Let him be himself and let the "Seven Sages in the Bamboo Grove" forever live a life of "singing under the Yexia", "drinking in the bamboo forest", "sipping water in the winding water", " "Picking chrysanthemums in Nanshan" is about life, don't let the filth of the world cover the faint fragrance of chrysanthemums.

Chrysanthemum Pride

Can you still remember Zhuangzi who ignored the state of Chu and still decided to "trail on the road"? This "heart is as clear as autumn water", and he is like a noble layman who is not tied to a boat. He has world-class talents, but he has never surrendered to the powerful and powerful. He has lived a life of poverty and poverty all his life. Do you also want to persuade him to join the world and hope that he can Do a great cause for the motherland, society and the people. Yes, everyone hopes so. However, Zhuangzi thought that he was a tree, a tree that defended the moon of the soul. If you forced him to pull it up and plant it in the dirty soil of society, he would wither and die immediately. Let him be a tree forever. Tree, there will be a proud chrysanthemum accompanying him.

The Sorrow of the Chrysanthemum

"The strength of the mountain is overwhelming, the times are unfavorable, elegance will not die, what can be done if the elegance does not die, what can Yu Ji do?", facing the surging When facing the villagers and elders on the other side of the river, a generation of overlords could not help weeping their clothes. The river has taken on other people's surnames, and the beauty has committed suicide in her arms. Should she escape by boat and regroup, or should she throw herself into the Wu River and "die like a ghost"? If you were next to King Xiang, would you advise him to "keep the green hills there, so you don't have to worry about running out of firewood"? The elders in Jiangdong also expected King Xiang to endure the humiliation and bear the burden. Maybe history would be rewritten because of this. However, King Xiang finally chose to throw himself into the river and die. He believed that he should die with dignity. He believed that that was his heroic nature and the life of a chrysanthemum. The form has withered, but the fragrance of the flowers remains forever.

Perhaps this is the true meaning of life. No matter what others expect, you should pursue what you think is right unremittingly, pursue freedom, pursue nobility, pursue the dignity of life, pursue the true nature of a hero, put aside the expectations of others, and put aside the expectations of others. Let go of the dissuasion of others and move towards your own understanding.

When the crisp sound of iron strikes comes from the distance, when the ancient roc spreads its wings and is about to fly, and when the surging Wujiang River roars to the sky, it is the season of fragrant chrysanthemums again.