Composition title: If I could go to space

Keywords: If the second grade of elementary school is 200 words

Word count: 200 words composition

This article is suitable for: The second grade of primary school

Source of the composition:

This composition is a 200-word composition for the second grade of primary school. The title is: "If I Can Go to Space". Everyone is welcome to contribute. . If I could go to space, I would make friends with shooting stars; I would be a guest at the moon's house; I would swim with the sun. If I could go to space, I would advise Sister Yuncai not to cry all the time; I would advise Mr. Thunder and Mother Thunder not to quarrel all the time; I would help Brother Wu Gang cut down trees. If I could go to space, I would... Comments from famous teachers: The poetry is romantic in imagination and the writing is novel, which reflects the young author's high writing level. In the poem, the author uses rich anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques to give the meteors, moon and other things in the sky human names, which makes the readers feel very friendly. "I want to make friends with shooting stars; I want to be a guest at the Moon's house; I want to swim with the sun." The young author's imagination transcends the constraints of reality, and his whimsy is amazing. (Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang Yunlian) 2009-10-12 15:42:00