At first glance, the original sentence is interesting, but in fact it is not good. It seems that the upper and lower sentences are opposite, but they are far from opposite. This is a big mistake. The most important thing is that the last sentence is "loneliness" and "indifference", and the last sentence ends with "loneliness", which is actually a redundancy. To put it bluntly, it is suspected of forcibly coining words. As for leveling, the next sentence is not stable enough. Although it is not serious, it is not harmonious after all. "Loneliness", "cold" and "disability" are too harsh to describe, while "blowing" and "coagulation" are also very hard, and both are lost.
I said so, but I won't go against the wishes of the landlord. So struggled to continue to be a must, because the period laughed at Fang Jiaer:
Lonely and cold, the snow blows gently, and the residual wine is empty and lonely.
Hazy doesn't worry about the illness of the soul. You can write a river bridge with a brush.