The best answer: I read, I am happy, I grow up

When I was a child, I grew up in the sound of the poem "It's noon on the hoeing day, where does the drop of sweat fall to the soil", every day. The first time I picked up the book and looked at the lifeless square characters, I always yelled that it was boring. Reading is my biggest headache.

As I grow up, I feel the lack of knowledge. Every time I write, I don’t know where to start. My father and mother were worried that I didn't like reading, so they often bought many books for me to read. Until one day, that night, our family held an idiom competition. It was my turn to say the idioms, and my mother said the meaning. I opened the idiom dictionary and said: "The golden cicada escapes from its shell (ké)." As soon as I finished speaking, my father and mother burst into laughter. I felt strange and didn't know why they were laughing. My mother looked at the surprised look on my face and said, "Look at the pinyin for yourself and see what it reads." "Oh! It's 'The Golden Cicada Escapes Its Shell (qiào)'!" I suddenly realized. My father said to me seriously: "You must read more in the future, so that you can accumulate knowledge!" So, I secretly made up my mind to read more and know a lot of knowledge.

Since then, I have really fallen in love with reading, because books have brought me endless fun. When I read Andersen's collection of fairy tales - "The Little Match Girl", I prayed for the fate of the little match girl; when I saw "The Five Heroes of Langya Mountain", I prayed for the fate of the little match girl. The tragedy of the five heroes shed tears; when I read "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", I admired Zhuge Liang's heroism. I am deeply intoxicated in the ocean of books.

I once saw this passage in a book: "Reading can cure stupidity, reading can cure poverty, reading can cure diseases, and reading can sharpen one's ambition. Reading can lead you to a distant future, reading can make you wise, reading can help you know how to make friends, how to recognize people, how to speak, how to do things, how to live a healthy life, and how to live a perfect life. "Yes. ah! The benefits of reading are endless.

Now, when I hold up "How Steel Is Tempered" and deeply integrate into it, I feel how happy I am, because I have a healthy body. Although Paul is disabled, I was deeply impressed and admired by his strong determination and tenacious spirit in not bowing to fate. I am full of hope for my future study and life. I love reading more.

Reading "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and "Water Margin" can give us an understanding of Chinese classics; reading "One Hundred Thousand Whys" can enrich our knowledge; reading "The Complete Collection of Compositions" can improve our Composition level; just reading some comics, comedy, etc. can also make us more humorous and imaginative.

Reading gives me knowledge, reading gives me fun, and reading gives me strength.

I study! Reading helped me know what acid is? What is sweet? What is suffering? What is spicy? Reading has taught me how to behave with others? The biggest thing reading gives me is knowledge. It enriches my brain and increases my knowledge.

Can you say that reading is not fun?

Dear teacher:

Hello!

How are you doing lately? Are you living happily?

When I first entered the school, I met you - an amiable and good teacher. We came to elementary school from kindergarten and were very unfamiliar with everything here. I was very restless during class, some students were whispering to each other, some were crying... When faced with these problems, you just came over and comforted us, instead of dealing with us in simple and crude ways. Under your Chun Chun guidance, I learned to abide by school rules and classroom disciplines. During class, you are a strict teacher; after class, you are our friend and play with us. Just when I was happy and proud to have such a teacher, I didn't expect that you would take leave. In the days when you left, my mood plummeted, and my grades also declined for various reasons. I miss you all the time and look forward to your coming back to teach us every day.

It gives people a more concrete understanding of a child's mind, and also reveals the depth of the relationship between teachers and students.

In this long period of hope, we entered... Unexpectedly, my wish came true in the third grade. One morning before class, I went to hand in my homework. The moment I entered the office, my eyes suddenly lit up - I found that you are back! I quickly ran back to the classroom and told the good news to my classmates. They all cheered, some slapped the table, some whistled, and the whole classroom was boiling. The first class that morning was yours, but you did not go to class right away. Instead, you asked us to talk about some things that happened while you were away. We talked freely and freely, while you listened kindly. . "One day, I went to hand in my homework" is an incomplete statement in this paragraph, because it is followed by "The first period in the morning was your class." Therefore, the author should have handed in the homework before class and found the teacher. return.

Once, I went to hand in my homework, and I saw you immersed in correcting our homework. Suddenly, I found that there were a few white hairs faintly visible in your black hair. Ah, Teacher Cai, how much you have worried about us, but we have no idea and still let you worry about us. However, from today on, please rest assured that I will use the knowledge you imparted to achieve excellent results in return for you. I will be your little assistant and help those poor (underachievers) students (") fill their gaps", and then Let them catch up as quickly as possible and take the load off your shoulders. (It is natural to grab the teacher’s hair to trigger inner emotions, but there must be a transition between this paragraph and the previous paragraph. More importantly, this article belongs to the epistolary style, so in “once” there is “But, starting from today, "Please rest assured" is inappropriate. I hope the author will think carefully about how to change it.)

If you are compared to chalk, you are compared to a candle, and you are compared to No one is too good at being an engineer. You are a good teacher who works hard and imparts all your knowledge to us without reservation. (The teacher himself is known as the spiritual portrayal of candles, and is also known as the "engineer of the human soul", so it cannot be said as "not an exaggeration"! In addition, using big words that everyone would say to express his emotions like this will actually The effect of expression is weakened! )

Teacher Cai, I can’t finish what I want to say to you in three days and three nights. I will talk to you slowly when I have time. (Luowei once again highlights the deep friendship between teachers and students, and also echoes the "affableness" in the opening chapter. It is precisely because of the teacher's affability that I can say "I can't finish talking in three days and three nights".)

I wish:

Good health and smooth work!

Your student: xxx

xxxx year x month x

Four Seasons

Spring is the first of these four seasons; Mild season.

As long as the spring girl comes, everything in the world will be awakened. Flowers, trees, birds, and even the sleeping river opened its eyes.

The chirping little swallows on the branches have also flown back from the south; the cheerful fish in the river are also swimming around actively; and the number of songs and laughter on the grass is gradually increasing.

Spring - how harmonious and gentle, spring - a season that makes people laugh and makes others happy.

Summer is the second season among the four seasons, and this season is a lively one.

In the summer, the fluttering bees and butterflies disappeared, only the cicadas chirped. The fiery red sun is baking this piece of golden earth. Gold dominates everything in the world, and hot wind blows from afar, drifting across the fields, blowing the fragrance of ripe wheat.

The color of summer is golden, and the melody of summer is tense. Because farmers are always busy and busy, and workers on construction sites are anxious and anxious.

It is a pity that literati in the past dynasties have written countless stories about spring flowers and autumn moon, but there is very little shadow of summer. Probably, spring is warm, but summer is always soaked in bitter sweat. People who have a leisurely mood naturally don't like this kind of tense melody. But I want to praise the golden season between spring and autumn.

Autumn - the season when all flowers and fruits are ripe, it is amazing and seasonal.

Farmers are busy harvesting plump fruits. The sound of crickets on the grass became louder. There are both beautiful scenery and the sound of insects.

Autumn is a harvest season, and farmers’ faces are always full of laughter and joy. All farmers are only a little more relaxed in this season, because several years of seeds have grown into a fruitful food.

Autumn is the season when flowers and fruits mature.

Winter - a cold world, yet so gentle and lovely.

Although it is cold in winter, there is a "gentle airflow" that warms your heart. It's just a little snow. As long as it snows, whether it's a city or a village, looking at the roof, it seems like there is a white blanket covering the world. Coupled with the white smoke coming out of the chimney, it seems that it is... Paradise in the white world.

How beautiful! --winter.

The person I like is Jackie Chan.

The person I like is a movie star-Jackie Chan. He is the "King of Martial Arts" in my country's entertainment industry. Jackie Chan's original name is Chen Hongsheng, and he was born in a military family in Hong Kong in 1954. He is a famous actor in our country and has acted in famous movies.

I like to watch movies starring Jackie Chan, such as: "Plan A", "Police Story", "Drunken Master", "Red Zone" and so on. Among all the movies Jackie Chan has starred in, I like "Tuxedo" and "Baby Project" the most. In the movies, the characters he plays are humorous, funny, and have exaggerated actions that make people laugh.

In the movie "Tuxedo", Jackie Chan plays a taxi driver with excellent driving skills. Once, he drove to pick up an agent's assistant. The agent's assistant admired Jackie Chan's driving skills and asked him to be the agent's personal driver. During an operation, the agent was plotted by the enemy. Before he died, he handed over his high-tech clothes, the tuxedo, to Jackie Chan, asking Jackie to help him with his arduous task. Later, Jackie Chan used the unique functions of the tuxedo to start his magical and tortuous life journey.

The movie "Baby Project" tells the story of two thieves and their landlord stealing things together. Once, a child was stolen from a rich man's house. Later, when the landlord had trouble, Jackie Chan and his assistant began to take care of the children. The life of three people together is happy and interesting. The child's grandfather, a bad guy, found his grandson and tried his best to seize the child. Jackie Chan and his assistant were robbed of their children and were sad. Later, in the film, the child's grandfather was frightened and went crazy, and the child was rescued by the police.

I like the role played by Jackie Chan, and I like Jackie Chan's strength even more.

Interviews with the top scorer in the high school entrance examination and full score composition (reposted)

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(Cui Xuefeng, Liaoning)

In the 2003 high school entrance examination in Liaoning Province, Yang Wanning from my class ranked seventh in Lingyuan City with a total score of 486.5 points, and his Chinese score was 108 points (The full score for Chinese is 120 points) Ranked first in Lingyuan City, especially his composition received a full score of 50 points! This is also the second time that the students I teach have won the Chinese language high school entrance examination after 1996 and 2000! This is the result of my emphasis on Chinese listening, speaking, reading and writing ability training, insisting on mutual review and correction of compositions, focusing on extracurricular reading, and encouraging students to regard "Chinese Language Newspaper" and "Chinese Language Newspaper* High School Entrance Examination Edition" as must-read newspapers and periodicals and benefit from them. ! Not long ago, I made an appointment with my student Yang Wanning. The following is a summary of our conversation. I wrote it down to discuss with the students who are about to take the 2004 high school entrance examination how to learn and test Chinese well.

Cui Xuefeng: Student Yang Wanning, in the 2003 high school entrance examination, you were successfully admitted to the "small class" of Lingyuan No. 1 Middle School with a score of 486.5 points and seventh place in the city, and you won the first prize. Lingyuan examination area's top scorer in Chinese, especially your composition, which received a full score of 50 points. While I congratulate you on such a good result, I also want to ask you to talk about the secret of your success, so that your students can learn more. Take fewer detours. As my favorite disciple, you have to tell the truth!

Yang Wanning: Teacher Cui, you have given me the award. The reason why I achieved some results in this high school entrance examination is because of your good guidance! However, I did do it down-to-earth.

Cui Xuefeng: OK, Wanning, let’s talk about how you review for the high school entrance examination.

Yang Wanning: For fresh graduates, we must first choose a better set of review materials. I think the best review material is the "National High School Entrance Examination Chinese Test Papers", because each test paper is the painstaking work of teaching and research experts from various provinces and cities. Question types are constantly emerging, and candidates must be well aware of them and remain unchanged in the face of ever-changing questions. Everyone should choose genuine high school entrance examination papers with scoring standards and make a review plan to understand them clearly. Especially when doing reading questions, do not write hastily. You should first think independently, then compare the answers, "transcribe" them completely, and think over and over again. Through long-term speculation, you will find many "unique" things in the Chinese language questions. Subtly, you can understand the unique "subject language", master the terminology for answering questions, and be able to use concise and concise language to hit the mark in the exam. Take points. This is like practicing calligraphy. You must first trace and understand the "intention of the pen", and then write by yourself. By carefully grasping the scoring standards, you will have a strategic understanding of the high school entrance examination. In this way, by grasping the essence of the test questions and analyzing the characteristics, you will have a clear plan in mind and achieve a leap in test scores (especially the reading part) in a short period of time. I suggest that fresh graduates use the last semester to sort out the high school entrance examination questions from all over the country, and the next semester to focus on the simulation questions of their own provinces and cities. The effect will be very good. Students who are still in the first and second grade of junior high school should also be more exposed to the high school entrance examination questions. The sooner you penetrate the high school entrance examination questions, the better.

Cui Xuefeng: OK. Your compositions are usually pretty good, but this time you got full marks for your composition for the high school entrance exam. Let’s talk about how you prepared for the high school entrance exam, right?

Yang Wanning: Writing is one of the reasons why many students are afraid of the high school entrance examination. In fact, as long as the narrative of the essay is clear, the content is healthy, the materials used can serve the center, and the noble moral sentiments are the keynote, you can definitely get a score for Category II (etc.) essay in the high school entrance examination (more than 90% of the full score for the essay). This requires students with poor foundation to practice writing through recall and other methods, improve their narrative skills, accumulate composition materials, and write non-stop every day, accumulating sand into a tower, and setting the stage for victory.

Students can also appreciate the excellent compositions for the high school entrance examination through some newspapers and magazines. Perhaps the style of our peers is more acceptable to us. Before the high school entrance examination, most of the classmates in the class were anxious, and the two full-scoring essays written in Jinan City in 2002: "Victory is in front of you, happiness belongs to you" and "Embrace Victory, Embrace the Sunshine" completely became my spiritual support, and even In the high school entrance examination room, before the test papers were handed out, I still read aloud, which made me energetic and high-spirited, so that I won the ideal results with the belief that I must win. I hope everyone can absorb the essence and use it for themselves. In addition, today’s essay grading allows for high scores and full marks, so students with strong writing skills have more freedom to express their talents.

Cui Xuefeng: That’s right. I once read you an essay "The Death of Red Rabbit" with a perfect score for the college entrance examination. I think your "The Witness of the Great China" is no less than "The Death of Red Rabbit". I say this because you are a junior high school student. ah! I know that when you were in the second year of junior high school, you bought books such as "2002 Compilation of Chinese Language Test Questions for High School Entrance Examinations across the Country" and studied them. Can you talk about your learning ideas?

Yang Wanning: There is no doubt that Chinese is a subject that relies on slow progress. Only with rich knowledge accumulation and experience is the only way to be able to do well in the high school entrance examination. How big the society is, how big the Chinese classroom is, and Chinese is everywhere in life.

Mr. Lu You's admonition goes: "If you want to learn poetry, you must work hard outside poetry." You must consciously accumulate knowledge and correct bad language habits, such as the correct writing of Chinese characters and pinyin, the accumulation of classical poems and famous sayings, even if the strength of the examination is It's too small and "attack" won't work. The extracurricular classical Chinese readings tested in some provinces and cities are mostly famous ancient stories. If you have accumulated enough extracurricular knowledge, you will know the outline even if you cannot read the original text. Moreover, almost all provincial and municipal high school entrance examination requirements for Chinese character writing are linked to scores, so practice should be strengthened on a daily basis.

It is also very important to expand your knowledge and enrich your interests and hobbies. For example, expository essays are mostly based on questions about nature and science and technology. The questions are single and not very difficult. The reason why candidates lose points is mostly due to the limitations of professional knowledge. Students lose points because they don’t understand, which is unfair! I like classical music and revolutionary songs very much, and feel that pop rock and the like are vulgar in comparison. I really love storytelling, and I have learned a lot of vivid and to-the-point language from it... Chinese language in the high school entrance examination embodies humanistic care. Therefore, students who care about the country, society and daily life will stand out.

In the process of Chinese learning, there is another extremely important link - reading, which is more important than reciting. Good articles (especially classical Chinese articles) must be read repeatedly, both in and out of class, in order to appreciate the charm of Chinese characters and the deep meaning of the articles. Students should increase their interest in learning and cultivate noble sentiments through recitation, so as to continuously enhance their sense of language. Answering all Chinese test questions must be based on understanding. If the sense of language is not formed and the understanding is not in place, it is impossible to get high scores.

In addition, listening to the teacher’s teachings and learning from past mistakes is also an indispensable magic weapon in Chinese learning. Authoritative and timely newspapers and periodicals such as "Chinese Newspaper* High School Entrance Examination Edition" should also be selected as Chinese extracurricular reading materials to keep up with the latest high school entrance examination trends, study the experiences of famous teachers and successful students, and avoid detours. Moreover, essay writers often choose materials from them. .

Cui Xuefeng: Your eloquent speech before class and your impassioned speech in "Praise to the National Flag" left a deep impression on our class and even the entire school. After listening to your introduction above, your fellow students will definitely learn from you, prepare early, and avoid many detours. Do you have anything else to say to your fellow students?

Yang Wanning: "What you see on paper is shallow, but you know that you have to do it in detail." The above are some of my understanding and experience of Chinese language learning, and I would like to encourage you all. Here I wish thousands of simple and hard-working friends to dance when they hear the rooster, work hard, be a hundred times more energetic, and use their hard work and sweat to compose a magnificent poem on the journey of life!

Cui Xuefeng: I want to send your full score essay to "Chinese Newspaper* High School Entrance Examination Edition" so that more students can get some inspiration from your essay, is that okay?

Yang Wanning: Of course. If it can be recognized by the editor of "Chinese Language Newspaper* High School Entrance Examination Edition", then I will be very happy.

Cui Xuefeng: Then let’s try our luck. It took up your rest time, thank you! goodbye!

Full score essay "The Witness of the Great China"

Attached: "2003 Liaoning Provincial High School Entrance Examination Chinese Composition Test Questions" and the full score essay "The Witness of the Great China" written by Yang Wanning.

1. "2003 Liaoning Provincial High School Entrance Exam Chinese Composition Test Questions"

Writing (full score 50 points)

The dining table is a mirror that reflects eating hygiene habits. The dining table is a platform to display the quality of family life. The dining table is An accessory that embodies the owner's aesthetic concepts, the dining table is the crystallization of the designer's wisdom; the dining table has witnessed our joys, sorrows, and joys, and many moving things have happened on the dining table; the dining table has been accompanying the life of human civilization from ancient times to the future. The history of the dining table is emotional, and the future of the dining table is fascinating... - Please write an essay on a certain aspect of the above prompts, using the topic of "dining table".

Requirements: 1. You can draft your own title and there is no restriction on the style of writing.

2． The handwriting must be neat and clear (2 points will be awarded when scoring if this requirement is met), no less than 600 words.

3. Please do not reveal your real name or school name in the article.

2． Student Yang Wanning’s full score essay "The Witness of the Great China"

The Witness of the Great China

Love is long, thoughts are long, and the aspirations of the descendants of the Yan and Huang Dynasties have not yet been fulfilled!

China has its own majestic soul, and it is our vast divine continent!

——Inscription

(Yang Wanning, Class 1, Grade 3, No. 3 Middle School, Lingyuan City, Liaoning)

Thinking back to the past, when the Han Dynasty practiced building boats, the Tang Dynasty used iron pillars, the Song Dynasty wielded giant axes, and the Yuan Dynasty crossed straw bags...the great achievements and achievements, who are the heroes? I have witnessed it with just a seat at the dining table. Please take a look -

The Epang Palace in Six Hundred Miles was reduced to ashes, creating an overlord of Western Chu, but the current situation also favored Liu Bang. Xiang Yu hosted a banquet for King Liu Han at Hongmen. In front of the table, Xiang Zhuang danced with his sword, and dangers abounded. If it hadn't been for Zhang Zifang's ingenious plan, Pei Gong would have been killed by the sword! Who could sigh that "there are strong men guarding the four sides"? Where can I find six hundred years of Han Dynasty? Dining table, you have witnessed the coldness of the sword!

In Baidi City, Kong Ming was entrusted by the late master to follow him. This "indifferent and clear-minded man" The good appearance of "Peace and Peace" also laments day and night. Six out of Qishan, the sword pointed at the Central Plains, the battle was endless. In the Five Zhang Plains, the dying old man still couldn't eat or drink, but he couldn't write a book, but how could he lead our soldiers to fight again? The breeze took him into his arms, but Zhuge's name will be immortalized in the universe and will last forever. immortal. Dining table, you have witnessed the heart of the veteran ministers of the two dynasties!

"Li Bai wrote a hundred poems about drinking wine, and went to sleep in a restaurant in Chang'an City. The emperor couldn't come on board the ship, and he claimed that he was a wine fairy. "Li Bai likes to drink, and people can always feel the smoothness of relaxing and activating blood in his poems. Li Taibai wrote poems when he had wine, and the place above the banquet was where he could relax. Dining table, you have witnessed the drunkenness of the poetry immortal!

In Chenqiaoyi, a general wore a yellow robe and established a new dynasty, realizing the fourth unification of China. This man was Song Taizu. He was very selfish and forgot about the brothers who followed him in the north and south. A glass of wine actually took away the military power of the veteran general in the army. The story of "a cup of wine releases military power" has been told for a thousand years. Dining table, you have witnessed the style of the king!

Shanhaiguan, the Manchu and Qing cavalry entered the customs. Several generations of people have dared to shout "Reverse the Qing Dynasty and restore the Ming Dynasty", but this is in vain. But the Manchu and Qing Dynasties bowed their heads under the strong ships and cannons of the West, which made China bow their heads. When the Chinese envoys were negotiating with those "Yinping poor bandits", the Western devils joked at the dinner table: "If China's warships are as good as Chinese food, then we will be the ones to admit defeat." What an outrageous sentence, so shocking A sentence that distorts the history of the Chinese nation. Dining table, you have witnessed China’s humiliation of losing power and humiliating the country!

A dining table has witnessed too much, there is national hatred, there is family hatred, there are glory, there is darkness... After experiencing the vicissitudes of life, it has become a mulberry field. Things are different and people are different. But the integrity of the descendants of Yan and Huang has not changed, and the integrity of the children of China will not change. The industrious and brave Chinese nation will one day be more powerful than Europe and better than the earth!

(Cui Xuefeng’s recommended note: This article is the original text of the examination composition and has not been changed.)