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Supplement: the last sentence you want to think about and the last sentence I wrote are ok ... It feels so good!

Qingjiang river is silent, and spring has gone without a trace.

Who knows that acacia is bitter, and the cool wind doesn't understand people!

Supplement: Hmm. Looking back, my artistic conception is ok, but not so good ... Inspiration reappears:

Qingjiang month is silent,

The ship crossed the water without a trace,

It's only raining,

The breeze doesn't understand people.

Birds can't sing in the forest. You wrote a beautiful and quiet night scene by the river at night. ..

The moonlit night in Qingjiang River is silent, and dense birds don't sing in the forest.

The boat is dark and the cool wind doesn't understand.

At that time, I thought of the last two sentences ... the main meaning is that at night, the river is very quiet. Birds don't sing ... The boatman who came back from fishing was tired and turned on the little yellow light to get ready for bed ... At this time, "I" stood alone by the river and felt sad ... No one could understand my feelings. ..

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