It was a summer vacation day in grade three. A chubby uncle came to my house with a small box, and he didn't know what to do when he was back and forth on my computer. Dad said: this is broadband. It means I can surf the Internet in the future. This is the beginning of my understanding of the network.
Under the guidance of my mother, I curiously and clumsily opened the websites recommended by my mother: China Children's Network, Xuele China, Baidu ..., haha, how rich! What news, shopping, classes, all over the world, cartoons ..., I was dazzled, and my little heart was filled with joy, although I didn't quite understand many things on the Internet. Suddenly there was a "cough" sound. What happened? Did the computer catch a cold? Is it uncomfortable to say? Mom smiled and told me that someone was online. "What do you mean, online?" I asked curiously. "Online is also called login. Someone among your friends is online. Let you know." "Oh, I see, it's not that the computer is sick!" I smiled shyly and thought: technology is developing so fast that computers can "talk"!
my mother told me that it would be very convenient to use the internet correctly, and she helped me log on to my qq, which my mother had already applied for. I turned on the camera, microphone and qq window, and before I could have a closer look, I heard the bell "DuDu". My mother said that my uncle was asking for a video. When my mother clicked the mouse, she saw my uncle, aunt and lovely little sister huddled in front of the computer and laughing. Haha, that's great! It turns out that you can video chat through the network! Mom said that this function is equivalent to "videophone". That is to say, I can chat with my little sister in Yantai in the future weekend; You can say hello to your grandparents in Anhui in person. You can see your brothers and sisters who are going to college; Of course, you can communicate with my teachers and classmates!
the internet is amazing! The first time I went online, I not only learned a lot of information, but also had a face-to-face chat with my relatives and friends. It also made me understand that technology is developing too fast, and if you don't study hard, you will be eliminated by the times!
Comment:
The beginning is simple and clear, which leads to surfing the Internet for the first time through several firsts. At the same time, one sentence brings out "I heard that the Internet is very interesting", which gives people a suspense: What is the author's first surfing the Internet like? Still. . . . . . , people want to see it.
In the second paragraph, I briefly explain the beginning of the incomprehension and intuitive understanding of broadband in children's eyes. As you can imagine, the child is puzzled when he sees a "chubby uncle holding a small box" on his computer, which not only reminds people of his curiosity, but also realizes his love for the computer. I must ask my father: I am not afraid that the computer is broken, and the uncle doesn't know it, so he appears: "Dad!
The third and fourth paragraphs are the focus of the article, and they also highlight the author's curiosity, surprise, embarrassment and mischievousness after misunderstanding when surfing the Internet for the first time. The words are concise and the language is simple, but the description and connotation are rich. It can be said that the language is concise, but the description is incisive, hearty and enjoyable.
Among them, "curious and clumsy" highlights the young author's expression of "I don't know but I'm eager to know" but I can't operate skillfully when surfing the Internet for the first time! Followed by a short sentence "Ha ha, really rich! What news, shopping, classes, all over the world, cartoons …… "describes the surprise and surprise of the young author when he first surfed the Internet with words similar to children's oral language, which reflects the young author's sense of proportion to his expression and inner grasp at that time and shows the exquisiteness and richness of his writing. A "computer caught a cold? Is it uncomfortable to say? " People can't help but imagine the expression of a third-grade elementary school student looking at his mother's inquiry with a puzzled face, which also reflects the complex mentality of "ignorance" and "want to know" when children first contact the "power grid". "Oh, I see, it's not that the computer is sick!" I smiled embarrassedly ",and aptly portrayed the expression that the little author felt embarrassed and naughty because of his" ignorance ",as if seeing the little author touching his head and making a" face "to his mother and muttering in his mouth: So, it's not that the computer is sick! From this, the little author lamented: "Science and technology are developing so fast that computers can" speak "!"
In the fourth paragraph, the author mainly describes another important function of "power grid": video calling. From the few words in the article: "Chat with my little sister in Yantai", "Say hello to my grandparents who are far away in Anhui" and "See my brothers and sisters who are going to college", we can see that the little author's hometown is far away in the south, and his grandparents, uncles and brothers and sisters who go to school are not in front of him, so they seldom meet each other. From these words, we can see the helplessness and expectation of meeting these people when the little author has no network. Using four "yes" in a row better shows the joy and urgency after "having a net", and also shows the deep affection and friendship of the little author. "Ha ha, that's great!" Although the text is concise, we can vividly see the joy of the little author who uses the "power grid" to see his loved ones. The sentence "I saw my uncle, aunt and lovely little sister huddled in front of the computer with the click of a mouse" not only wrote the little author's joy to see his uncle's family, but also showed the naughty character of the little author, as if to see a child pointing to the head image of his uncle's family huddled together in the computer and watching his mother laugh (you can imagine his mother laughing at this time), as if to say: Mom, look at his uncle. It also reflects the eagerness of my uncle's family to make video calls and see my sister's family. This is also the most practical and commonly used embodiment of video calling function at present, especially among relatives and friends who are thousands of miles away. This also verifies that Ben