The composition in the examination room focuses on quickly attracting the attention of the marking teachers, making them moved and applauding them. Otherwise, you can only get an anodyne score. It is no exaggeration to say that the adaptation of the original work of the 98-edition TV series Water Margin is a model of composition in the examination room.

? Take the villain Gao Qiu as an example. The description of Gao Qiu in the original work is not very detailed, especially before entering the palace. Only that there is a son in Tokyo who has gone with the wind in Lang Ke. His surname is Gao, ranking second. He has been stabbing guns and making sticks since he was a child. The most important thing is to hit the balloon well. The capital has a large population, so I don't call him a sophomore, I call him a golf ball. Later, he made a fortune and changed to Gao Qiu. This man doesn't understand benevolence, righteousness, propriety and wisdom, and is honest and kind. He only helps in and out of Tokyo. Because of helping the son of a pig iron king make money, the defendant went to Kaifeng, broke forty crutches and distributed them out of bounds. He also asked Tokyo people not to let him stay, so he had to entrust Liu Dalang's family to take in idle people. Gao Qiu didn't return to his hometown until the emperor granted amnesty, and went to Dong's military commander by relying on Liu Dalang's letters. Knowing that he was misbehaving and afraid that his descendants would not learn well, Dong Bingquan entertained him for more than ten days and thought of a reason: "My family is under the brilliance of fireflies, so I recommend the first step and the bachelor's degree. After a long time, I will get married." Gao Qiu exultation, Su Dongpo naturally despises him, and changed hands to recommend him to Xu. Master Xu couldn't put it down for such a romantic figure as Gao Qiu, leaving him as a personal companion. When Gao Qiu gave Duan a jade toy, a mandarin duck became his lover and kept him company. When luck comes, it cannot be stopped. Zhezong collapsed, there was no prince, and Duan Wang was made the son of heaven, which was later Song Huizong. Song Huizong taught the Privy Council to pretend to be a border official, and went straight to Gao Qiu to be a second-class official, handsome Qiu Fu.

The 98th edition of the film and television drama "The Water Margin" made a bold adaptation of Gao Qiu's appearance and shaping, which left a deep impression on people instantly. The background of this TV series is the mysterious riverside scene in Tomb-Sweeping Day. Along the suburbs of Tokyo, we soon entered Tokyo City. The three streets and six cities in the city are as prosperous as dreams, and all kinds of hawking are endless. Our villain Gao Qiu is dragging his feet on this stage. He did have a few brushes when he played cuju, which attracted many people to watch. But Tokyo is a land of talented people and undiscovered talent. In a blink of an eye, people's eyes were attracted by a more procrastinating dancer next to them. Applause is constantly unhappy with Qiu who was left out in the cold. The key is to lose face. Gao Qiu's friends can't stand this evil, so they decide to give this ignorant little Jianghu a scare. The poor dancer is new. I didn't know Gao Qiu was a local ruffian in Tokyo. In his ignorance, he has broken the stick and hit him. (Note that when fighting, Gao Qiu doesn't have to do anything, but his brothers do everything they can. Although the design of this scene didn't take much time, it revealed a lot to the audience: Gao Qiu is a broken house with bad conduct and surrounded by gangsters; Gao Qiu's cuju skills are extraordinary, and he often plays tricks outside; Gao Qiu is a small leader among gangsters and has certain leadership skills. The gangsters are willing to go through fire and water for him. This also shows that Gao Qiu's later success is possible.

? On his deathbed, the righteous Wang Jin appeared, and Gao Qiu and others were beaten black and blue by Wang Jin, begging for mercy. In the original book, Wang Jin didn't offend Gao Qiu, but Wang Jin's father once knocked over Gao Qiu and forged a deep hatred with Gao Qiu. However, in the film and television drama, Wang Jin became sworn enemies with Gao Qiu for saving the weak, which triggered a personal vendetta against Gao Gao Qiu, making the story more intense and smooth.

Gao Qiu's friends contacted him to attack Wang Jin. Gao Qiu once said: As long as Wang Jin can't die, he will be beaten in the future. If you want to kill Wang Jin, you need to file a lawsuit. He has filed a lawsuit and doesn't want to eat any more. You can swallow this evil spirit and be the kind of person who kills people without going to court. These words are rich in meaning: Gao Qiu has never let go of hatred, and this hatred will eventually be reported; Gao Qiu is not content with the status quo and disdains to associate with these people. He wants a better life and more power. He wants to work hard! These words naturally promoted the development of the next plot, and also easily explained Gao Qiu's once-sent experience. The narrative of the plot is not slow at all. It's amazing.

? Later, the context of the story basically respected the original work. Dong Bing was dissatisfied with Gao Qiu's virtue and recommended Gao Qiu to Su Dongpo, who in turn recommended him to Master Xu. Gao Qiu was asked by Duan Wang for an unusual foot, and Duan Wang became the son of heaven. Thus, Gao Qiu's lucky life began.

? But the writer thinks it seems too cheap to let Gao Qiu go. In order to make his role fuller, he also arranged wonderful scenes such as "being beaten if you have money" and "brothers becoming sons if you have money". When Gao Qiu entered the palace, his former brothers came to their beloved senior two. After all kinds of flattery, they asked to visit the palace and broaden their horizons. Gao Qiu turned his head and saw the gatekeeper of Duan Wangfu. His eyes became gloomy. He was silent for a while and said, "Cuixian Building will treat the brothers to drinks tomorrow." The two brothers happily waited upstairs for Grade Two, but what they got was a beating and a bold warning: "There is no Grade Two here, so come and disturb each other and send you to prison!" " Gangsters think it's their luck to know sophomore year. It never occurred to them that their sophomore year always had only themselves in their eyes. Once the interests of senior two are damaged, senior two will "beat you flat or even crush you". What is more exaggerated and dramatic is that after the golf ball is promoted in a straight line. Gao Qiu's uncle has a son named Gao Pei. Gao Kan struggled to follow Gao Qiu, so he jumped in at night and claimed to be Gao Qiu's son. A few "dads" who tried their best to flatter Gao Qiu didn't move, until Gao Kan drove him to die a natural death and hit him on the head with a brick. Gao Qiu recognized this originally brother's son, and later Hua Hua Tai sui Gao Yanei. The embedding of these two plots is very clever. People in Gao Qiu are "ignorant of benevolence, righteousness, propriety and wisdom, loyal and virtuous". If the narrator is introduced, it is better to show nature through intuitive examples. This also tells us that shaping the characters needs specific descriptions to make the images three-dimensional and full, and blind introduction will not play much role.

In a word, the first episode of the 98 edition of Water Margin is simply a perfect exam composition. The beginning is classic, the transition is natural, the details are appropriate, the characters are full, the plot is clever, and it is amazing everywhere. There is another key point-the story of Gao Qiu and his brother tells people that life is in their own hands. Never make friends with "Gao Qiu"!