The composition with the theme of "war and peace" has always followed the history of mankind and is a massacre of mankind itself initiated by mankind. Whether it is an unjust war or a just war, death is inevitable, and "man", as an individual, has a limited time to live in the world. In this sense, "people" should live well and enjoy the gift of life, not be cannon fodder. Some people say that "war is a faint chess game", which makes sense. For the benefit of the weak, thousands of innocent people lost their homes and even their lives. Although war can be divided into justice and injustice, good people always think of blood, cruelty, pain and disaster when they mention war. Because of this, opposing war and advocating peace have become the knowledge of most people in our time. The purpose of this unit's composition training is to guide students to review history, understand the war and think about the future and destiny of mankind. War is unfamiliar to middle school students living in the 2 1 century and peacetime. Their understanding of war and its harm can only be understood from TV, TV dramas reflecting war and news reports reporting foreign wars. Therefore, students should be careful not to write empty and argumentative about big and far-reaching war topics. To prevent hollowing out and discussion, we must describe the specific story. Only by relying on the specific storyline, what you feel and think will not appear empty and powerless, and you will feel that what you feel and think is true and credible, that is, it is often said that "turning the small into the small" and seeing the big from the small. To write a good composition in this field, collecting and using information is the most important link in the writing process. Only when your information is true, specific and touching can you have a reliable guarantee for writing a good composition. There is not much to say about theoretical guidance, and it is useless to say it. The old method-model essay leads the way and talks while walking. Wen Yi, a typical fan: Flying Pigeons in My Heart ① When the United States invaded Iraq, a picture kept echoing in my mind: an Iraqi boy was hiding in the corner, watching the invaders in horror. The child's mother was killed in the war, leaving her only child. (2) The war displaced people and deprived the country of human rights and dignity. For many years, people have cursed war and longed for peace. This sentence is connected too fast, and before the destruction caused by the war is described, it turns to people's "longing for peace", which will write down people's longing for peace below. This led to organizational confusion. Peace is the common aspiration of people all over the world. Peace is a dream in people's hearts, in which people give out sweet smiles; Peace is a gentle song in spring, lingering in every corner of the world; Peace is the bright smiling face of children, blooming in every young heart. It's best to put this paragraph in the sixth paragraph. It is true that the world is not peaceful. War, crime and terror want to turn the world into hell again and again. But peace, the god of justice tramples on evil again and again, and turns the world into heaven again and again. This sentence should be replaced by the damage caused by war to the people and to the country. We don't want to wake up in the gunfire, we don't want to March in the smoke, and we don't want to sink in pessimism and despair. Peace should be rooted in every young heart and condensed in every mature thought. Peace should be an eternal theme accompanying human progress. 6. We pray for peace! ⑦ We pray for birds and flowers, and laughter and laughter spread all over the global village; Every villager in the global village enjoys the care of relatives, the blessings of friends and the prayers of strangers in the warm sunshine and drizzle. ⑧ Let's release the pigeons in our hearts, make our world full of love, and let peace stay on earth forever. Analysis of 1, the author's material selection is unique. The author may have collected a lot of war materials and learned a lot about war stories, but he didn't list the collected materials and stories, because he knew it would only become a running account. The author selected a simple picture from many materials, and a little boy looked at the picture of the aggressor in horror. The picture is simple, the image is concrete and the scene is touching. 2. War and peace, justice and evil, destruction and construction. Although the author's thinking on this subject is still immature and immature, the author's pure heart, beautiful feelings and sincere cries are vividly on the paper. The article reveals the author's desire for peace and his rejection of war everywhere. 3. The author contrasts people's longing for peace with the reality of war, and clearly expresses the theme of calling for peace and hating war. 4. One of the shortcomings: If the picture of the little boy being frightened is described more concretely, it will enhance the touching power. 5. Disadvantage 2: When describing the two levels of "cruelty of war" and "people's desire for peace", the organization is a bit chaotic and tangled. For example, in two paragraphs (4) and (5) of nature, we talk about war first, then peace, and then people's wishes in the war. These two sides, feeling and contact are insufficient, and contact with the bottom is also insufficient. Some meanings are repetitive. This may be because the author didn't arrange the structure of the article before writing, so he wrote it first, then thought about what to write, so that he could write wherever he thought. If you want to modify it, you must first arrange the structure and level of the article, so that the written article will be organized. First, the picture of the boy's fear. Second, the evil of war, the destruction of people and the world. Third, people long for peace and hope to live a happy life. Fourth, the call in the author's heart. Typical fan Wen Er: Jiangxi examinee, falling sky, falling sky! A meteor across the vast sky, I silently made a small wish. May the world be peaceful forever! (This title goes straight to the center and runs through the whole article. )-Inscription Is the black smoke still with you? Is the roaring plane still hovering in the sky above you? Oh, Iraqi girl, your pure eyes are full of tears, and your helpless eyes are full of fear. What are you thinking about? (This sentence leads to the following. ) Are you thinking about your parents? How much do you miss them? Are you blaming them for leaving you alone? No, girl, that evil bullet took them and your dear mom and dad. They flew to a beautiful paradise, but why don't they want to be with you? Are you thinking about that lovely kitten? How docile this kitten is. Not long after birth. They are all white, so cute. But what about the kitten? What about the only kitten that can bring you comfort? It became a sacrifice of smoke. Are you thinking about your once beautiful hometown? How beautiful my hometown is. The flowing water Ding Dong rings, birds are singing cheerful songs in the branches, and flowers are dancing in the wind. But now, what you see are pieces of ruins, crumbling houses and charred trees. Is this still the beautiful and quiet home? Where is the bird? Where are the flowers? What about the stream? You cried, so sad, so heartbreaking! (transition, transition, I thought about it in the previous article, and later I cried. ) Oh, Iraqi girl, stop crying. You see, so many brothers and sisters, parents, uncles and aunts in the world are paying attention to you. They have been praying for you and hope you are safe. They love peace so much! Oh, Iraqi girl, stop crying. Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? I, a 14-year-old girl from China, and my compatriots-countless peace-loving people are worried about you, because we all love peace and hate war. Oh, Iraqi girl, look up at the stars. Tonight, stars shine for you. Look, meteor, let's make a sincere wish: let the world be peaceful forever! Analysis 1, unique and specific material selection. The author may have collected a lot of information related to the war, but he only chose one shot: an Iraqi girl with tears in her eyes and full of fear. This is the biggest foundation for the success of this paper. Such a picture theme is not surprising or rare in the war theme data. However, the author can produce touching associations from this picture, which greatly enriches the connotation of this picture, and at the same time expresses the danger of war and the call for peace with vivid words. 2. Lenovo is full of emotion. The author grabbed the girl's tearful eyes and asked in fear, What are you thinking? This leads to touching associations: I miss my parents, who were killed by bullets; Think of the lovely kitten as a sacrifice of smoke; Miss the beautiful hometown, has become a ruin. A beautiful life, a beautiful home, at the moment of the war, vanished in smoke, leaving only endless sadness and pain. Lenovo enriches the picture and deepens the theme. 3. Feelings are real and cordial. As a 14-year-old China girl, the author comforted the Iraqi girl "Don't cry" with kindness and sincerity, prayed for her and cared for her. Encourage Iraqi girls not to be sad, but to face the reality bravely, because there are still many peace-loving people in this world. 4. Situation creates harmony. The author grasped the harmonious and charming artistic conception of "Starlight-Meteor-Wish", narrowed the distance between "fourteen-year-old China girl" and Iraqi girl, and placed girls from two distant countries under the same brilliant starry sky. He also grasped the related words and behaviors such as "wishing meteor", and naturally expressed the author's good wishes and the theme of the article without trace. 5. Exquisite and harmonious structure. The author uses the structural method of "altogether-except-altogether" to show the tragedy brought by the war incisively and vividly, and truly and naturally expresses the good wishes of a peace-loving China girl; In the process of "dividing", it is more real and touching to express it with parallel paragraphs. The beginning and end of the article take care of each other and stick to the theme at the same time. The "inscription" in the article plays a role in keeping close to the center and taking care of the full text. The structural arrangement is as follows: the girl who fell into the sky-tears-fear-missing her parents-has been killed by bullets. I want to be a lovely kitten-it has become a sacrifice of smoke. I miss my beautiful hometown-it's in ruins. You are crying very sadly. Don't cry-all the brothers and sisters in the world are watching you. Stop crying-China girls and compatriots are watching you. Stop crying-let's make a sincere wish together. The expanded school was in ruins; Miss the schoolbag, it has become a piece; Thinking that the textbook has become ashes; ..... Fan Wensan: Tonight is a quiet night, and everything is silent. A bright moon sprinkled soft moonlight on the earth. Occasionally, I heard the slight sound of the wind blowing on the leaves. Say goodbye to the hustle and bustle of the day, standing by the window alone and enjoying the night view outside, how comfortable it is! Suddenly I looked down and found a thick book "History of China" lying on the windowsill, which my father read at noon. When I opened the book, my heart was pounding. After a difficult and tortuous development of the Chinese nation, terrible war scenes appeared before my eyes. ) The sun and the moon are bleak, the sky is dark, and the seven heroes of the Warring States coexist in the land of China. All the vassal States are fighting for rights, and under the shadow of swords, they only see people in panic, rivers of blood, people suffering from war being separated and displaced. Time flies, and the wheel of history is suddenly fixed in the Three Kingdoms era when heroes came out in troubled times. The fire of Chibi, which lights up half the sky, is burning, and a series of warships from the north are burned to ashes. The shouts and killings on the shore were earth-shattering. Cao Cao led the army to flee desperately, and all the soldiers who were seriously injured and exhausted complained. I couldn't bear to watch this painful scene again, and quickly turned over many pages. At this moment, the Tang Dynasty, the "golden age of Kaiyuan", came to us. The people are well-fed and the country is prosperous. Many foreign businessmen praised them, and many navigators set sail, eager to find their "paradise on earth". Excited, I lamented the decline of China in the late Qing Dynasty. The miserable old China was invaded by imperialism. A gunshot from Lugou Bridge woke people who had been sleeping for many years. People had to pick up swords and guns and rush to the battlefield. Thousands of brave men died in battle, and countless civilians were destroyed. The wheel of history is still moving forward, and human beings are playing the tragedy of war again and again in ignorance. (Summarize the above. Only with peace can people live and work in peace and contentment; With peace, the environment can be beautiful and harmonious; Only when there is peace can the country be stable and United; With peace, science can advance by leaps and bounds; Only with peace can civilization surpass its ancestors. I closed the book and looked up at everything outside the window: rows of street lamps in the distance, lights nearby, and twinkling stars in the night sky. Tonight is very quiet, I silently think: it's good to have peace! (take care of the beginning. The analysis of this article is exquisite and breathtaking. It is embodied in: 1. With the help of the book History of China, the author recalls the historical process, describes the disasters brought to people by wars in past dynasties, damages the country and calls for peace, so as to express the topic of "war and peace", and his writing angle is unique. 2. The author created the artistic conception of "quiet tonight", which echoed from beginning to end, making it easy for people to ponder and express their feelings. 3. Through the way of "looking through", several scenes of the Warring States, the Three Kingdoms, the Tang Dynasty and the Seven Chivalrous Men at the end of the Qing Dynasty are skillfully and selectively connected in series, so as to turn the big into the small, turn the virtual into the real, let the bloody facts speak, and prove with the once brief glory that the tragedy of war cannot be forgotten, and peace is the hope of the whole world. Innovation Fan described himself as a poem by Jiang Laodu, "If you break the halberd and don't sell it, you will wash away the former dynasty." I am the halberd in the movie. I am over 2000 years old by counting my fingers. In the past two thousand years, we have witnessed many historical events and vicissitudes, as well as war and cruelty, peace and happiness. With the passage of time, the rust has already worn away the heroic spirit of that year, leaving only endless regrets and lamentations. I think that when I was young, I galloped on the battlefield, how many pairs of heads I pricked, how much blood I swallowed, how many desperate cries I heard and how many frightened eyes I saw, which made great achievements for my master. There are bodies everywhere, rivers of blood, mountains of bones and resentment, but I don't feel guilty at all, only heroic. My master also regards me as a hero, and my master finally upgraded from an ordinary soldier to a general with my outstanding military exploits. In a fierce defense war, my master and I fought to the death, and finally died because we were outnumbered. From then on, I left my master's hand, indulged in river sand, buried in loess and lived among the people. Only in this way can we truly realize that in every war and every battle, how many families leave their homes and beg for a living, and how many families are separated and their families are ruined. Every war is fought with the exploits of ordinary people; Every battle is decorated with soldiers' bones as medals. The sprint of the sixteen countries in the Eastern Jin Dynasty is a sword shadow woven by countless civilian soldiers with blood and life; The galloping of heroes in Sui and Tang Dynasties is a drum horn played with the fresh life of ordinary soldiers. The expedition to the East and the West in the Song Dynasty was a rainbow of thoughts and tears of many families who sent their children, wives and lang. Ming Chengzu went south to explore the North, and many cities were ruins. It took the emperor 300 years to remember ... "Xing, the people are suffering; When you die, the people suffer. " Rust eroded my heroic spirit in those days, but it also awakened my deep conscience. For two thousand years, it seems that my ears have been ringing with the voice of calling my father and my son. There always seems to be a sad face in front of me, and there always seems to be ghosts floating around me. I lay quietly in the corner of the museum, looking up at fresh faces, innocent and lively red scarves, middle-aged people with successful careers and elderly people with charity and leisure. Listening to the narrator's familiar voice, I can't help but sigh: peace is really good! Only peace can make people live a truly happy life. Analysis of 1, the author skillfully expressed his views with the help of Ji Shen's self-report. 2. With the help of self-report and comparative method, the brilliant achievements of hegemony are compared with the destruction of people's homes, which shows that war is the greatest harm to ordinary people. 3. Beautiful and concise language and profound emotion.