Teaching objectives:
1, learning skimming can quickly grasp the key points of reading.
2. Clear the train of thought of the full text, appreciate the wonderful paragraphs, and have your own experience in content and expression.
3. Learn from Mr. Ye Shengtao's qualities of being tolerant and strict with himself.
Second, the difficulties in teaching
1. Learn to skim and quickly capture the key points of reading.
2. Clear up the ideas of the full text and enjoy the wonderful paragraphs.
Class schedule: one class.
Third, the teaching content.
1, one of the teaching modules: course introduction
"Xiaoya": From the mountain, the scenery stops; Although I can't reach it, I yearn for it. It means lofty virtue, although it can't reach this level, it has always been yearned for in my heart. Possession of lofty virtues has always been respected by literati, and we also advocate all-round development of morality, intelligence, physique and beauty. How can we practice this beautiful character? What kind of person do you want to be? Today, let's go into the "Two or Three Events of Mr. Ye Shengtao" in Zhang Zhongxing, get to know Mr. Ye Shengtao and see how he is.
2. The second part of teaching: overall perception
① Profile of characters
Ye Shengtao: Ye Shengtao, formerly known as Ye Shengtao, was born in Suzhou, Jiangsu Province on 10/894. Modern writers, educators, literary publishers and social activists are known as "excellent language artists". He has served as Vice Minister of Education, President and Editor-in-Chief of People's Education Publishing House, Member of All-China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, Consultant of Chinese Writers Association, Curator of central research institute of culture and history, Vice Chairman of People's Republic of China (PRC) Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference, Standing Committee of the First, Second, Third, Fourth and Fifth NPC, and Chairman of the Central Committee for Democratic Progressive Party. 1983 was elected as the vice chairman of the 6th China People's Political Consultative Conference. He was a deputy to the First to the Fourth National People's Congress, a member of the Fifth the NPC Standing Committee, and a member of the First China People's Political Consultative Conference.
19 16 entered the Shanggong School affiliated to Shanghai Commercial Press and published the first fairy tale Scarecrow. 19 18 published the first vernacular novel Spring Banquet. 1923 published the novel Ni Huanzhi.
Zhang Zhongxing, formerly known as Natalie, is a famous scholar, philosopher and essayist from Shizhuang, Hebei Province. Mainly engaged in the study of Chinese, ancient literature and the history of thought. Participated in the compilation of Chinese teaching materials and the selection of ancient Chinese. Co-edited Selected Reading of Classical Chinese and Continued Reading of Classical Chinese; He has compiled Common Sense of Classical Chinese, Biography of Classical Chinese, Buddhism and China Literature, Negative Words and so on. He was one of the three unnamed lakeside scholars at the end of the 20th century, and he was also called "the three old people in Yanyuan" with Ji Xianlin and Jin Kemu. Mr. Ji Xianlin praised him as a "master, easy to change, supreme and superman".
② Read the text for the first time.
1, phonetic notation and explanation of words
Ding Mao's procrastination is mixed with sloppy, long and obscure business decisions, such as obeying orders, sharpening the knife, concise, long and obscure business decisions, such as.
(Commentary) Concise and to the point, works and other high-profile classics, sloppy, and southern accents are not ashamed to ask questions. I don't care about the street talk, and I laugh at it.
Sentence interpretation:
If I practice being a gentleman, I get nothing.
What's the use of learning and teaching?
Different people have different views on the same thing; Opinions on the same thing vary.
If you want to be a man, you want to be a man.
2. What is the reason why the author wrote this article? What is the chosen theme?
Qing: Mr. Ye Shengtao died as a memorial.
Subject matter: First, it is related to the author; second, it is not seen or obviously seen in Gao Wen Dian Shu.
3. What did the article say about Mr. Ye Shengtao? What is his main character? Clear: be lenient with others and be strict with yourself.
Be lenient with others: the third paragraph: modify the article (work)
The fourth natural paragraph: (life) seeing Fujian off
Paragraph 5: Reply
Paragraph 6: Speaking at the meeting
Be strict with yourself: write, be a man, strive for perfection, set an example and do your best.
3. The third teaching section: intensive reading.
Take the third natural section as an example
1. Read the third paragraph in chorus and summarize the qualities of Mr. Ye Shengtao.
Clear: rigorous and earnest, modest and sincere, easy-going and polite.
2. What sentences reflect his characteristics? Find, read and talk about your opinions.
For example:
(1) One day, I went to Mr. Ye's house and saw Mr. Ye writing something to change on his desk. Take a closer look, it is the punctuation mark of one of his articles. The word "painting" is interpreted as "painting as it is or painting repeatedly". Description is different from change, which is a direct transformation and change. This word "description" can reflect Mr. Ye Shengtao's serious attitude towards things and show his respect for the author.
(2) At that time, he had just arrived in the north, and he spoke Suzhou dialect with his hometown people and southern dialect with other locals. But he insisted on using Mandarin when writing articles. Saying different things to different people shows that he is easy-going and easy to get along with in life; However, the firm use of Putonghua at work shows Mr. Wang's serious and rigorous attitude towards this kind of work.
(3) He is not familiar with Mandarin, so he is not ashamed to ask questions. Let me help him polish it. As an accomplished man, he can discuss the revision of textbooks with others over and over again, which shows his humility and meticulous attitude.
He said, "You're welcome. On the contrary, it is more troublesome to change it directly. It's not just the language. Everything has changed. Don't be cautious, for fear of making mistakes. I don't think it is appropriate to change it back. " The language description shows Mr. Ye Shengtao's frankness. He treats his work without sticking to his feelings, taking pains, working hard and being kind to others.
Summary: The description of language and action embodies Mr. Ye Shengtao's preciseness, seriousness, modesty and sincerity, and shows his tolerance to others.
4. The fourth teaching module: comprehensive inquiry.
Reread the text and explore in cooperation what other places in the article show these qualities of Mr. Ye Shengtao? Or this article also reflects what kind of qualities Mr. Ye Shengtao has, and where can it be reflected?
For example:
1, the second natural section-Compared with Lu Xun and Yu Dafu, Mr. Ye Shengtao is characterized by plain rules.
Work hard.
2, the fourth paragraph-farewell (allusions)
3, the sixth natural paragraph-don't talk about other people's shortcomings in person, reflecting his tolerance and kindness.
Dial paragraphs 7 and 8.
This paper mainly describes the quality characteristics of Mr. Ye Shengtao's strict self-discipline through discussion and narration. Facing the problem of "what kind of language should be used for writing", we should resolutely show our attitude, insist on "writing words" and use concise and organized words. Not only do things, but also try to be natural, clear, concise, meticulous and sincere.
Summary: Today, from the article "Two or Three Events of Mr. Ye Shengtao", we have gained insight into Mr. Ye Shengtao's character of being lenient and strict with others, and also learned that Mr. Ye Shengtao is modest, sincere, approachable and conscientious, and deeply felt his personality charm and demeanor as a great scholar. I hope students can learn from these excellent predecessors and learn their ways of dealing with people.
Fourth, homework
1. Try to write about the people around you with the theme of "two or three things". Requirements: Highlight the characteristics of the characters.
Sixth, blackboard design
The second and third incidents of Mr. Ye Shengtao
Features: Be lenient with others and be strict with yourself.
Be lenient with others: revise the article (at work)
See the guests off (in life)
Answering letters
speak at the meeting
Be strict with yourself: write, be a man, strive for perfection, set an example and do your best.
"Mr. Ye Shengtao's February 23rd Incident" Teaching Plan II teaching material analysis
Mr. Ye Shengtao's "Two or Three Events" is an essay that writes people's notes. By recalling a few small things in the communication with Mr. Ye Shengtao, the author shows Ye Shengtao's strict self-discipline and generous integrity and demeanor, and reveals the author's memory and admiration between the lines. Through this article, let the students know Mr. Ye Shengtao's spiritual quality, understand that this article is written from a small point of view, and lead the students to master the skills of writing people and articles on the basis of learning the good qualities of characters. Therefore, in this class, on the one hand, we need to deeply understand the main idea of the text, on the other hand, we need to pay attention to guiding students to think and feel.
Teaching objectives
Knowledge and skills:
1, learn this article and write the writing method of character characteristics through some small things.
2. Experience the language features of this article, which is simple in writing and profound in connotation.
Process and method:
1, understand the main content of the article through independent reading.
2. Learn and use skimming, grasp the key points of reading and read out your own experience.
Emotional attitudes and values:
1, deeply understand the main idea of the article, and experience the thoughts and feelings revealed by the author in the article.
2. Learn from Mr. Ye Shengtao's tolerant and self-disciplined character.
Teaching focus:
1. Understanding the writing characteristics of this article is simple and profound.
2. Understand Mr. Ye Shengtao's view of Chinese recorded in the article.
Teaching difficulties:
Learn from Mr. Ye Shengtao's character of combining leniency with severity.
Teaching process:
First, guide the design.
"yet I feel the harmonious heart-beat of the Sacred Unicorn" is a famous saying of Tao Xingzhi, a famous people's educator, and it is also the best portrayal of his teaching career. Such an admirable educator is always reflecting on himself. What about us? Can you deeply understand your own advantages and disadvantages? What kind of people do we want to be? What do you want others to say about you when you leave? Today, let's follow Zhang Zhongxing's eyes and see Ye Shengtao in his eyes.
Second, preview the test.
1, fill in the blanks in the writer's works.
Mr. Ye Shengtao's Two or Three Events is selected from Reading. Ye Shengtao, formerly known as Ye, is a writer, editor and educator. His representative works are the novel Ni Huanzhi and the collection of fairy tales The Scarecrow. The author of this article is Zhang Zhongxing, a scholar and essayist. Representative works include the attached manuscript "Negative Xuan Suo Hua" and so on.
2. Pay attention to the following words.
Shuài) Unfamiliar with (sh) Business Judgment (zhuó) Serious (kūn)
For example, (pü rú) hazy (lóng) tedious (zhuì) procrastination (tà).
Yi (tuǒti) teaches people tirelessly (huìjuàn) and is not ashamed to ask questions (chǐ).
Do what you can (j ū ng j ū ncui) and go with the flow (diānpèiliúlí).
3. Explain the following words.
(1) 【 retouching 】 Modify and polish.
(2) Discuss and consider [business considerations].
(3) Take pains to teach people: teach people to be particularly patient and never get tired. Teaching: teaching.
(4) Not ashamed to ask questions: I am modest and eager to learn, and I don't mind asking people who are not as good as myself. People who are eager to learn. Shame: feel ashamed. Q: Q.
(5) Displacement: Due to famine or war, the flow is scattered. Describe life is hard, wandering around. Upset: Falling is a metaphor of poverty and frustration; Displacement: waves fall.
{6} Laugh: Answer with a smile. Metaphor doesn't care, it doesn't matter.
Third, analyze the text.
According to the text, discuss the following questions in groups.
1. What is the reason for the author to write this article? What materials did he mainly choose?
Clear:
Reason: Mr. Ye Shengtao died, and the author wrote a letter for him.
Material selection: related to the author, not seen or obviously seen in Gao Wen Dian Shu.
2. What qualities does this article describe about Mr. Ye Shengtao? What examples are used to illustrate?
Clear: Be kind to others and be strict with yourself.
Be kind to others: (1) Paragraph 3: Revise the article.
(2) The fourth natural stage: Farewell to Fujian.
(3) Paragraph 5: Reply
(4) Paragraph 6: Speak at the meeting.
Self-discipline: write, be a man, strive for perfection, set an example and do your best.
3. What words does the author use to express Mr. Ye Shengtao's language proposition? What is this style talking about? (Answer in the original words in the book)
Clear: "write words"
Simple and natural, clear and concise, meticulous and sincere, reading, reading smoothly, listening to the ear, just talking like words is not enough. It also pays special attention to "simplicity".
4. Why should we attach great importance to Mr. Ye Shengtao's language proposition, and from what aspects did the author discuss it?
Clear: (1) Historically, it is the general trend that vernacular Chinese replaces classical Chinese, which is the answer from theory to practice, so "it is not a problem".
(2) From the reality, Mr. Ye's thought of "writing ci" is timely.
Time syndrome: the style of writing that is divorced from spoken language or even deliberately away from spoken language is creating "new classical Chinese".
5. According to the understanding of the article, divide the article into different levels.
The first part (paragraph 1): Tell me the reasons and materials for writing this article.
The second part (the second paragraph): I have always written that Mr. Ye Shengtao has extraordinary moral character.
The third part (paragraphs 3-6): Describe Mr. Ye Shengtao's generous side in detail.
The fourth part (paragraph 7-10): describes in detail the other side of Mr. Ye Shengtao's life-strict self-discipline.
The fifth part (1 1 paragraph): learning to imitate Mr. Ye's moral character.
Fourth, taste the language
1. Read the evaluation sentence (argumentative essay)-experience its function in the structure
(1) Anyone who has some contacts with Mr. Ye Shengtao is moved by his profound treatment. (Introduction to the first aspect)
(2) Besides words, he is always generous in his daily communication.
(3) Being kind to others mentioned above is Mr. Ye Shengtao's generous side. He also has a strict side, which is self-discipline, including self-cultivation. (The transition from connection link to the second aspect always begins)
2, read the evaluation (discussion) sentence-experience the author's feelings.
(1) Read affectionate compliments:
I often say to others: "Ye Lao is someone else's teacher, because he is a conscientious gentleman who never tires of learning and never tires of teaching." (2) Among some of my predecessors and peers, Mr. Ye Shengtao should be said to be the first to attach importance to Chinese, strive for perfection, set an example and do his best.
(2) Read the deep homesickness:
I remember it was Ding Mao's New Year's Eve. When I learned the news at night, firecrackers exploded outside. Unexpectedly, this complex and loud voice also sent him away, and my heart was immediately shrouded in double sadness.
After reading the letter, I am also very sad, not because of my own drift from place to place, but because of the social phenomenon in the past ten years. There are fewer and fewer people like Mr. Ye Shengtao.
Mr. Ye Shengtao is gone, and I often think of his achievements.
(3) Understand the pains of Mr.
Anyone who holds a pen, especially one who intentionally or unintentionally writes inappropriately, should always think about Mr. Ye Shengtao's idea of writing ci and his profound efforts to put forward this idea.
-Writing articles in a style of writing, which emphasizes simplicity and strives for perfection in language.
3. Analyze the implicit and profound sentences in the text.
(1) I remember it was Ding Mao's New Year's Eve in the old calendar. When I learned the news at night, firecrackers exploded outside. Unexpectedly, this complex and loud voice sent him away, and my heart was immediately shrouded in double sadness.
The author learned that Ye Shengtao died on New Year's Eve and firecrackers sounded bad news. The music scene is called "double sadness" because it contrasts sadness and multiplies its sadness.
(2) For example, in recent years, many people have been vague in propaganda, and more people have followed the trend, so we will laugh at the view that simplicity is a good article.
"obscure propaganda" is the opposite of "conciseness", the former is to make people understand, and the latter is to make people understand. People who preach obscureness think that it is not clever writing to make others understand, so they will laugh at concise and eloquent writing. "Homeopathic obscurity" means not speculating about the terms, but just following your feelings. In fact, it is a casual writing attitude. Here the author implicitly and explicitly expressed.
4. Understand Ye Shengtao's thought of "writing ci" and further understand the language features of this article.
(1) What words did the author use to express Mr. Ye Shengtao's language ideas? What is this style talking about? (Answer in the original words in the book)
"Writing words" is simple and natural, clear and concise, meticulous and sincere, and it is not enough to read, read smoothly and sound pleasant. It also pays special attention to "simplicity".
(2) Mr. Ye Shengtao said: "When you write an article and read it in this room, you should let the people in that room listen. It is speaking, not reading the manuscript, and it is qualified. " How to understand this idea of "writing words"? (Exercise 3)
Ye Shengtao's thought of "writing words" emphasizes conciseness, fluency, popularity and simplicity of language.
(3) "The first time I met Mr. Ye Shengtao was in the early fifties, when I was compiling textbooks, and he took the lead in compiling textbooks. Before that, of course I knew him. It was when I was at school and I read a lot of new literature.
"I compile teaching materials, he leads the compilation of teaching materials", casual and cordial; "Of course I know him. It was when I was at school that I read many new literary works. " The three meanings are expressed in three short sentences, with a soothing tone and smooth reading, just like everyday language.
Fifth, the writing characteristics of this article.
1, in terms of emotional expression: being good at rationally controlling emotions and showing sincerity.
2. In the aspect of characterization, the narrative is carried out with specific typical examples, so as to see the big from the small and highlight the mental outlook of the characters.
3. In writing style: sincere attitude, plain narration, simple language, concise and organized oral English, but profound at the same time.
In this paper, the text is transformed into simplicity, such as "he is consistent and generous with others in his daily communication". Another example is "being kind to others mentioned above is Mr. Ye Shengtao's generous side." . He also has a strict side, that is, self-discipline. "These places are places where the meaning changes. Mr. Zhang Zhongxing completed the turning point in one sentence, which was concise and powerful, showing his capability.
Sixth, summarize the extension of the text.
1, summarizing the text
Through some typical examples, the author shows us a loyal minister, a gentleman with conscience, and a unique and valuable spiritual outlook worthy of a teacher. He is lenient with others and strict with himself. Mr. Ye Shengtao did it. Can we do that? Through the study of this paper, I hope that students can learn from Mr. Ye's character in their study and life, be generous to others and be strict with themselves.
2. Expansion and extension
Why are Ye Shengtao's articles so popular?
Dissemination: readability is a prominent feature of Ye Shengtao's works. Emphasize words. He believes that the article is written for readers, and at the same time he regards the article as a tool for readers to communicate with the author. At that time, the author faced a huge problem, which was that he did not have a good knowledge of writing, and his expression was inaccurate and ambiguous. So literary works are difficult to be accepted by the general public.
Seven, homework design:
1, find out the sentences that impress you or are difficult to understand in the article and make comments and excerpts beside them.
Design Description: Copying is a learning method, which refers to selectively copying the original text. This is consistent with the imitation stage of learning, but a certain choice is made on the basis of imitation. As a method of reading notes, it can collect a lot of relevant information and become the structure of knowledge. Abstraction focuses on abstraction, and abstraction focuses on understanding. This is the way to learn.