First, writing mood is the primary condition to determine the grade of your composition. No matter teachers or students, don't be afraid or disgusted when you see the composition, especially the composition. First of all, don't take the essay writing as a task as a burden. Writing with peace of mind and happiness is the concept of the new Chinese curriculum standard: "Let students like writing and be willing to express their thoughts." Teachers should seize the opportunity to show their tutoring ability and introduce their students. Students should take this opportunity to exercise themselves and sharpen their swords, not only to exercise their courage, but also to show themselves. So with such active thinking, composition becomes an interesting thing. Why not? Second, the examination of questions is the key to the success or failure of the composition. The general composition has a theme, which requires words, content, genre and a strong sense of the times. Therefore, it is very important to understand Chu's requirements for Zheng Wen. If the article you write doesn't meet the requirements of this composition at all, how can you push out your composition, even if it is touching and gorgeous? For example, the "Chinese Soul" reading essay activity in Nan 'an District has been held for four consecutive years, with different themes every year. There is "stressing civilization and doing honest things"; There are "being five good citizens", "striving for self-improvement" and "knowing the shame of glory and building a harmonious society". I tutor students every year and win prizes. The key first step is to examine the topic. To judge the topic, we should distinguish the writing genre of the article, which is narrative? Explanatory text? Prose? Argumentative essay? Poetry? Or unlimited genre. Pupils generally have more narratives, so who is the writer? Remember? Still writing the scenery? How many characters are limited? Are things limited? Is there a word count requirement? These need to be clear. Of course, we need to specify the delivery time, and we will complete and hand it in within the specified time. Third, the selection of materials is the guarantee of the success or failure of the composition. Facing an ordinary composition topic, how to make your composition catch the attention of the judges first? Then you have to work hard on the material selection. First of all, I think the selection angle is novel. The judges read too many old-fashioned articles, hoping to see something different, like the warmth of spring and the cool breeze of summer, which makes people feel happy. Last year, Chongqing held an essay on "Quality around me", and we found this topic difficult to grasp. Because of the wide range of composition writing, we primary school students don't have much practical experience. What should we do? If we only regard the topic as a rigid concept and treat it as a "monolithic and indivisible" whole, it is bound to be vague in content and loose in meaning. Therefore, the first requirement for writing a good composition on a topic is to be good at "choosing one point, not as good as the rest" in a large range, that is, writing only "one aspect" in a large range. Provide yourself with a good stage to give full play and concrete performance, so that you can write a good article with clear and concentrated ideas and concrete content of about 800 words. How to choose a novel theme? First of all, we should think about the same thing from different angles, seek various answers, and choose the latest and best angle to conceive. With the theme of "understanding the shame of glory and building a harmonious society", we can find the breakthrough point from all kinds of people in society. Teachers, students, family members and even strangers in life can do it. For example, materials can be selected from the perspectives of traffic safety, food safety and mental health. I know that students choose traffic safety. Because traffic safety has brought a serious impact on our society. Secondly, we should choose materials from our own unique life experiences, write what others have not written and establish what others have not established. Don't seek "everything", just "hit the nail on the head". So I instruct students to start small. From the point of view that ordinary people are not good at writing, it is the purpose of selecting materials that people have nothing but me and people have something new. In the article "Quality around me", if we choose the quality problems that many people in the society know to discuss, the writing skills of primary school students can't be achieved, so I use the strategy of "avoiding reality and being empty" to write the quality problems I encounter. The student in our class "Everything made by Y is goods" put forward his own statement from the painful personal experience brought by the inferior shoes he bought, which was well-founded and sincere, moved the judges and won the second prize in the city. For example, the essay "Welcome the Olympics safely, I will participate in traffic safety" jointly organized by the District Education Committee and the District Traffic Police Team. I instructed the students to choose the scene where their father was fined for violating the rules, and then through the cooperation of "I" and my father, my father changed his habit of violating the rules, and finally obeyed the traffic laws and greeted the Olympic Games safely. The theme is novel and simple, which is very eye-catching. Therefore, it was rated as the first in Nan 'an District. Fourth, writing skills are the highlight of composition. 1, a good topic is the key to attracting attention. Topic composition writing generally requires self-made topics. If there is no topic, then what to write and how to write can't be started. Therefore, writing a composition, like other non-propositional compositions, must first draw up a topic. With the topic, we can make up our minds, choose materials, determine the center of the composition and writing methods. The topic of topic composition must be accurate, eye-catching, vivid, novel and concise, so as to closely follow the content of the article, reveal the center of the article and reveal the style. As the saying goes, "A good composition is half the battle." With a good topic, just like having the key to open the door of inspiration, the judges and teachers can also see the content of the composition from the topic. For example, the recent essay on "Welcome the Olympics safely, traffic safety", the topic I proposed was "Dad's ticket", which attracted the judges and teachers and forced them to read it. "Be a civilized person and do honest things." I use foreigners' words to comment on China people. "Chongqing people are great!" For the topic, first of all, it conforms to the mindset of the judges. Of course, there are also good topics such as the beauty of Chongqing, the gesture of maternal love, and the teacher calling you mom, all of which have won good rankings. 2. The novel writing structure is also the highlight of the article. A straightforward article is good, but without ups and downs, it is easy to cause people's aesthetic fatigue. Therefore, paying attention to the ingenious arrangement of the article structure can add a lot of color to your article. Generally speaking, we can make some changes in the common writing structure. The application of interpolation and flashback can make your article ups and downs, and make the judges and teachers interested in enjoying the tortuous visual impact pleasure with you. "Dad's Ticket" uses the method of split-shot narration to replay several cases of dad's violation, which makes readers feel montage and is very unique. Accurately mastering the language is a necessary condition for your success. Use language appropriately according to the content of the article. If you write about landscapes, you can use more colorful languages; If you write about family, you can use simple and affectionate language; You can use sharp and humorous language to write about social phenomena. , depending on the content. "Dad's Ticket" is humorous in language, and often uses teasing language to write dad's "sin", which makes people believe it and criticizes dad's illegal behavior in laughter. The gesture of maternal love praised the mother's greatness with the language of affectionate shouting, which was touching to read. Of course, writing a good composition is not a day's work, and it is necessary to strengthen composition training at ordinary times. As the saying goes, "One minute on stage, ten years off stage". Lay a good composition foundation, practice more, read more, think more and study more. Only in this way can the inspiration of composition flash and you can have a unique masterpiece.
I'm going to take part in an essay contest, the topic of which is my growth story. How about this writing? Please help me correct it. Thank you!
Life is like a lonely boat in the sea, there are always ebbs and flows. At high tide, people are always happy. At low tide, some people feel dejected and pale; Some people cry loudly and miserably; Some people don't. When they are frustrated, the more frustrated and brave they are, they will always make a comeback with confidence in themselves. But seriously, I was just the former before that experience, but that experience changed me. In fourth grade, pride tripped me up. The sky was gray that day, and dark clouds were pulling around in the sky. My mood is easily influenced by the weather. Dark clouds always make people feel that every sign is good. The teacher announced the result and we sat quietly in our seats. The classroom is surprisingly quiet. Hip-hop classmates are like me at this time, with their hearts pounding and their hands cold. First place XXX, second place XXX, third place XXX, and then the teachers behind didn't look at the rankings. In short, it was the worst test I took. On the way home, I was empty-handed: I didn't win the prize, I didn't get an "A", I didn't ... I accidentally passed a mirror and looked at myself in the mirror, feeling like I knocked over a bottle of five flavors: melancholy, sadness, regret and disappointment ... You know, poor grades are a setback I have never experienced in my studies or even in my life. When I got home, my father already knew. He is a clever man. He knew that I did so well in the exam last time and it wouldn't be much better this time, so he left alone. Tears flooded my happy, childlike eyes. I want to save the day, but it's too late to regret it. For a moment, I felt as if I was going to stay at this moment and become history. I gave up on myself, playing games and soaking in forums on the computer, but I came across such a passage and pulled me out of my depression. That passage is still in my computer: Beethoven, one of the greatest musicians in Germany. Born in a civilian family in Bonn, Germany, he showed his musical talent very early. However, his life was bumpy: his mother remarried, but his father nailed it to the piano all day, beat and scolded him and oppressed him; 17 years old lost his mother; At the age of 26, he began to lose his hearing again, and he was completely deaf in his later years. He can only talk to people through a conversation book. It is conceivable that deafness is a blow to a musician, just like a speaker becoming dumb; The director became blind; Philosophers lose their wisdom. This reminds me of me. Didn't I just fail the exam? Besides, just because of pride, my ability is still there, so why bother? I left the computer angrily and went back to my desk. All this is so familiar, how can I give up! So, after I lost my reputation in Sun Shan, I plan to make a comeback. In those days, I witnessed my ability. I have a better answer.
Keeping a diary is the composition of today's story-telling competition!
Storytelling competition
Today, we held a story-telling contest. This competition is wonderful, which makes me gain a lot of knowledge. Now let me introduce you!
Before the competition, some students scrambled to read other people's story books, some students were making psychological preparations, and some students were anxious like ants on hot bricks. The field was in chaos until the teacher strode to the podium table and a group of lively ants turned into quiet trees. When the teacher said the rules, he only heard the teacher's comments and even the sound of flies flying by. Ah! Students are really serious!
The game has started. 1 classmate Li Zhiqun is confident and not nervous at all. It seems that the champion is already him. Zhang Xin, a classmate of No.2 Middle School, is my deskmate. I really hope he can become an excellent player. During the competition, some stories made people sad, some were touching and some made people laugh.
Those students who can't talk very well are very annoying. No.6 classmate Cai Jingyuan is not so good. As soon as I got on the stage, my feet kept shaking, and I couldn't even hold the book well, which made people very uncomfortable. He was tongue-tied and unprepared when he spoke, but he smiled when he stepped down, which showed that he was satisfied!
The most interesting person is Fu Siheng, the champion of our class. His actions are funny. He knocked on the table for a while, felt something from his pocket for a while, pointed to the amused students under the stage for a while, and pretended to fall down for a while, which made many students laugh their heads off.
And our runner-up, Wu Jiaying; This is also very good! Her voice is so bright, her eyes are so blinking, and she is eloquent and gushing.
Hu, our third runner-up, couldn't help laughing: "No.001,what's your name?" The audience left the chair, some ran to the podium to read his materials, some fell to the ground laughing, and some made faces to make him laugh. But Hu was poised, saying word by word, and even the teacher was amused.
Ah! This competition is really wonderful. I hope all the games in January are so wonderful!
(4) How to write your feelings after winning the essay contest?
I won the third prize in this story-telling competition, and I am very happy. When I was in kindergarten, I also won many prizes, including "Good Boy", "Little Expert in Painting and Calligraphy" and "Excellent Student in Go", but I don't think they are as good as this one, because I have carefully prepared this story-telling contest for two weeks, and I have prepared two stories, which are very well prepared. This award is also my first award since I went to primary school for a year, and I will be very happy in my heart.
At the same time, I feel a little shy. If my voice is louder in the competition and I add an expression to my story, I may have a good performance. However, my parents told me that nouns are not the main thing, but that I have worked hard.
It is best to have a ranking, and we must protect chí next time; There is no ranking, and it is not a matter of prosperity. Next time I bring it, I must have a normal mind ... if I have the opportunity next time, I will definitely work harder.
(5) Write a story-telling contest composition (seize the wonderful things to write)
Today is a memorable day, because I took part in a story-telling contest. Grandma and I went to the dressing room and put on light makeup. We came to the conference room and many judges appeared one after another. I also sat in my seat with a nervous heart. I cheer myself up in my heart: Peng Yue, you can do it, come on! Just then, my mother and mother suddenly came to cheer me on. The contestants came on stage to tell beautiful stories one by one, and it was my turn. I nervously went on stage to introduce myself, and then told the rehearsed story-Zaokeng. I think I spoke too fast. On second thought, forget it. Anyway, I've been practicing for a while and it's good. My story was over before I knew it. I listened to Mr. Wu's instruction and walked off the stage. I went to see Mr. Wu, who kindly said to me, You speak very well. I feel as sweet as honey and very happy. I really expect my grades to come down soon, and I hope good grades are just around the corner.
⑥ The writing format of the competition composition.
Styles can be roughly divided into two categories: literary and practical. Literature and art include: prose, poetry, novels, plays, fables, fairy tales, science fiction works, etc. Practical writing includes: narrative writing, argumentative writing, explanatory writing, practical writing (letters, notices, contracts, advertisements, diaries, diagnostic reports, dialogues, news reports, program records, etc.). ). Common styles are narrative, argumentative and prose. We can start from the following aspects:
1, drama sketch. Writing drama sketches needs to focus on sharp contradictions and conflicts, and the time and space of character activities need to be relatively concentrated and field.
The scenery hasn't changed much. There are not many characters, but they are vivid. Topics related to family life and school society can choose this style, such as "family", "family education" and "friendship".
2. Communication report. The third volume of the new junior middle school Chinese textbook published by People's Education Press has two units of composition training, which requires students to learn to write communication reports. Taking advantage of the authenticity of communication reports, the article is true, touching and more convincing. This form can be used in all articles praising the excellent qualities of characters and reporting their advanced deeds, avoiding the monotony of narration.
3. Fairy tales and fables. Fairy tales and fables, through imagination and association, form illusory images of things reflected in people's minds in real life and contain profound truth. This can avoid the simple narration of general narratives and the boring reasoning of general argumentative essays, giving people a refreshing feeling. This form can be used for composition topics related to personal ideological quality, values and philosophy of life.
4. Dialogue and interview. "Keep your word" can show a person's personality characteristics through character language, and at the same time, the dialogue is free and flexible, and the conversation content is all-encompassing. The common forms are interview question and answer, face-to-face communication and telephone conversation. Many excellent short stories are also optimistic about this form. Social hotspots and controversial issues in people's lives can be written in this form. Take "network" and "small but big" as topics.
5. A new story. This form is often based on a well-known person or event, and it is integrated into people's real life to achieve the purpose of reappearing life. Most of the articles are full of fun and satire, which makes readers educated and inspired by laughter.
6. Alternative style. Alternative styles are seldom used in our writing, such as notices, contracts, advertisements, diagnostic reports, instructions, electronic announcements, etc.
⑦ Write a composition on the topic that the parrot will take part in the story competition.
A yellow-green composite feather, a pair of handsome and light wings and a lovely red mouth make up a lively and clever parrot. This is a parrot in my family.
It's time to feed. I put the rice in a bowl in a cage. I saw that the parrot couldn't wait to put its mouth into the bowl, picked up the food and immediately took a bite, and the rice kept falling. How interesting! Parrots bite after bite, eat quickly, and finish a meal at once. After eating, it flies down to exercise. It flapped its wings and flew from one side of the cage to the other in the blink of an eye. I'm so happy!
It rained only a few times in Mao Mao, and the breeze blew the beautiful feathers of parrots. Really beautiful! I can't help touching it. It's so comfortable!
I usually teach it to talk, but it just says, "Hello, goodbye, hello, goodbye." I put my hand on her hip and said, "Well, I won't teach you." The parrot ignored it and amused itself in the cage. I was so angry that I left completely blind. The parrot cried happily when it saw me leave. ...
This parrot grew up with me every day and made me angry every day.
Write a story-telling contest composition, 39 1 word.
Today, we held a story-telling contest. This competition is wonderful, which makes me gain a lot of knowledge. Now let me introduce you!
Before the competition, some students scrambled to read other people's story books, some students were preparing themselves, and some students were as anxious as ants on hot bricks. The field was in chaos until the teacher strode to the podium table and a group of lively ants turned into quiet trees. When the teacher says the rules, he can only hear the teacher's comments and even the sound of flies flying by. Ah! Students are really serious!
The game has started. 1 classmate Li Zhiqun is confident and not nervous at all. It seems that the champion is already him. Zhang Xin, a classmate of No.2 Middle School, is my deskmate. I really hope he can become an excellent player and referee. In the competition, some stories made people sad, some moved, and some made people laugh.
Those students who can't speak very well are bored. The sixth classmate Cai Jingyuan is not so good. My feet have been shaking since I got on the stage, and I can't even hold the book well, which makes people feel uncomfortable. He was tongue-tied and unprepared when he spoke, but he smiled when he stepped down, which showed that he was very satisfied!
The most interesting person is Fu Siheng, the champion of our class. His actions are funny. Sometimes he knocked on the table, sometimes he felt something in his pocket, sometimes he pointed at the amused students in the audience, and sometimes he pretended to fall, so many students laughed their heads off.
And our runner-up, Wu Jiaying; This is also very good! Her voice is so bright, her eyes are so blinking, and she is eloquent and gushing.
Hu, our third runner-up, couldn't help laughing: "No.001,what's your name?" The audience left the chair, some ran to the podium to look at his materials, some fell to the ground laughing, and some made faces to make him laugh. But Hu was poised, sentence by sentence, and even the teacher was amused.
Ah! This competition is really wonderful. I hope all the games in January are so wonderful!
Zhuang Jianwei
Every five years.
Quanzhou zhengtong central primary school
Pet-name ruby xu fill in the story contest composition,
In a class, I copied the story-telling contest of our school. Every classroom is quiet. Everyone is guessing who will tell the story first, and they are waiting for new and unheard-of stories to be introduced. Colorful blackboard newspapers stand out in this atmosphere.
The theme of this story-telling competition is "kindness". Sun Siyao is the first storyteller in our class. She spoke vividly, as if it were something that happened around us, and let us be there one by one. The following students listen with their eyes wide open, which is more serious than listening to the teacher. It is still quiet outside, with occasional applause and cheers. In the realm of students' selflessness, Sun Siyao's story was finished, and we responded with warm applause and admiration. I can also see a trace of joy and excitement from her face.
The second one is Sun. She was so happy that we were all stunned. She talked about the most touching place, and my tears swirled in my eyes, as if I would fall down accidentally. I looked back and found that my classmates were also crying.
One by one, we sat there motionless as if we had been sedated, and listened carefully to the stories told by people on the podium, including Sun, Sun Siyao, Tao, etc ... Their stories were very attractive. Finally, Sun Siyao won the title of "Story King" in our class with 36 votes.
The class was over in a blink of an eye, and we reluctantly left school with our schoolbags on our backs. On the way, I was still unfinished and immersed in their stories.