The most taboo at the beginning is the sense of digression with a stroke of a pen, telling the marking teacher directly that the author has not carefully examined the meaning of the topic, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination. For example 1 Reminder of Language and Communication: "Look at the flowers, look at the clouds, look at the clouds. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; The fruit of autumn is full of gloom in winter. The four seasons cycle, Qiu Lai goes in winter, and everything in nature is beautiful. How can we expect early spring if we have not been baptized by severe winter? Our human society is also like nature. Without language connection and the same lifestyle, how can we connect the world into a whole and build a bridge of communication? " The metaphor at the beginning is inappropriate, and the previous metaphor part does not pave the way for the similarities. Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where is the relationship between "green dress" and "bumper harvest", "fruit" and "bleak"? In particular, the rhetorical question "How can we hope for early spring without the baptism of severe winter" has nothing to do with the topic. Example 2 "Spiritual interaction": "Trees never laugh at the weakness of grass, which, though weak, adds green to the grassland; Peony never laughs at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth. Trees and grass, peony and wildflowers can live in harmony because they have a common language, mutual communication and spiritual interaction. " When we approached the topic from the beginning, we failed to find the similarities, which seemed far-fetched. Example 3 "Language and Communication": Language is a white cloud, while communication is a cloud. Language is a flower, and communication is an ocean of flowers. "At the beginning,' language' and' communication' were regarded as the relationship between individuals and the whole, but they failed to understand the relationship between them. All the above three situations use metaphors to increase literary talent, which is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not accurately grasp the meaning of the topic, he will take a wrong turn at the beginning, which will seriously affect his score. The following example is more comparative. Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth. Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences. How can we accurately express the language and promote the success of communication? " Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, first ask for accuracy, and then ask for image. There are many ways to open it. 1. Quote the famous saying ① Ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His problem can be said to be eternal How many people have lingered on this question for many years, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price? They are different. Shi said, "Love is a tool ..." ("What is love in the world?" In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money, and what belongs to me belongs to everyone." In a cross-century prison, a thief began his life. Everyone's is mine "(The Sage and the Thief) The master of aesthetics Rodin once said:" Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say, "The answer is universal. For our brain, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of angle. "Many times, we are all confused. How to go has become a mystery in my heart, and I often hesitate. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you a chance of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I dared to write to disturb you, not only to extend my sincere greetings to you, but also to wait for your advice with several difficult problems. ("A Letter to Confucius") 2 The hateful standard answer: I am really indignant when I see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answer is colorful, but you just happened. Because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. These are your three major crimes: ... (A Letter to the Standard Answer) 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1), "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time. "At the beginning, the era of Wei Shuwu's confrontation no longer exists. A river of water does not return, and the waves washed away all the heroes of the past. The world has become a "Sima" world. The Juyi Hall in the Water Margin is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred people and eight people gathered here, and everyone was arguing. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to judge the hero who killed the tiger recently. This honorary title is so great that whoever wins can sit in the second place of Liang Shanbo. So many heroes gathered here and argued endlessly. Who is the hero who killed the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric at the beginning can easily express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, in 2002, the beginning of "Choice of the Mind" wrote: If you choose the fin, you will kiss the vast blue sea; If you choose quadrupeds, you will appreciate the vast green forests, but my choice is cages. "Starting with parallelism, the sentence pattern is neat, the language is sonorous, and the comparison is made before and after. It not only points out the theme, but also sets up suspense to promote people to enjoy reading. In addition, the article "Honesty-Forever Green Card" written by 200 1 College Entrance Examination begins like this: "Honesty is like the first sunshine in spring. Such as a sweet watermelon in summer, contained in the mouth, sweet in the heart; For example, the autumn wind sent a fiery maple leaf from a distance, which attracted infinite attention; Like snowflakes flying in winter, the wheat field is covered with thick quilts. "In the beginning, people used metaphors and parallelism to describe the value and significance of honesty and express their desire for honesty. 5. Lyric method, that is, directly pour out your true feelings at the beginning of the article to point out the main idea of the article. There are three common lyric ways: hypothetical lyric, comparative lyric and comparative lyric. For example, 200 1 college entrance examination masterpiece. If life is a sailboat, then honesty is an indispensable backpack that will accompany you all your life. " The author uses metaphors and contrasts to illustrate the importance of honesty. For example, the excellent composition "Footprints of Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with: "What suddenly crossed my mind and left a flash of light? What is it, quietly watering the heart and cultivating sweet memories? What gently taps the soul and brings eternal beauty? What makes your heart, my heart and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is a shocking choice, that is, a difficult and beautiful choice again and again, that is, a song of one's own choice is sung first ... "The four parallel questions at the beginning cause people to think deeply, expressing the value and significance of choice to life, thus expressing the author's feelings. Step 6 cut to the chase. Because this kind of opening is straightforward, you can go straight to the subject or suddenly enter the narrative scene. So it is suitable for all styles. For example, in 2002, the excellent composition "Choosing the Chinese Soul" in the college entrance examination began with "looking through the past history and looking for the choice of the soul without regret". There are subtitles below: 1, hero's choice. 2, the choice of the king. 3, the choice of scientists. In this way, the first few words are directly introduced into the following. For example, the excellent composition "Wisdom and Thought-My Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with the following words: "After completing my secondary school studies, I received the enrollment brochures of three universities, and I must make a sacred choice." Here is a general introduction on how to choose between "Fortune University", "Power University" and "Smart University". 7. Describe the method. Descriptive method is to use some rhetoric or some descriptive technique to render and contrast the atmosphere. This method is particularly effective for narratives, essays and argumentations. For example, the article "The Choice of Zhaojun", an excellent composition in the 2002 college entrance examination, begins like this: "Deep walls, bright-eyed ladies-in-waiting, silent butterflies, lazy dressing, like the wheels of the imperial court, slowly run over Zhaojun's heart." At the beginning of the article, four formal phrases are used. The image accurately reveals the personality characteristics of the characters, and renders and sets off Zhao Jun's wise spiritual choice below, which makes the description at the beginning and the events in the text have a good contrast. Another example is the ethnic composition of 1997. Someone wrote in the article "White Clouds, Water Drops": "There is a white cloud floating in the blue sky, and there are small water drops in the white cloud. Who let the white clouds float high? It is those small water droplets, you hold me, I hold you, and * * * jointly created that freedom and elegance. " The article begins with a metaphor, personifying each other and asking questions, which is very poetic. For the following people, our society is a white cloud, and every member is a molecule in the white cloud, which inspires us to create a beautiful environment together. 8. Carry out the topic method. This is the beginning of the article. Make reasonable imagination and extension. This kind of undertaking can continue from the end of the topic background, or it can start from the raw materials. For example, 200 1' s excellent composition "Honest Interview" wrote at the beginning: "It's boring,' honesty' has always been annoying, so I sigh from time to time. Why did you abandon me? Is it useless for me to follow the times? No, I'm going to find my good friends and let them judge! " Subsequently, the article compiles the story of "sincerity" visiting "money", revealing that there are a lot of money transactions, power and money transactions in real life, and even "literary and money transactions" have appeared in civilized pure cultural land. The ingenious design at the beginning makes a scientific and detailed introduction to the following story. 9. The way people appear. When writing a narrative, in order to attract readers, sometimes close-ups can be used to make the characters self. The purpose of attracting readers' attention. For example, the article "Can you dislike me-Honesty and Self-report" at the beginning of the 200 1 Excellent College Entrance Examination wrote: "My name is honesty, and I don't cheat. I am born with the universe, relying on people's hearts, can trace back to ancient times, can shine today, can help diplomacy, and can be close to friends. " At the beginning of the article, I volunteered to tell my surname and origin. It seems isolated from the world. What's new in this city has long been old news. This kind of life really needs to change. Yugong thinks: We must find ways to move Taihang Mountain and Wuwangshan Mountain. (The Story of New Gong Yu and Zhizuo) Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to meet the needs of the times, our school will carry out quality education in an all-round way and all students will be taught." Training fee, 2000 yuan; Sponsorship fee, 1.5 million yuan. "(Almighty School) 1 1. Clever use of inscriptions revealing the theme ① There are no majestic trees, but there can be green grass; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! Inscription Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl hair and gentle and elegant dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as the future Duncan of China ... However, it was all over and fate left her in a wheelchair forever. Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times? If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your honesty, you will be almost penniless. The inscription "Honesty" is also true. Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has soaked many people's blood and tears. (Who is praising the emperor's new clothes) 12. Using the form of solving problems skillfully once a friend gave me such a question: A. A piece of pure white feather falls leisurely under the shining golden sunshine. B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool. A meteor flashed by in the dark blue sky. D. A drop of crystal dew slipped quietly on the green grass tip. After reading this question, I suddenly froze and changed a lot. The answer is colorful. Nietzsche thought: "He who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms and stones together, but not disgusting, is the happiest." However, the Stoicism believes that "having unlimited wealth and power and being able to be surprised is the real happiness." Archimedes said, "Give me a fulcrum. I said, "Give me a fulcrum, and I can support my soul!" " (Give the Soul a Fulcrum) 14. Clever use of poetry to convey feelings (1) opens the Tang and Song poems, and countless poems are regarded as parting poems. Wang Bozhuang sang loudly: Why linger at the fork in the road, children * * * touch towels. Liu Yongze is sad: Where will you wake up tonight? In a word, the breeze in Yang Liuan is withered, and that in Qian Fan in Jiangyan is: those who are ecstatic do nothing else. Some people beat their chests and feet: how can they bear to whip in a hurry! There is a whisper from Wang Guozhen today: Life is a hundred years, and it is not worth looking back. No matter where you are, you just pray like a boat. Xi Murong's gentle warning came: If parting can remind us of the details we neglected when we got together, is it really bad to leave? All these feelings are really beautiful. Reciting the feelings of different times and different lives will give you unexpected gains. Vientiane insists on itself in life. What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first light that rises on the horizon. Beauty is a maple leaf hotter than fire in autumn, a red-crowned crane flying on the beach at dusk, and a sika deer flying on the grassland ... Baum Tong Jia agreed with me and added: "Beauty is perceptual knowledge, and studying aesthetics is the science of studying perceptual knowledge." But Kant glared at me angrily and said, "One-sided, beauty is a purely subjective feeling of human beings. It has nothing to do with the matter itself. I advise you to take a look at my judgment and criticism. " I humbly and carefully studied his aesthetic works on emotion. When I was complacent about my mystery, Hegel poured cold water on me: "No, beauty should be the externalization of human nature." Then, he proudly talked about his own aesthetic theory. Just when my second monk was puzzled, Marx whispered beside me, "Don't listen to him. He does everything upside down, regardless of right and wrong. You must not fall into the quagmire of idealism. Beauty should actually be the unity of human nature and free form. " What is beauty? I decided to leave. Can't agree?